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I'm 27, married, I love Harry Potter, just got into fan fic, I'm a Graphic Designer and soon to be Volunteer Fire Fighter
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OH my God that was a wonderful chapter! Well worth the wait and it brought tears to my eyes. You can really feel Harry's pain and it was amazing. Can't wait to read the rest and I am so glad you wrote this story.
I hope you haven't abandoned this story. I really really like it. Hope to see an update soon! Cheers!
Author's Response: I'm working on it, I promise! I'm aiming for the end of the month, hopefully sooner.
I refuse to believe you just killed Ginny Potter, but it would go with your other story "Everybody Does It". Just doesn't seem right. As always this was a great chapter and I can't wait to read the rest.
Author's Response: Does it really go with Everybody Does it? I\'m just asking? Well, reading everyone\'s response to the next chapter should be exceedingly fun.\r\n\r\n
Great chapter! I was actually more disturbed by The Illusion than this chapter, but it was great all the same. Can't wait for the next one!
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yes, I think the Illusion was more a display of fear than the Reaper who was always intended to be a display of power. I do have some fear aspects in this chapter, but I think what I really wanted was sheer heart thumping action.
This is the best chapter yet, despite the fact that you had originally written it more gory. Well, it's tied with the chapter where Ron was swimming in blood and all that lovely stuff. I think that chapter was more gory actually, that and The Reaper chapter. I figure it's not Rathius due to Ron's reaction, that's a bit too obvious anyways. I love the fact that The Reaper was a chick and the snakes were a brilliant idea! Can't wait to read the rest! Cheers and happy writing!
Author's Response: Yup, the big change between this and the original (aside from some beginner\'s mistakes that I admit the mod had me on), was that originally, Ron didn\'t shut his eyes at the end. There is a slight thematic loss there, but not a great one and I\'m happy to tone it down as long as the end result remains the same, now it\'s a matter of making sure that the opening of the next chapter can squeak by. I\'m glad you thought it the best chapter yet this chapter and the next have been chapters that have been in my head for well over a year now, and it really felt good to finally put it down in words. As for who the Master is, yes, we will learn that answer in the very beginning of the next chapter. I will also provide a clue to his identity in the author\'s note in case there is anyone that wants to try and figure it out one last go before the big secret is revealed. Making the Reaper a woman, well, and this is something that\'s important to me when I write, is addressing a kind of equality or at least you know diversity in my characters. That\'s to say, when I created a group of baddies, for me it just seemed natural to make sure that the deadliest was a young woman. And the snakes, well, that was something I had plotted for a while. You know, just a nice and tidy way to bring into effect what the Pupil had said earlier, and to further reinforce the idea that everyone has some sort of weakspot. Anyway, thank you so much and I\'ll see when I can get to the next chapter (no... I suck... I haven\'t started writing it yet).
Ah Dammit! I hate it when the 'bad guy" miraculously comes back like in Friday the 13th or Halloween. As always great writing. Hope to read the Epilogue soon.
Author's Response: hehe... well, to be fair, Rogan never came back from anything; he was alive the whole time. And I still am hoping to have the epilogue up by the end of the week. I did a read through of it, and I like most of it, but there are some rough patches I want to clear up. Anyway, thanks, don\'t forget to check the blog, and I\'ll catch up with you soon.
AAAAAHHH!!! You and your cliff hangers!!! This was a great chapter. Nicely written. I was a bit skeptical of Eric, and shocked when he was assassinated. Poor Neville and the plants! I can't wait to read the next chapter.
Author's Response: Well, I\'m hoping now that I\'m coming off of vacation I\'ll be getting back to work on the final stories soon. ON the other hand, the political season is heating up which is going to be an obstacle to overcome, but as I\'ve said, I\'m committed to finishing this story and I will. The next chapter, I think is not going to be as exciting, more of a character study, I believe, but we\'ll see how it plays out, thank you so much, and I\"m sorry Imade you wait both for the chapter and the response to your review.
GREAT! Can't wait to read the rest of the story!
6 years post HBP
H/G and R/Hr(DH spoilers are very minimal, just in terms of a use of a name- it doesnt follow canon storyline wise)
Aw that was cute. Great chapter. I am dying to know what's up with Holly though! Hurry! Go write and update!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Theres a lot about Holly that no-one knows yet (some not even i know fully..lol) I will update soon! Thank you for the review!
I love it! I'm really curious as to who Holly belongs to. I have a feeling, but don't want to say because it's just an idea. PLEASE hurry and write more!!! I love this story!
Author's Response: Thanks! Ive actually got the next chapter written i just need a bit of time to go over it and change a few things. Im glad u like my story and thank you for the review!
Brilliant!!!!! Love it! Write more! Look forward to reading the rest.
Author's Response: Thank you!! :D
I love this story!!! Please hurry and post another chapter!!!!!!!!
Aw that's so sweet! Great chapter!!! Can't wait for the next!
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m really glad you liked it. :-)
Cliffhangers are my nemesis! Great chapter! Please write MORE!
Author's Response: LOL, thank you so much! :)
Wow! Lots of info. Can't wait for the rest. Happy writing. Cheers!
Author's Response: Thanks! I did throw a lot at you, didn't I? Well, I'll try an update as soon as I can!
It was worth the wait. Great chapter! Hope to read the rest soon!
Author's Response: Good! I\'m glad you think so. Thanks for the review.
GAH!!!!!! NOOO!!!!! That was a huge cliffhanger....Hurry and write more!!!!!!
Author's Response: It was pretty huge, I know; I'll definitely try and update soon! Thanks for the review.
The third installment in my “Battles” series continues here in a fluffier-than-is-normal-for-this-author tale depicting the Jitters Ron and Hermione experience when popping the big question and the events leading up to it.
If you have just found this story, be sure to read “Internal Battles” and “Battling Boundaries”. This story stands alone, but the other two will help complete the back-story. You should enjoy them too! Let me know what you think!
Disclaimer: JKR started it…I am just playing with the fabulous characters!
I have read all your stories! They are great!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!! I know the whole hacker thing has the system all messed up so it will be a while, but your stories are brilliant and I really enjoy reading them. Thanks for writing such good stories!
Author's Response: It\'s done, just posting now. It\'s been done since April, but the validation process takes time. Now that I am back at work and baby boy is growing up strong, we will get back on track.
Great story! I see you haven't updated it in a while. I hope you haven't given it up. I agree that the Epilogue in DH was lacking, but it gave us a time period to play in. Hope to hear more of this story!
ARGGHHH!!! You giveth and taketh away! Hurry and write please!! I love this story!
Author's Response: Chapter Six will come... All in good time... ;)