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Changing the Past by PEMDAS
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 429]

Summary: Harry would give anything to have his parents back...what if he got the chance to? Harry, Ron and Hermione get mysteriously sent back in time to when the Marauders were in school, and Harry attempts to alter history. Can he get his parents back? Or will he only end up messing up the future forever? (Note: Rating and Warnings will change in later chapters, while the first few chapters are very mild.)

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 50437 Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/24/07 Updated: 11/13/07


Reviewer: the_ravens_claw Signed
Date: 11/13/07 Title: Chapter 23: Back to the Future

Wow...that was a very interesting turn of events. This story was great! (Although I was already forming my flame in my mind when i read the first sentence of the Authors note!);] But a sequel!!! Yay!=] I cant wait!

the_ravens_claw

Author's Response: Call me crazy, but if you were about ready to flame me, it had the desired effect. It was basically a test to see who reads my Author\'s Notes. Anyway, thanks for R/Ring; hope to see you at the sequel!

 

Summary: This is book two in the "Potter's Pentagon" trilogy. Read "Potter's Pentagon: The Five" first, myesss? Cool.

WARNING: This story contains French people, an internal monologue about a blue orange, adolescent facial hair, good old-fashioned snogging, superstitious truck drivers, a portrait who calls everyone "Mavis," a zoo break-in, some very strange clothes, romantic conflict galore, and Ron Weasley's caffeine addiction. And worst of all, Professor Zabini!

Hogwarts is hosting the Triwizard Tournament, and when one of the members of Potter's Pentagon is selected to represent the school, much excitement ensues. Simultaneously, elections are being held for Minister of Magic, and things are getting busy at the Ministry.

Not to mention the fact that Jordan's made a new Muggle friend without informing her of the itty-bitty fact that he's magical, Haley has found an enchanted diary of dubious origin, Ted's met a werewolf from Beauxbatons, and Emma... well, Emma's not having a good year.

And what exactly is Ivy up to, anyway?

Everyone has secrets. But in the end, the truth will have to come out.


Starring Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character Nominees Ivy Potter, Emma Weasley, Haley Potter, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards!

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 76214 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/16/07 Updated: 06/04/08


Reviewer: the_ravens_claw Signed
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In Which The Champions Stood; The Rest Saw Their Better

WWWWOOOOOWWWWEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!Yay chappie! It was great, of course, but i can't help feel so bad for poor Jordan, =[ I hate how he can never get what he wants. I just want to give him a hug...Even though i'd probablly be rapidly pushed away and cursed into oblivion, ah well, good thing he's just a character. Well, enough of my rambling. I LOVED it because it was
TOTTALYSUCPERFANTASTICALLYAMAZING, like always! Update Soon to get
e-hugs! ;)

the_ravens_claw


Author's Response: WWWWOOOOOWWWWEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!! THANK YOU! I\'m really glad you like it... but I feel really bad for Jordan as well. I really want to hug him.. The thing is, I\'m trying to make him stop taking himself so seriously, which is why he never gets what he wants.

Maybe after he lightens up a bit, he\'ll let you hug him.

 
Reviewer: the_ravens_claw Signed
Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: In Which Ted Continues To Be Adorable

AWWW!!! I feel so bad for Arden with no friends! I'm glad she seems to be getting along well with "Theo". I just think that name sounds weird for him, but it kind of fits his wolf-form i guess. Anyway this chapter was full of people with insecurities! (That doesntt mean it was bad! ;) ) I am eargerly awaiting *Drools in anticipation* for the next chapter.

the_ravens_claw

Author's Response: Thanks! I feel bad for Arden, too, but it\'s kind of her own fault she has no friends. She doesn\'t talk to anyone! I think Theo is a weird nickname for Ted, but whatever. It\'s a cute name.

Yeahhh, I guess there are a lot of people with insecurities. After all, it is about 15-16-year-old kids.

 
Reviewer: the_ravens_claw Signed
Date: 12/09/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: In Which Ted Continues To Be Adorable

AAAAAAAAAAAKKKKKKKKK!!!!!!!!!!! In my totally hyperactive super excited rush to review this chapter I forgot my promise! EEEEEEE----------HHHHHHHHUUUUUUUUUGGGGSSSSSSSSSSS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *Hugs computer and frantically looks for a "send" button on the keyboard* And I would LOVE if Jordan lightened up enough for me to hug him! YAY!! *Has a faraway look in eyes*
Cant wait for updates! (Yay!!! That ryhmed!! I'm gonna be happy for the rest of the night now!) (Why am I not a cheerleader?!)

the_ravens_claw =]

Author's Response: *Hugs you back and throws exclamation points at you* You never know, Jordan might learn to adapt to hugging.

Cheerleaders usually scare me. Though I am very perky myself. (Haley would be a good cheerleader.)

 
Reviewer: the_ravens_claw Signed
Date: 11/21/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: In Which Deja Vu Appears In The Form Of A Diary Of Dubious Origin

YAYYAYAYAYAYAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! *cough* please excuse my outburst. I was SUPERCALAFRAGILISTICEXPEALIDOCIOUS excited when i saw that you had started a sequel! I loved the first one and this one is coming along just as great! Also niether of your chapters were "not-ver exciting". They were wonderful. In fact I LOVED them. Anyway, you are such a great author and I can't wait for more.

Update soon!
the_ravens_claw

P.S. I had to let you know that this was my favorite bit: "Haley had caused a spot of bother, insisting on cartwheeling through the barrier and attracting the attention of several Muggles-- apparently, it was something she had wanted to do since her first year, and hadnít gotten the courage to do until then. " I was laughing for like five minutes after I read that. You are hilarious!


Author's Response: YAYAYAYAYAY, a review! I\'m so glad you liked it, and I definitely plan on updating soon.
Although this story isn\'t in the humour section, I like to put some of my natural silliness into my stories... often in the incarnation of Haley.

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