I really enjoyed this.  I'm a big sucker for anything Sirius Black.  I like the point of view and you used good, short sentences and intense verbs to make the action grow.  Well done!  What's next?  :-)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your review! The sequel is called "Memoirs of Azkaban", and it is almost done. It's on hold right now because I had surgery on my arm, but once that's healed I can get it up and running. Keep a lookout for it!