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Temporary by Queen of Serpents
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 1600]

Summary:

Hermione knew this thing she had with Malfoy was purely physical. She knew she shouldn't have fallen in love with him. And she knew that when he said he loved her too, a dozen misfortunes would befall them. Yet they both did admit it and just when she thought this temporary relationship might just last, she was left all alone and he?...Well he became one of Them.

RUNNER-UP in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards for "The Where Did That Come From Award" (Best Twists and Turns) and WINNER in the He Had it Coming Awards.



~COMPLETED STORY~

I also want to add that all this support you all have given me is just fabulous. Thanks a lot. I love you guys!





Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 87548 Chapters: 30 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/04 Updated: 07/13/05


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 02/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Temporary

i just read it all in one sitting. F'CKING AWESOME XD

 

The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5423]

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 154682 Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Published:
01/17/05 Updated: 05/22/06


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 03/02/09 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26- Of Vodka and Chocolate Cake

awesome chapter

 
Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 03/03/09 Title: Chapter 38: Chapter 38- Pushing the Right Buttons

PLEASE PLEASE FINISH THIS STORY! please

 

Diary of a Little Girl by whittyleah
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Eleven-year-old Samara is about to start school at Hogwarts. Her father gives her a diary to write down her thoughts and feelings in.



June/July monthly submission to challenge one by Whittyleah of Gryffindor house.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1151 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/19/06 Updated: 07/21/06


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 11/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Diary

my review is so late!, i only just read the story now and it was so good!, espicially how Samara was a Snape. I think you did a great job with getting the perpective and writing as an eleven year old. That was a great story/diary entry.

-Annabella

Author's Response: Thank you. :D

 
Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 11/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Dear Diary

perspective***

Author's Response: Thank you again. XD

 

A Destiny in Time by Gmariam
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 88]

Summary: Past Featured StoryHarry Potter has fulfilled his destiny, and survived his final confrontation with Voldemort; the Dark Lord has been vanquished, but at a terrible price. Dozens are dead, including some of those closest to Harry, and he blames only himself for failing them. Desperate, he returns to Hogwarts hoping to change what has happened and save those he loves. In doing so he unknowingly saves himself, but the consequences require great sacrifice.



This short story is now complete. It begins on the battlefield just after Harry’s duel with Voldemort, and follows Harry as he tries desperately to right the mistakes of the past, only to rewrite his own future.



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 16366 Chapters: 6 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/09/06 Updated: 11/15/06


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 11/06/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Farewell

omg!!!! this story was crazily beautiful!! it reduced me to tears, the ending was beautiful, i loved it. This story was great!

-Annabella

Author's Response: Thank you so much, I'm so glad you enjoyed this story (even though it seems to make everyone cry!) I really appreciate the great review! ~Gina :)

 

Summary: [Year 2: Complete] Its Harry’s second year as a Slytherin, and the Chamber of Secrets has been opened. The Heir of Slytherin is out there somewhere, having students petrified left and right, and by the end of the year someone will die from Slytherin’s horrible beast. But this time, Harry's the one with Riddle's diary.

How will Harry’s years at Hogwarts turn out, now that he's a Slytherin? Will he turn to the Dark Arts and be a follower of Voldemort? Or will he kill Voldemort, or die trying, after he learns of the prophecy? Will Harry's choices lead him down a different road? Follow and you will see...

“What is a diary as a rule? A document useful to the person who keeps it, dull to the contemporary who reads it, invaluable to the student, centuries afterwards, who treasures it.” –Ellen Terry

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 127055 Chapters: 44 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/23/06 Updated: 12/31/07


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 39: Eyes That Kill

i love this story, please keep writing, i espicially can't wait for harry's 3rd year with sirius! i wonder how your going to do the whole shreaking shak scene? please please get Draco to go with harry,ron,hermione!!!

Anyway great chapter as were all the other ones! can't wait for next sequal!!

Author's Response: The Shrieking Shack scene is very, very different!! So different that you\'ll be like \"what the hell is going on?\" but in a good, surprised way!! Thanks!!! ~Sara

 

Smells Like Sirius Black by Soap
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 874]

Summary: Hermione Granger finds herself in an unusual place, an unusual time for that matter. Through an unintentional mishap, she is tossed right into the mix with James Potter, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew, and Sirius Black. Will she make it back to her own time without altering the future irreparably? And what will happen when she returns?




Sirius/Hermione


Thanks to everyone who nominated this story for a Quicksilver Quill, and congratulations to the winners!!

Categories: Hermione/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 41668 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/31/07 Updated: 05/11/07


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 11/30/08 Title: Chapter 21: Wedding Bells

love it!

 

To Achieve Perfection by emmaholloway
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 122]

Summary: All her life Ginny has tried to live up to the expectations set by those around her, and more importantly herself. When Harry breaks up with her Ginny thinks she realises what she must do to acheive this perfection but this soon turns into an obsession she can't escape.



Warning: The main focus of this Story is on the effects of an eating disorder, if you get easily upset by such issues I suggest you dont read.



Disclaimer: All characters and plots ect recognised as belonging to JK Rowling do belong to her and I give her full credit.
*Chapters 1 and 2 have been edited*

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mental Disorders, Self Injury, Substance Abuse

Word count: 18278 Chapters: 9 Completed: No
Published:
06/02/07 Updated: 04/21/08


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 11/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Realising the truth

OooOo i like!! this chapter was really good as were all the other ones, i really like this story because it's different than the others. Anyway please don't stop writting, this stories great!

Author's Response: thank yoooooooou. And don\'t worry. I have every intention of continuing with this story. I\'ve even written out a plan, which I have never done before. emma x x x

 
Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 9: A Perfect Waste

hmmm ok first of all, you said Ginny was never fat. Now it's been five months of constant starvation and you actually have her playing Quidditch? running around. I love the concept of this story but you have to follow the facts by now Ginny would probably be 55 pounds if 5 months ago before she started Hogwarts she was 100. Possibly even lower. She should have no energy, her friends should be more confronting aswell as that if you want to write a story as serious is this please go more in depth. I was practically frowning the whole time reading this. You assumptions are not correct, you have jumped to quickly from each chapter. I expect you to take time posting for great result, but this was short and sloppy. Sorry to sound harsh but this is giving a complete false statement of people who have suffered from Anorexia Nervosa.

Please do some research before you post again, i'm sure your next will chapter will be great once you know the few crucial facts you've left out. Again sorry to sound harsh, but you've made too many mistakes for my liking. The most crucial being Ginny's anorexia not even developing. You tried to cover this up with one sentence of Ginny "always knowing" then it was bang, i'm starving myself. That would have worked but Ginny wouldn't have been able to immediately cut out all food, she would need a while, she would have had a few slips.

*sigh* i really don't want it to sound like i'm flaming this story, but it's just with a few corrections it can be brilliant. The concept is amazing and i'm excited for this story, just please do some research.

Author's Response: No you are absolutely right. I messed up at the beginning, and should have spent much longer on Ginny slowly developing anorexia but I was too excited about my writing and didn\'t really stop to think about how it would all work out and now I\'m stuck because the position Ginny would be in in reality does not work in my storyline. I have considered throwing in a couple of binges to fatten her up.... but that felt cruel and I don\'t think Ginny\'s character would allow spontaneous binges as this point anyway. Maybe I should rewrite it and inject some slip ups in earlier on...?\r\n\r\nBelieve me the problem isn\'t research, it may not appear it but I actually do know what I am talking about from a more secondary point of view, but conveying what I know into a character in the plot is hard because I can\'t see it happening. Especially when I really have no sense of time, hence the leaps forward from chapter to chapter.\r\n\r\nI was working on the next chapter but maybe I need to turn my attention to improving the earlier chapters. Thanks for your review. I knew it wasn\'t working but I guess I just needed someone else to be blunt about it to me.\r\n\r\nemma x

 

Kickin' It at the Top by Soap
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 820]

Summary: A Marauder-era fic - this story takes a look at all the characters we've come to love (and hate), as well as an OC or two thrown in for good measure. Follow the Marauders through seven years at Hogwart's, with appearances from the infamous Black sisters, Lucius Malfoy, Regulus Black, and of course the one and only Severus Snape.


There are a bunch of pairings in this story (although romance is not necessarily the central theme) to include James/Lily, Lucius/Narcissa, a splash of Lucius/Bella and unrequited Snape/Lily, and finally, plenty of Sirius/OC. Enjoy!

Over 120,000 reads! Wow! Thanks everyone!

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 67630 Chapters: 55 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/07 Updated: 06/15/08


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 10/10/07 Title: Chapter 11: Friends and Girls

luv itt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

Meeting the Past by Alluria
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Albus Severus Potter is sent to the Headmaster's office, and while he waits, he has an interesting conversation with the portrait of Severus Snape.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 876 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/18/07 Updated: 11/19/07


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting the Past

this was really good!!!!!

 

Half Memories by rev02a
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 32]

Summary: Remus and Sirius share an awkward cup of tea.
One shot set during GOF.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1705 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/21/07 Updated: 11/22/07


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 11/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: Half Memories

great story!!!!!!

 

My Darkened Lily by fire_angel_love
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: A poem about a darkened encounter between Lily and Severus after a Potions class one day in the dungeons...

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 331 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/19/07 Updated: 12/23/07


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 12/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

that was ..wow! words simply fail me. All i can say is your an amazing writer and that was beautifully written and brilliant and so dark. I loved it!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m really happy that you like it!

 

Summary: [Year 3: 10 of N/A] Its Harry’s third year as a Slytherin; the infamous prisoner Sirius Black is on the loose after twelve years…and, of course, after Harry. So, to keep him safe, Dumbledore is having Harry spend the summer with the last person he would ever want to temporarily live with. Things only get worse as, at Hogwarts, Black keeps trying to break into the castle and friendships will end. At the end of the year, Black won’t end up on the run nor will he end up a free man, and Pettigrew won’t escape on his own, but with some unexpected help, making the ending of Harry’s third year a can’t-miss…

How will Harry’s years at Hogwarts turn out, now that he's a Slytherin? Will he turn to the Dark Arts and be a follower of Voldemort? Or will he kill Voldemort, or die trying, after he learns of the prophecy? Will Harry's choices lead him down a different road? Follow and you will see...

“Questions are a burden to others; answers a prison for oneself.”
--The Labor Exchange


Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Violence

Word count: 31049 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
01/22/08 Updated: 06/23/08


Reviewer: lalabella Signed
Date: 02/16/08 Title: Chapter 1: Brooded Over Plans

Your Back! XD already excited! can't wait to see what's going to happen btw the scenes in Azkaban was amazing!!!!!! Im'm espic excited to See how Sirius will react to Harry being in Slytherin but please please don't do it last chapter or anything and please don't "friendships will die" make Draco and Harry turn each other but by all means kill of Ron and Harry's umm yeah ... well UPDATE SOON!

Author's Response: Yay, I\'m back!! I love when my readers are so excited and pumped, it gets me excited too! Thank you so much!!

Sirius won\'t find out at the end since he\'ll be breaking into the castle numerous times, he\'ll see that Harry isn\'t a Slytherin. But he\'ll actually find out a lot earlier than that, but you\'ll see soon enough what I mean.

There\'s a lot of strife between friends -- Slytherin, Gryffindor, and otherwise -- but I won\'t give away what happens. You\'ll just have to read to see!! Thanks again! ~Sara

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