awsome story very good plot...keep writing!
Author's Response: Aww thank you! I really appreciate that! If you want to read the final chapters of this story, they can be found on www.harrypotterfanfiction.com. Thanks so much for reviewing!
wow excellant job with this!...there's only one thing i don't get, if sirius already told remus about the switch then why did remus seemed all surprised about it at the shrieking shack? excellant story!!
i loved this story and it's great because ron and harry hardly ever get into fights...all friends have fights! so i love that they have one. keep updating! i love the blurting of hermione imagened me starkers! lol love it
wow,this was such a great story. im so sad that ots over:( it was great to read the list all the way through at the endthanks for putting that in, i was hoping you would. great job.
loved it!!!! how about...not allowed to host a school-wide burping contest during dumbledores speach? wanna use it? keep writing!!
wow this is an excellant story!!! please don'y end it anytime soon! i love sirius' list it is awsome!keep it up!
omg this is such a great story...due to the fact that i started reading this fic when there were already 30 chapter i am only this far so far. when the ministry walked into the howling, i literally gasped i was so shocked...this is an amazing story...i have to say i didnt like it at first...i read part of the first chapter and didn't give it a second chance but im glad i did in the end!!!!! keep writing!!!
wow, another great chapter!! you're such a great writer, and this is an awesome story!! please write more soon! thanks for updating quickly!
this is a great chapter and story!!!!!!! i was so sad/angry/mad/squirmy at the end of the chapter before it!!!!! for a minute i thought it meant that remus was giving into the wolf then i re-read and realized it meant he was gonna die!!!!! both endings scared me!!!!! then he was alive and sane and i started breathing again!!!!!i dont kno if this is the end of the story or not but i hope not!!!!!!! keep up the great work!!!!
wow awesome chapter! i am just so curious to know what remus will decide! the best choice for him would be to decline, but knowing you, he will probably accept. cant wait to see what kane is up to! o and i love tonks' innocent smile-'some careless person left him on the floor, dark mark exposed with a bottle of veritaserum beside him' love it ;)
this is such a great chapter. i love this story...i knew you would make remus go to kane's thing. and, knowing you, something is going to happen! this is a great story, please update it soon! it's great how you can put humor into a serious story, i love it. great job, keep it up!
loved it as usual!! the article sounded exactly like how rita writes and the mental images were helarious;) keep it up~!!!!!!!
wow, did you ever suceed. this was, i think, my favourite chapter to date. you made remus exactly what he should have been in that situation. calm, doubtful, angry. everything he should have been. he went through his emotions perfectly, being in control and out. letting kane's words get to him, then brushing them off. and he came out of it all with the upper hand, which as you said, was his strngth. he won, not in physical battle, but in the battle of emotions. very well done, it was all i could have ever hoped for in this chapter.
wow. this was the perfect ending to the perfect story. it was great closure to the story, everything fit together. i read too many stories where, at the end of the story, they either over-explain everything or leave many things unfinished. you did neither of these things. i love how you gently finished the story and made it all fit together at the end- the story seemed perfectly finished. this was he best story i have ever read on fanfiction. it was so well written with so much detail, it was amazing. you portrayed your characters so well and made everything so fitting to them. excellant job you are truly a great author.
wow awesome story!! i loved lily's trick!! great job.
Tears came to my eyes as I read this story. You captured Remus's feelings and made me feel them to. I felt his sorrow and love and everything he wished he could, but could not do. You made me think that he and lily belonged together. You made me cry when he was alone- she was dead. He was left with no one, no friends. And he longed to see her one more time. This was deeper than any story I have ever read. It brought out feelings and tears. I am at a loss for words.
aww so sweet!! and that song fit so0o0o00o0o0o0 well!!! it was amazing how well it suited james and what he went through for lily. it was just so cute. loved it.
Author's Response: <3 I really like this story myself. I'm glad you enjoyed it! thanx for the review!
omg this helarious!!!!!!!i usually dont like stories without plot but this one is great!!!!!
ooh, i love this story, its really good!! keep it up!
Author's Response: woohoo! a new review! thank you, i'm glad you like it. ~wonder~
Lily Evans and James Potter share absolutely nothing in common, not even their feelings for each other. Lily, perceived as a ‘model student,’ detests the handsome, popular, Quidditch star James, who she thinks to be something of a git. James, on the contrary, has been infatuated with Lily for years, and has let her and the whole school know it.
As time progresses into Voldemort’s ‘reign of terror,’ the two have to learn to trust, tolerate, and love each other.
Please note, this story is incomplete, and will likely remain so for a long time. I apologize!
love it! keep it up! can my name be in the story? Marilyn. plz?(puppy face) thnx
Author's Response: Hm, I've never been asked that before xD Eh, sure, why not? xD Thanks for the review :)