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The Cause by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Marty Price works for The Cause, which involves several campaigns and petitions on a weekly basis. It has become common knowledge within Hogwarts that if you see her coming towards you with a clipboard, you should turn and walk the other way. Or perhaps deny all grasp of the English language. And if this isn’t eccentric enough, there’s also her obsessive written observations of four boys in her year, which will one day make a rather interesting book ...

Remus Lupin, meanwhile, has always been a little different, too. Poor, sweet Remus Lupin is, to the casual observer, the picture of a sensible, hard working student. However, he has three friends who have done more for him than anyone knows and they have done this because of his troubled past, troubled present and troubled future. Why the gloominess? Because Remus Lupin just so happens to be a werewolf.

So what could these two possibly have in common? And how can their stories possibly connect?

Runner-up for the 2008 Best Marauder Era QSQ.
Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 10/29/08 Title: Chapter 20: Pumpkin Juice

*clap clap* that was a very touching goodbye speech! Your last fic? Awww.... I'll just have to go and read all your other ones over and over again! :D

Remus and Marty kissed at last! I've been waiting for this my whole life! (well, not really..) I cried when Marty went back to Taffy's! It was so touching when she saw the photo. It was so sad, but also happy.. hmm... That was probably your best chapter ever! I laughed and cried! I've never done that reading a fanfiction before!

Well, at least you haven't gone into cyberspace! Good luck with your exams!

Author's Response: Thanks so much, I'm going to need that luck! I admit, it was sad, but I definitely wanted there to be an element of happiness in there too - but I'm sorry I made you cry! (Secretly, I'm kind of flattered). Thanks very much for reviewing, I promise not to disappear completely.



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 11/17/07 Title: Chapter 5: Taffy's

oh no!! poor marty!!

Author's Response: *sniff* Poor Marty indeed ...



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 10/09/07 Title: Chapter 3: A Victim

love this story!
lol lol!
poor remus! no friends AND Marty starting to get obssesive over him!
great job!
can't wait til next chapter!

Author's Response: Well, Marty doesn\'t mean any harm ... but yeah, I see where you\'re coming from. =D Glad you liked it, thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 04/28/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Trust Test

Ooohh... You are so evil!!! :D Can't wait to find out Marty's reaction!!! THe suspense is killing me!

Author's Response: =D Sorry about that. The next chapter\'s in the queue, but I get the feeling you might have to be a while ... sorry! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it anyway, sorry about being so evil ...



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 05/13/08 Title: Chapter 12: Asparagus

ooohh...! Love this chapter! i always thought that marty would accept remus for what he was. it would be really cool if marty became minister for magic! she would get the wizarding world up and running in no time! uunlucky that she runns into the marauders threatening snape though, but it'll make a really great next chapter finding out what she says! great job!

Author's Response: To be honest, I love the chapters which follow that little incident. =D Of course Marty would accept Remus, she\'s far too nice not to - like she said, it never occured to her not to. And I agree. Marty for Minister is a campagin that really IS worthy of some attention!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 04/16/08 Title: Chapter 10: Hapless Slytherins

Great chappie! I really love the way you switch between Marty and Remus and give their points of view on different parts of the story! Marty has been through a lot of trauma and tradgedy, facing very real terrors! Well done! You are a very brave author! She's grown alot since Chapter 1, you obviously put an awful lot of thought into each chapter. Congratulations on writing the train scene! All that politics would have killed me if I tried to write that!! Will Marty find out about Remus' problem??? Can't wait to find out!! BRILLIANT STORY, by the way!

Author's Response: Wow, thanks! You know, Marty\'s growth wasn\'t necessarily planned, it just sort of happened as I went along, which was interesting. And I was worried the politics went on a bit too long, but it all came so naturally that I couldn\'t figure out which bit to get rid of! I guess I just spend way too much time in the company of teenage girls. I\'m really glad you\'re enjoying the story, and thank you for reviewing. Hopefully the next chapter will be accepted soon!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 07/31/08 Title: Chapter 16: Fainty McPassOut

great chapter! sirius was really funny! Can't wait to see if Marty and Remus get together! *fingers crossed*

Author's Response: Let's see, eh? Glad you liked Sirius. *Pats on head* Thanks for reviewing!



Teddy by dumbledorefluertwins

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. As an orphan, he has bounced backwards and forwards between his grandmother and his godfather. Follow him on a journey where he discovers the values of friendship, family and love, along with fighting the prejudices against his father, and getting through Defense Against the Dark Arts, with a teacher who just seems to hate him for no reason...




*DH spoilers, obviously*

NOTE: I am sorry, but I have left this site, due to lack of time and personal issues concerning RL and the site. This story is discontinued here, but may well be posted elsewhere in the future.
Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 05/11/08 Title: Chapter 9: Revelations

great chappie! poor teddy! he's having a really hard time at hogwarts! he reminds me a little of sirius cross remus. keep up with the good work! :):):)

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 7: Nothing Like Muggle Fairy Tales

i've been thinking about why Dermot hates teddy so much and i came up with a theory! is it becuse of remus' condition? Love the story! can't wait for the next chapter!

Author's Response: Yes, it is, but there\'s a little more to it than that. You\'ll find out...\r\n\r\nGlad you like the story at any rate!!\r\n\r\n~Evie



Love a Duck! by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Love a duck! Will he stop at nothing? Voldemort is rapidly taking over, and his Death Eaters are killing Muggle-borns every day. The good news? A mysterious man, known only as The Phoenix, is rescuing people in the nick of time all over England.

Meanwhile, newlywed writer Lily Potter has troubles of her own. For one, her marriage is not turning out to be as great as she'd thought... for another, she's been blackmailed by an old "friend" into turning spy and discovering the Phoenix's true identity.

Thrills, spills, laughs, gasps, song lyrics, and good old swashbucklin' intrigue.

Inspired by Baroness Emmuska Orczy's excellent novel, "The Scarlet Pimpernel," and Frank Wildhorn and Nan Knighton's AMAZING musical by the same name.

But if you're not familiar with either, the story's just all the more suspenseful! All song lyrics used in this story are based on those by Wildhorn and Knighton
Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 11/03/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Which Dumbledore Doesn't Pull a Fast One

I love this story so much! i try to say 'love a duck' in front of people, but i keep forgetting... though the other day i did randomly screamed 'MERLIN'S EARWAX!" in the middle of the cafeteria and ran out. Some people have avoided me since then...


Anyway, there's a funny song that I heard the other day called 'Days of the Phoenix' that reminds me of this. I can imagine the phoenix, whoever he/she is, sing it years later. The lyrics would suit it because it goes 'No one could see me...' really loudly. You should look it up. It's by AFI, the awesomest band ever.


I totally understand where James is coming from with the pudding thing. Today I just walked around saying 'jueve' (spanish for thursday, pronounced hoo-evay). I really annoyed some people!



Can't wait to read more!



P.S. I want Remus to be the phoenix so badly. But he wouldn't be allowed to eat cats... they're cute.

Author's Response: Thank you so, so much! I haven't gotten a review for this in millennia. Hopefully I WILL write more of this someday, because I'm rather fond of this story. Oh, and the word I've been walking around saying? "Piragua." Technically, I've been singing it. There's this musical called "In The Heights," and this random guy selling shaved ice (piraguas) walks around going, "Piragua, piragua, new block of ice, piragua!"



Potter's Pentagon: The Truth (Book Two) by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is book two in the "Potter's Pentagon" trilogy. Read "Potter's Pentagon: The Five" first, myesss? Cool.

WARNING: This story contains French people, an internal monologue about a blue orange, adolescent facial hair, good old-fashioned snogging, superstitious truck drivers, a portrait who calls everyone "Mavis," a zoo break-in, some very strange clothes, romantic conflict galore, and Ron Weasley's caffeine addiction. And worst of all, Professor Zabini!

Hogwarts is hosting the Triwizard Tournament, and when one of the members of Potter's Pentagon is selected to represent the school, much excitement ensues. Simultaneously, elections are being held for Minister of Magic, and things are getting busy at the Ministry.

Not to mention the fact that Jordan's made a new Muggle friend without informing her of the itty-bitty fact that he's magical, Haley has found an enchanted diary of dubious origin, Ted's met a werewolf from Beauxbatons, and Emma... well, Emma's not having a good year.

And what exactly is Ivy up to, anyway?

Everyone has secrets. But in the end, the truth will have to come out.


Starring Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character Nominees Ivy Potter, Emma Weasley, Haley Potter, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards!
Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: In Which Lee Comes To Light

I LOVED Ted to tiny little itsy-bitsy tiny-whiny pieces! He is so so like me, it's scary! I get obssesive over enchidnas too! :) Loved the Werewolf-there wolf- there castle thing! That's like, one of my all time favourite movies! Great job.

P.S. That Bob guy rules...

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I love Ted, but I can't say he's much like me... he's a much better person than me! AND YES! You got the Young Frankenstein reference! You know, that's been turned into a Broadway musical now? Wacky! (P.S. I can't remember who Bob was... are you talking about someone in this story?)



Dear Teddy by fairy lights

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary:
Right before she runs off to battle, Tonks writes a letter to Teddy.
Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:( :( :(!!! I was crying by the time i got to the end of it! That was brilliant!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

:( :( :(!!! I was crying by the time i got to the end of it! That was brilliant!



Pride and Pre-Juiced Plums: A Potter's Pentagon Love Story by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A companion piece to the Potter's Pentagon trilogy... it's better if you've read the Potter's Pentagon trilogy, but you don't necessarily have to.

It's five years after Emma Weasley and her chums graduated from Hogwarts. Ted and Ivy are married, Haley is working at Madame Puddifoot's while trying desperately to break into show business, Jordan's doing whatever it is he does, and Emma is an Auror trainee working as a guard at the Chudley Cannons' stadium. The Cannons have actually been doing much better lately, due to their new star Beater, Tyrone Thomas. Unfortunately, Tyrone is Emma's ex-boyfriend. OH, THE AWKWARDNESS.

Follow Emma through her awkward adventures told in her usual insane way, as she experiences angst, hilarity, obnoxiously strange people, misadventures involving a deceptively dashing cad, Haley's wedding, the birth of Ted and Ivy's baby, and her own eventual descent into LURRRVE.

Written for the marvellous Vindictus Viridian's Pride and Prejudice NEWTs class on the Fanfiction Beta Boards, based on Jane Austen's fantastic novel, "Pride and Prejudice.".

Nominated in the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Non-Canon Romance Story! And its lovely (haha) heroine, Emma Weasley, received two nominations for Best Female Original Character, while Haley Potter and Ivy Potter each received one! Thanks so much, guys!
Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 10/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Cute Is What We Aim To Avoid

The ending was so cool, not becuase I like to see little Teddy-kins in pain or anything, er..., but it was like a whole new side of cheddarish, parmesan-y and mozzeralla-y Ted. It was like a Mister Mistoffelees without his magic!! I love Cats too. Haley's cat reminded me of the time I went to the show and in the finale when the Rum Tum Tugger bowed, all the girls in the audience, including me and my mom, stood up and screamed our hearts out!! :D :D :D

Author's Response: Thank you! Hey, if you want to see a non-cheesy Ted, wait 'till you get later in "The Past." The latter half of "The Past" shows a very different side of Ted's character.

Dude, I saw an amazing community theatre production of "Cats" last year, and the guy who played the Rum Tum Tugger was only seventeen years old (almost all of the cast was in their thirties or forties) and probably the best one there. He got a standing ovation, too!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 10/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Abandoning Pregnant Wives-- A Fun Lupin Family Tradition

Oh, I just love the name of this chapter! Hahaha! I also love the little Pride and Prejudice summaries at the end of each chapter. Strangely though, I really liked Darcy. Maybe it has something to do with the fact that everyone I know, including my friends, call me emo. Aw well... I can't stop laughing when I read this story! Is Wolfie a werewolf? It seems like it... :D

Author's Response: Thank you! I have fun with the chapter titles... I love Mr. Darcy, too. I just felt like since Elizabeth doesn't like Darcy at the beginning of the book, Emma shouldn't like him either. As for Wolfie, well... my lips are sealed.



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 10/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: He Followed Me Home, But I Don't Want To Keep Him

I'm starting to see the similarities between Mr. Darcy and Tyrone , Wickham and Wolfgang and Emma and Elizabeth. Also, Collins or 'Bilbo' reminds me of Patrick because he finds out that Jane's taken and goes after Elizabeth and Patrick finds that Emma's taken and goes after Clio.

When I read the shaving cream bit, I suddenly thought of Emma suddenly singing: "Haley scares the living SHAVING CREAM outta me. She couldn't care less as long as she gets to sing. So sequin your clothes, or add lots of pink bows. Maybe she'll leave you alone, but not me." Strange huh? I like My Chemical Romance way too much...


Anyway, great chappie!

Author's Response: Yeps, you got all the character parallels right! Snaps for you! I don't get the song reference, though. Could you please tell me what the real lyrics are?



Potter's Pentagon: The Past (Book Three) by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The final installment in the Potter’s Pentagon Trilogy. Read “The Five” and “The Truth” first, myess? Okay!

WARNING! Contains Muggle adventures in Diagon Alley, unusual eyebrows, cheesy clichés galore, psycho Ted, the not-so-lost years of Merlin, a school-wide singalong, the old potato joke, Tyrone’s Princess Bride obsession, Emma’s stubborn denial of the existence of Tyrone’s mustache, a graphic death, a joke shop product as a major plot device, hobo Jordan, Jordan hugging, Jordan pulling pranks, time travel, the Love Shack, angst, and worst of all, Professor Zabini.

It’s the sixth year for Potter’s Pentagon and company, and our heroes learn that in the wizarding world, coming of age has a somewhat weightier significance. Students are busy with an Inter-House Unity Project, Jordan is having weird dreams, Pansy and Ophidias Malfoy have been released from Azkaban, Professor Zabini has a mysterious project of his own, and almost everyone is acting strangely. Meanwhile, at the Ministry of Magic, a man with a vendetta against Ron Weasley is trying his hardest to get him in the biggest trouble possible. Is the only way to save him to travel into the past?

New talents are discovered, new friendships form and old ones change, pasts are dredged up, and, of course, there’s lots of good old-fashioned snogging. And one of the five kills for the first time… while another becomes a casualty of war.

Starring 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, Emma Weasley, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Post-Hogwarts Story.
Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: In Which Anatoly Matches Giorgi In Sheer Eccentricity

TED!!! I wanna hold him and kiss him better... :D :D

Author's Response: ^_^ AWWWWW!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 12/08/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: In Which Ivy Has A Very Malfoy Christmas

Great chapter! I loved the way you showed Pansy as fake. I really imagined her like that! When she was saying that stuff about little Teddypoo, I was fuming!!! (I get a bit carried away sometimes...) It was great finding out why Ivy is so quiet all the time. It's so sad though! :(



And Mr. Bing- Bing and the Prejuiced Plums made an appearance! (Please update! I'm dying here!)

Author's Response: Thank you! This review really means a lot to me. ^_^ I'm glad I accomplished what I was going for. And yes, Mr. Bing-Bing showed up! This is where the whole Pride and Prejudice business begins!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 03/08/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: In Which Ted and Merlin Chat With Some Professors

you're back! yay! i was getting worried. I was like "Oh no! she's been sucked into a parallel dimension where everyone is made of cheese and they'll be no more Potter's Pentagon! waaaah!" But great chapter. But poor tedward has even more problems now. Why must you torture him so? :)

Author's Response: Hahaha, thank you! Though a parallel dimension where everyone is made of cheese would be pretty dang awesome. I myself would be parmesan, I believe.

Yeah, this is far from the end of Ted's problems-- he has some really upsetting stuff to come in the future-- but he gets a happy ending!



Reviewer: moony 4eva Signed
Date: 08/10/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: In Which Tyrone Makes Dorkiness Cool

oooh... great ending! and i know how giorgi wouldn't like horseradish bertie-botts! a few years ago, they used to sell them in supermarkets (muggle versions) and they were fairly normal flavours (no vomit!) EXCEPT FOR HORSERADISH!!!! I was in PAIN, I tell you, PAIN!!

Author's Response: Mwahahaha, thanks! Urgh, I hate horseradish. I remember when the Bertie Botts first came out, horseradish was the worst one. I love those, though. I like to trick people into eating the vomit ones by informing them that it's actually spaghetti or tutti-frutti, depending on which one the bean looks most like.