Penname: Forgive me Severus [Contact]
Real name: Bianca
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The Poetry of Severus Snape by Zetera
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 57]

Summary: A poem which contains revelations of a painful past and present. Short and sweet.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 51 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/19/04 Updated: 11/19/04


Reviewer: Forgive me Severus Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Poetry of Severus Snape

this is the most beautiful thing i have ever heard. can i please sopy it onto my myspace - with credit given to you of course

Author's Response: Of course, as long as you credit me. You can link it to my own site instead of here if you wish: www.freewebs.com/zetera/

 

A Different Man by lmageous
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 13]

Summary: What would have happened if Tom Riddle Sr. had stayed with Merope, and fallen in love with her himself? What would have happened if Merope and Tom Sr. raised Tom Jr. together? What would have happened if Voldemort had chosen to go down a different path, be a different man, and not the cruel Dark Lord? A one-shot.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 2352 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/03/06 Updated: 01/03/06


Reviewer: Forgive me Severus Signed
Date: 01/31/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Different Man

this story was quite well written!
its nice to see a different light shone on voldemort....or what he might have been.

however, one teensy annoyance i found was with how you described Merope. In the Half-Blood Prince, jk rowling describes Merope as 'her hair was lank and dull and she had a plain, pale, rather heavy face. Her eyes, like her brother's, stared in opposite directions.'
However, you described her as beautiful with golden hair....

 

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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: Forgive me Severus Signed
Date: 09/29/07 Title: None

sorry to interupt but i thought Petunia was YOUNGER than Lily, not older. which would mean that Petunia coulnd't be 15 at this point.

 

Life is But A Dream by Pondering
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 145]

Summary: When Sirius passes through the veil, he ends up in the Realm of Dreams. He manages to wake up. But when he wakes up, it’s the 30th of October 1981. The past fourteen years have never happened. He has a chance. Will it all be for naught?



Note: The word count for the story is incorrect, it should read around 21096 words. I arrived at this amount by adding the word count for the individual chapters together.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 24276 Chapters: 8 Completed: No
Published:
05/10/06 Updated: 10/17/07


Reviewer: Forgive me Severus Signed
Date: 09/21/07 Title: Chapter 7: VII: Tampering With Time

this story is really good! this last chapter was a bit confusing but im sure it will all clear up in the next chapter!
I usually read romance fanfics but i wanted a change. i can't wait for the ending.

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed it. AU is fun, isn\'t it? I hope things are clearer in the next chapter! :)

 

Black as Snow by Celestial Melody
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 17]

Summary:

Bellatrix and Tom Riddle—two of the most enigmatic characters in Harry Potter—have puzzled writers and readers alike since their equally horrifying introductions. Why did Bellatrix believe she was Lord Voldemort’s most dedicated and favored follower? Why did the Dark Lord indulge a woman he could have squashed like an insignificant bug; why did he allow her to continue in her ‘delusions,’ if, indeed, they were delusions?

I believe that these allowances are not simply coincidences. Why should the most feared dark wizard of all time cater to a pawn? There must have been prior connections between the two to create this bond.

In “Black as Snow,” we glimpse a snippet of Tom Riddle’s life at Hogwarts, his (hypothetical) introduction to Bellatrix, and, afterwards, the special bond the witch and wizard shared … then, and now.

Created for the wonderful rita_skeeter in MNFF’s Ravenclaw Christmas Exchange, 2006.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Dubious Consent, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 12221 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
01/02/07 Updated: 07/31/08


Reviewer: Forgive me Severus Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 3: Snowflake, Part One

Keep writing! Keep writing! I'm dying to know what happens next!
this is the most interesting fanfic ive read in ages

Author's Response: Wow, thank you, Bianca! I\'m so glad you like it and I\'m definitely planning to keep writing. I already have the base plot for the next chapter. Once again, thanks. =)

~Julia

 

Jack-o'-lantern by Stubbornly_appeared
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: James reflects (Trick-or-Treating is dangerous; he must not think of tomorrow; life is like a jack-o'-lantern) on October 30, 1981.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 1414 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/26/07 Updated: 11/26/07


Reviewer: Forgive me Severus Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Jack-o'-lantern

in response to your note - i think u made the right choice. its sounds a lot better.
i really love this story.

Author's Response: Why, thanks. I think so too.

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