It was cute, but it should have been longer.
I really like the story, but the chapters are a little short, but why would Harry write down the prophecy? What if Voldermort got it somehow??
I loved this story! It was such a great Ron/Hermione fic, and I usually don't find good Ron/Hermione fics. I loved it when Hermione said, “Run, biotches. RUN!” That was pure genius.
Author's Response: hahaha, yeah, classic, wasn't that line? it's an official joke between me and some of my friends.
I love this story!!! Someone mentioned this story on the forum, and so I decided to read it. I love the plot, especially Hermione marrying Krum because I feel that it adds to the drama. This chapter was really good and kind of addicting. The Dark Mark carved on Emmeline's back kind of freaked me out...a lot, but in a goog way. A part of me hopes Ron just grabs Hermione and kisses her, but I know its going to be a lot more complicated than that. I'm kind of wondering about Kingsley and whether he'll die or get captured. Anyways, great chapter!! *10*
Author's Response: Cheers spilled Ink! Was someone really talking about this in the Forums?!!! Sorry to everyone for the long wait between updates but I'm hoping to have chapter 10 up in the next 2/3 weeks! Oh, and just so you all know, I'm writing this note in 'The Elephant House' In Edinburgh where JKR wrote most of philosopher's stone!!! (I'm such a nerd!).
That was a really good first chapter, and maybe in the end Harry won't die. I really like this story, and I'm going to read the other chapters. *10*
I thought that Bridget would leave...like forever, and I feel bad for Ginny. Another great chapter.
Awesome story!! Can't wait for the next update!
It was short, but really good!!
That was so hilarious!! *laughs so hard and falls to the floor* I loved that 'Week One, Week Two' thing, and when I thought he actually was going to stop pranking, a quill goes up Snape's nose. It was brilliant. *10*
lol...that was hilarious! I loved the blow up doll, and their little idea of kidnapping Addison, too. Great job! *10*
I loved this poem or song. I can't write poems because I'm not very...poemy. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks. Some of us can just write better than we can rhyme ... The fact that you have a story posted here is already something ... (The mods are quite strict afterall). Just thought I could offer a bit of an assist, since the TOS did state we can't copy straight out of JK Rowling which includes the Sorting Hat Song. Hope you'll find this useful ^_^
This was a great poem!! You really got the essence of the dementor without really explaining its looks. Keep up the good work!
That was so hilarious!! I seriously laughed out loud when I read it, and I laughed especially hard when Dudley says, "Well, Barbie, I thought we'd go to Subway. I'm on the Jared Subway diet. Gotta watch my manly figure."
"Big D, let's walk to dinner so I can watch your muscles ripple in the moonlight!" *10*
Author's Response: Thanks for checking out one of my fics spilled ink! Also, thanks for all of the really cool name banners!
I just had to read it again. It was even funnier the second time, and I made my brother read it. He loved it, too. *10*
That was really good. It got kind of confusing though, with all the actions. I liked the bit with the 'blabbers' because thats all I hear when Marge is talking. I totally understand where your coming from with that whole 'Lumos Maxima' thing, and the bit when you can't use magic out of school. I was like, "What the hell?" when I saw the movie. Anyways, keep up the good work!
Author's Response: It got confusing? Oh boy... Do you have any suggestions on how I could make it less confusing for you?
That was good, but I thought it was a bit short though.
That was a really good story!! I'm so glad you didn't add the part before Voldermort comes to kill them, that usually makes me sad. Overall it was really good and I enjoyed it. But since it was a one-shot, how come it says its not completed?? Anyways, *10*
That was so good! It was really well written, but I can't believe that Tonks pulled out her hair. *10*
I love this chapter!! But I thought that Hermione was a little out-of-character when she said, “Actually, I changed my mind. I think I should talk. Apparently you didn’t get the chit, but Ron Weasley is off-limits. If you don’t want to suffer great personal injury, you’ll stay away from him.” That to me is very NOT Hermione. Other then that, I love the concept of this story with the letters. Okay, so this is favorite quote:“Here’s a Sickle. See if you can buy yourself a clue.” I love it! Its very bitchy which is awesome. Hope you update soon!
Author's Response: There is a reason for most of the OOCness in this chapter. (The reason for Ron acting OOC is a lot more obvious, but it'll come out later why Hermione was acting a little different.) Thanks for the review, I really like this chapter, too!
I absoultely loved it!!! The letters were really cute, but the chapter was kind of short, though. I don't think Ron would be jealous of Harry because Hermione always kisses Harry's cheek and stuff, and they have never really hooked up, but maybe its because he is just starting to like her. Good job, and update soon!!
Author's Response: Chapter 2 is much longer, so stay tuned. Every time Hermione shows affection for Harry, Ron has seemed upset in the books, so I think it makes sense. Thanks for the review!