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Christmas Magic by Asphyxiated

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 80 Reviews
Summary: Ask anyone and they’ll tell you there’s something exquisite in the air around Christmas Eve. But what? Witness the magic of Christmas twirl two unsuspecting 7th years into each others arms… as Ron Weasley and Hermione Granger find out exactly what ‘Christmas Magic’ is all about.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/14/04 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Magic

Very sweet and touching.



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Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/17/04 Title: None

I usually never read a story unless it's finished. I only made an exception here because I liked your intro so much; the game sounded rather intriguing. Now I realise that was a mistake as now I'm left to impatiently wait for the rest. You're doing an excellent job so far, just the right amount of tension and humor to balance it out. Please hurry with the remaining chapters!

Author's Response: aww thank-you so much for your kind words!! That's really nice of you to say! I'm very glad that you're enjoying my fic so far! I'm going to try to update soon. Thanks so much for your review! I really appreciate it!! :)



Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/20/04 Title: None

I am sorry to harrass you, but exactly how much longer are we going to have to wait for the next chapter? I check several times a day and I'm [obviously] not the patient sort. You can't write such a great story and leave us hanging! Please hurry! :)

Author's Response: i'm sooooooooo sorry!!!! it's up now! I hope that you like it! thanks for the review!!



From Across the Great Divide by Ashwinder

Rated: Professors • 199 Reviews
Summary: A post-Hogwarts H/G fic. Strange circumstances draw Harry and Ginny closer together. But are they in danger? Romance, adventure, Monty Python, and tartan boxer shorts abound. Written pre-OOP.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/15/04 Title: Chapter 18: Epilogue: Just Desserts

That was great!!! Thank you for sharing your incredible talent with us!



Ginny's Gift by Ashwinder

Rated:361 Reviews
Summary: Ginny gives Harry a special birthday present, but the consequences are unexpected. Written pre-OOP.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/07/04 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

You're doing a great job so far. The excellent spelling and grammar skills, not to mention your wonderful use of adjectives and subtle detail, make this an exciting read. Only 28 more chapters to go!



Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/07/04 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11

I've been reading nonstop for hours and I'm starting to go cross-eyed! I just can't take a break. You are an incredibly gifted writer. If I didn't know better, I'd say you were JKR herself---but she'd never have the time to write fanfic off her own stories! Of course, maybe that's what's taking book 6 so long! ha ha Now I must get back to reading... 11 down and 18 to go.



Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/09/04 Title: Chapter 29: Chapter 29

You did a great job with the two romances; the perfect balance, not too much and not too little. You managed to incorporate everything that makes for a good story---romance, suspence, action, adventure, mystery (I hope that sequel tells us more about Draco's choices in life), love, anger, humor, hopelessness, plot twists and lots of side stories (love that Dr. Zog book!) You have an amazing talent! I really felt like I was reading the 7th book by JKR. This is BY FAR the best fanfic I have ever read. Perhaps you should give fanfic a rest (after that sequel, of course!) and write your own books to publish---assuming you haven't already. Thank you for a very enjoyable read. Now, if you'll excuse me, I need to search for that sequel!!!



Once Upon a Time by Ashwinder

Rated:28 Reviews
Summary: Voldemort's defeat comes at a price. Written for the HPGWFicafest Live Journal challenge. H/G. One shot. Post OOP.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/20/04 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

As soon as I saw your name as the author, I knew this would be good. I didn't think I'd be in tears, though! That was horribly, wonderfully intense and now, to mend my bleeding heart, I must go find my husband for succor. My! You have a way with words!



Through the Glass Darkly by Ashwinder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 24 Reviews
Summary: Ginny observes Harry after the events at the Department of Mysteries. A missing moment from the end of OOP.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/20/04 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

That was very touching.



Many Times After by Luna_Lovegood831

Rated:18 Reviews
Summary: She sat alone in front of the fire at the Burrow. The final battle had occurred many months before and yet she was still reliving the memory. This is a one shot, Ginny remembering Harry.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/16/04 Title: Chapter 1: The One and Only

Well, you almost had me in tears at the end, so I'd say it was pretty effective! Good job!



How The Other Half Lives (Prologue) by Jase

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: Harry, Ron and Hermione accidentally end up in an alternate dimension.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/14/04 Title: Chapter 2: Part 2

Odd that the "Dark" characters didn't question them more and automatically seemed to know where they were from and that everything was opposite. I would react quite differently if that happened to me!



Good Riddance (Time Of Your Life) by Feefella

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 14 Reviews
Summary: When she should be celebrating the defeat of Voldemort, Ginny is sitting in a hospital watching her husband slip away. Agsty, fluffy, sad song fic to Green Day's "Good Riddance (Time of Your Life)" Ginny/Draco Post Hogwarts...
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/10/04 Title: Chapter 1: Only Chapter

I feel like I just got brief highlights (and the tearful ending) of a great novel. I want all the missing chapters now!

Author's Response: thank you! do you really think I should write a full novel based off this one shot?



Summer at Grimmauld Place by EowynDernhelm

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 16 Reviews
Summary: "He could hardly bear to think of the pair of them having fun at The Burrow when he was stuck in Privet Drive." Fun? Not likely!! What was really going on that summer in Grimmauld Place while Harry was stuck with the Dursleys? (One-shot/set during OOTP)
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/07/04 Title: Chapter 1: Summer at Grimmauld Place

Enjoyable read. Ron is very frustrating! Such a guy! Good ending.



Faraway by EowynDernhelm

Rated:5 Reviews
Summary: One day, a day that started out normally enough, everything changed. Nothing could have prepared them for this. Ron/Hermione. (One-shot songfic) Based off of the Sleater-Kinney song of the same name.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/20/04 Title: Chapter 1: Faraway

Heart-wrenching. The song fit well.



The End by Anira

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews
Summary: The whole "The End" series consists of four chapters, and basically, it's my version of the last few pages of book seven. Pretend that you have already read all six preceeding books, and have read almost all of #7, and that these are the concluding chapters of the Harry Potter legacy.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/18/04 Title: Chapter 4: Closure

Great ending!

Author's Response: thanks so much!



Summer at Number Twelve by EowynDernhelm

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 10 Reviews
Summary: "He could hardly bear to think of the pair of them having fun at The Burrow when he was stuck in Privet Drive." What was really going on that summer at Number 12? Companion piece to "Summer at Grimmauld Place", but from Hermione's POV. (One shot/Set during OotP)
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/07/04 Title: Chapter 1: Summer at Number Twelve

Short and sweet.



The Unexpected Task Returns by gryffindorcalvinist

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 43 Reviews
Summary: Another Christmas Ball. Ron gets it right this time with a hint of H/G.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/14/04 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1/1

That was great! I loved her gift---melted my heart! Keep writing!



My Juliet by CathCarl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 26 Reviews
Summary: A certain Slytherin mulls over his affection for a certain redheaded Gryffindor.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/20/04 Title: Chapter 1: My Juliet

Very clever! I was sure it was Draco and Ginny (which I didn't find too believable, I admit) and was then shocked when I saw it was Snape and Lily. I reread it twice after that! Great job!



The Long Road Home by Ashwinder

Rated:334 Reviews
Summary: Sequel to Ginny's Gift. Read that story first. Harry must deal with the aftermath of Voldemort's defeat. Written pre-OOP.
Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/11/04 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16

This is just as wonderful as Ginny's Gift! Thanks to you, I have an exciting weekend ahead of me (I'm a slow reader). Keep up the great work (you, too, Marian)!



Reviewer: Wispy Veil Signed
Date: 11/13/04 Title: Chapter 32: Epilogue

That was absolutely fabulous! Great job---I loved that you didn't take the obvious route, concerning their lack of powers. The ending was very satisfying and kept the focus on their love. Thanks for a wonderful read!