I love Harry Potter so much I can't even describe it, but I'm sure most of you can relate. So as far as HP, my favorite books are DH and OOTP, but I truly love them all! My favorite characters tend to die, for example, Fred, Remus, Sirius, and Cedric. But I also love George and Oliver Wood, but most of all RON WEASLEY! He is my hero, and I love him. I have a weak spot for red-heads now thanks to him :)
Update: I submitted the first chapter of my new fic, But the Greatest is Love! It is a Ron/Hermione fic, and I'm really excited about it. So be looking for it hopefully in the next few days!
I love this chapter so much! The notes back and forth was a really creative idea, and I liked the interaction between James and Lily. Nice work on this chapter!
Wow. That was amazing! I read on the forum that you were inspired by Taylor Swift's, Tim McGraw, and so of course being the country fan that I am, I just had to read it. It was not what I expected, but it was even better! You characterized Ron so well through the letter, I don't think I've read better (ooh that rhymed)! Harriet, like someone else mentioned, had a great mix of Ron, Hermione, and individuality! It was truly great, you really have a skill for writing, especially characterization.
Author's Response: Haha! Sorry to get you confused on that bit. I was referring to the title, and how Taylor talked about her hidden letter under the bed. I\'m glad you liked it still. Thanks for all the compliments as well. Take care dear.
Nice work! I liked the initial reaction Tonks and Remus had toward each other. Good plot and story line so far, I am looking foreword to reading more.
Author's Response: Thank you for both of your helpful reveiws!
Overall, it was a good chapter, it definitely showed development of their relationship. I thought Remus's change of mind for Tonk to help him was a little rushed, but nonetheless a good chapter. I'm excited for the next chapter, it will definitely be exciting!
Author's Response: Thank you so so much for this really valuable review, I am goign to take your advice for the next chapter. There\'s as lot of stuff going on in my personal life and in real life which is taking me away from my computer, but it\'s all good stuff :-) However, I will not really have time to update soon, which is a shame, but RL trumps MNFF though I promise you\'ll have another chapter within the next month.
Nice work on this chapter! I was a little confused about Teddy and Harry's relationship if it was fatherly or not, but hopefully that information will come in later chapters! I really liked Jason, I think a muggle-born was exactly what Teddy needed. Also changing his hair to fit his mood - that was very Tonks' like! Great Job!
Great first chapter! The plot pulled me in and I for sure want to keep reading! Great characterization for Teddy and good dynamics between him and Harry. I liked the 1st person POV, and nice work on keeping it true to book 7!
Nice job! I liked not knowing what house Teddy was going to be sorted in, it seemed that he could really have been sorted into any of them (except Slytherin). I was pretty bummed that this chapter was so short though, but only because I love reading it so much :-)
Author's Response: Sorry! :D Glad you\'re happy he\'s in Gryffindor. I was playing around with him being a Puff, but I thought being a Gryff would suit him much better. ¨Evie
Nice job! It had a great story line for the length. The way Harry was described as James, Sirius, and Lily all at once was great and how each of them would have reacted to Remus. The relationship between Tonks and Remus was also very realistic.
"Every man dies. Not every man truly lives." -Braveheart
The war is over. Voldemort is gone, forever. Most are rejoicing, lifting their glasses once again to The Boy Who Lived. George Weasley is not. He has lost his best friend, his twin, the other half of his soul. He has nothing left to live for - or so it would seem.
Wow. That was excellent. I was SO incredibly sad when Fred died (I was seriously bawling), the twins were two of my favorite characters, and I was almost certain that JKR wouldn't kill off either of them. Anyway, excellent work, I loved the part how George could physically and mentally Fred's death. I can't wait to read more!
Author's Response: Thank you! I always thought the twins were closer than usual, although I\'m not a twin so I can\'t say. But I imagine they definitely had a deeper connection than any of their siblings.
I also lost it when Fred died. I threw the book and cried and bawled and sobbed and choked and- you get the picture.
Wow. That was so sad! You guys did a good job with this story. I like how it is somewhat dark, and the whole figure on the bench next to Harry is creepy! I can't wait to find out who.what it is! Anyways, Harry was characterized SO well, he kind of went back to his 5th year emotional self, but you guys portrayed him so well and realistically. I can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response: I\'m glad you think we portrayed Harry well, there has been some discussion on how angsty he is. More will be up soon! Thanks for the review! Miss Radcliffe~
Author's Response: YAY!!! I love reviewers!!! Harry is a bit moody... sigh... he\'s such a woman sometimes... :P next chapter will be up soon... if... miss radcliffe... ever finishes it *HINT HINT -SiriusBlack1113<3
Oh that was so good and kind of creepy! I liked the way you wrote that, it was very different from your other one, but very awesome!
Author's Response: Yeah, it was different. I wrote that one after a particularly boring Microeconomics class...did I come across at all as desperate?