That was a really good story!! I'm so glad you didn't add the part before Voldermort comes to kill them, that usually makes me sad. Overall it was really good and I enjoyed it. But since it was a one-shot, how come it says its not completed?? Anyways, *10*
That was so good! It was really well written, but I can't believe that Tonks pulled out her hair. *10*
I love this chapter!! But I thought that Hermione was a little out-of-character when she said, “Actually, I changed my mind. I think I should talk. Apparently you didn’t get the chit, but Ron Weasley is off-limits. If you don’t want to suffer great personal injury, you’ll stay away from him.” That to me is very NOT Hermione. Other then that, I love the concept of this story with the letters. Okay, so this is favorite quote:“Here’s a Sickle. See if you can buy yourself a clue.” I love it! Its very bitchy which is awesome. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: There is a reason for most of the OOCness in this chapter. (The reason for Ron acting OOC is a lot more obvious, but it'll come out later why Hermione was acting a little different.) Thanks for the review, I really like this chapter, too!
I absoultely loved it!!! The letters were really cute, but the chapter was kind of short, though. I don't think Ron would be jealous of Harry because Hermione always kisses Harry's cheek and stuff, and they have never really hooked up, but maybe its because he is just starting to like her. Good job, and update soon!!
Author's Response: Chapter 2 is much longer, so stay tuned. Every time Hermione shows affection for Harry, Ron has seemed upset in the books, so I think it makes sense. Thanks for the review!
That was so sweet. I liked that the rhyming wasn't weird or didn't make sense.
Author's Response: Thank you....
I'm the first to review!! I thought that this story really good and well-written. I'm not really into historical fics, but this one was quite enjoyable. The only thing I was wondering about was the locket. You wrote that it was gold, but I always thought it was silver. Anyways, great job and I hope for an update!
1st story in a series of Hermione/Draco one-shots (Check out my author page for more information)
A great fic! It was funny from the beginning to the end. This is a great Draco/Hermione fic! *10*
Author's Response: Thanks!
That was really sweet!! I really liked the beginning and the end, but the middle part kind of confused me. Overall, I really enjoyed it. It was a really good one-shot.
wow...that whole scene with Pansy and Draco was...wow. Anyways, I really liked this, especially how detailed it was. I never thought much about Draco/Pansy fics. To me, this was a little out of character. I felt that Pansy was kind of like Hermione for some reason, and Malfoy was too Mr. Suave, but other than that, I really enjoyed it. I thought the ending was awesome, too. Snape with Madame Pomfrey. Well, this was a great fic, a little long, but great.
Author's Response: Thanks for stopping by, spilled ink. Glad you liked the “wow scene.” After HBP, I realized that Draco and Pansy are right for one another. Draco's never going to slum it with a Mudblood or a blood-traitor, in my opinion. (I do adore HG and GW--just so you know.) I hope I’ve convinced you a little as well. I think the Wizarding society matures faster in a lot of ways than Muggles. They start their careers at 17 or 18, and they often marry earlier also. Draco, especially, has had no choice but to grow up this year--fast. He has to be thinking about his future or lack of it. He has to step up now and he wants something to believe in. I see my Pansy character as strong, intelligent, and crafty, but still a pure-blood snob. There's nothing in canon to refute that or that she is attractive. I was tired of seeing her depicted as a love sick Cruppy, ugly or a tremendous “pain.” She’s a Slytherin after all…clever and cunning. And remember, we only see her though Harry's eyes in the books. Did you read my author's notes? I mentioned something about Experienced!Draco. *sniggers* I’m happy your overall impression was good! Thanks for reviewing. I hope you’ll give Part II of the Trilogy a read, when it posts.
oh, I forgot to say that I love that song "Somewhere Only We Know" by Keane. I'm not sure if thats how you got the title, but I loved the song. Well, great job, again!
Author's Response: Yes, you are correct! Please see my author's notes for more info.
I like this story. I think Malfoy was a little OC when he thanked Hermione, warned her not to touch the necklace, and touch or try to save her. To me, Malfoy would never touch Hermione because she is a "Mudblood", but other than that, I think that this story is good.
that was really good!!! I loved the interview idea and the funny comments Rita made. The Polyjuice potion idea made me laugh because of the hilarity and insanity of it. Awesome job!
Author's Response: Reviewing two stories, spilled ink? Awesome! I tried to come up with something so silly, it just might work to defeat Voldie. I’m sure the sight would freak him out. LOL! Thank you for seeking out this fic and reviewing!
Awesome chapter! It was a little short, though, but I loved it. Very interesting, even though I think that R.A.B. is Regulus and not a new character. Your colorful summary attracted me towards your fic, and I love the little picture. I thought that MNFF didn't allow that...?? Well, I hope for an update.
Author's Response: thanks for the review...I'll try to make future chapters a bit longer. I'm not sure about the pic, it says that the tag is allowed, but I'll remove it anyone asks me to.
That was really good. Contest fics are always fun to read, and yours was really well-written. Your details were amazing; it was like I was there with the trio. But the only thing that I had a problem with was how easily Harry, Ron, and Hermione got the Horcrux. When DUmbledore and Harry went to get the locket, they had a really hard time. Dumbledore had to give his blood, drink from the basin, and all this other stuff, while the trio only pushed a stone and did some hovering. I still enjoyed it though. *10*
I love this!! Although it was a one-shot (right?) it was very smooth and descriptive, but not to the point where I was bored of all the details. I think that this pairing would be sooo cute, but I really never imagined Goyle talking...ever. I also loved how there wasn't this big thing on their romantic feelings, but it was more on a new friendship. *10*
Author's Response: Thank you!
I love the description, but it all seemed really sudden. I'd like to see more of how Draco developed an attraction to Ginny.
Author's Response: Thank you, I did think about how short it was, but it was the a snippet of the scene of the time there relationship started and the doubts that Ginny still has. I will hopefully write a chaptered fic about Draco and Ginny, but I am not sure yet. Thank you again.