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Of That Which Matters Most by rard
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 34]

Summary: As war rages around them, Remus and Tonks are pulled along with the tide. New, prejudical laws are passed, and the couple must take drastic action in order to stay together. When the climactic battle arrives, Tonks must make an impossible, heartbreaking choice. Follow the couple through the timeframe of Deathly Hallows. DH spoilers abound!


As the outline has expanded, the originally intended three chapters of this story have turned into twelve chapters of R/T goodness. :-)


Chapter 6 has been sumitted!

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 10572 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
08/27/07 Updated: 06/13/08


Reviewer: betsy Signed
Date: 12/13/07 Title: Chapter 4: Waiting

Oh that was marvelous. Absolutley wonderful. I really like your storytelling, it flows beautifully. Remus' realization of what he'd done and how he made Tonks more vulnerable was perfect. :)betsy

 
Reviewer: betsy Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 3: Goodbyes

Oh, craptastic! My heart is racing here, I do hope you've got Ch. 4 up and ready!

Great storytelling, suspensful and it flows beautifully. I knew this would happen (Remus leaving), of course, but it doesn't make it any easier to take! Please update soon! :)betsy

Author's Response: Craptastic is one of my favorite words. Thank you. :-)

 

Diamonds of Glass by Gin_Drinka
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: There are rules about who he can be. There are rules about who he can love. And there are rules about how much peole are really worth.



Severus Snape doesn't agree with the rules.





There might still be a little hope left to be had, because you can find diamonds in mounds of broken glass.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse

Word count: 1990 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/26/07 Updated: 12/05/07


Reviewer: betsy Signed
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Diamonds of Glass

Oh, that was heartwrenching! Well written and absolutely stunning, thank you. :)betsy

Author's Response: You\'re welcome! :-)

 

The Proposal by Mugglechump
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: Ginny goes to Lucius with a proposal and find that he has one for her, too.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 1317 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/07 Updated: 11/02/07


Reviewer: betsy Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Holy goodness!!! My hearts just pitter-pattering with this delicious bit of naughty pleasure! I love Lucious...LOVE him and the though of him and spit-fire Ginny together....oh, that's just divine! I will definately be checking ff.net to see if you've continued!! :)betsy

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you enjoyed it. There\'s nothing new to read at ff.net yet, but I do plan to continue. Thanks for reviewing!

 

Summary: Ok, so I really really want to apologize to everyone that has read this and wanted more. I just... I got to a point of writer's block, big time... and I got lazy. I'm really really sorry about that. And, I wish I could add to this, but I just... I don't really have other ideas. I'm terrible at writing chapter work. I can never seem to finish it. So, I know it left off awkwardly, but odds are, it's gonna stay that way, at least for a very long while. I'm very sorry. And, heads up, I completely beyond appreciate everyone that has read and reviewed this. I saw the read count being over 22,000 today, and I was just like WOW. I never ever imagined that would happen!!! Anyways, this is pretty much the end of the story indefinitely, at least for now.

Categories: Remus/Tonks Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity

Word count: 36159 Chapters: 16 Completed: No
Published:
11/04/07 Updated: 08/01/09


Reviewer: betsy Signed
Date: 11/13/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Confession

Oh my goodness, this was fantastic! I am so proud of you! I really felt the emotions of both characters, especially Remus. He loves her so much but is so torn between wanting to be with her and what he believes is keeping her safe. I particularly loved this part: "Not to mention, Tonks is young. She deserves somebody young and whole, not old and broken. Also, I am far too poor. I can't just- she needs... someone better than me. Someone who could do more for her."

Oh girl, this was better than I anticipated and I'm so happy to finally read it! Chop chop and get up Chapter 2!!!! :)betsy (YaYa)

Author's Response: Thank you so much Aunt YaYa!!! I like that line too. I am thinking I need to add a few more words into the story, like dialogue. I\'m not sure. Don\'t worry, the next one should be posted in the next few days.

 

Nessun Dorma by Soap
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 177]

Summary: Rebuilding after the final battle of Hogwarts was difficult for everyone, but even moreso for one person in particular. How will Remus recover after so much sadness in his life?

Post Deathly Hallows - Spoilers! Slightly AU. Remus/Hermione.

Categories: Hermione/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 20220 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/10/07 Updated: 05/09/08


Reviewer: betsy Signed
Date: 11/14/07 Title: Chapter 2: Second

Oh, that's a heartbreaker. I mean, it's for the best but it still makes me a bit sad. I'm pretty new to the Remus/Hermione ship so I'm still kind of 'feeling' my way around it...but I could probably jump aboard, I do like me some Remus. Of course it helps when the story is as intriguing as this, as well-written and enjoyable. Looking foward to Ch. 3!
:)betsy

Author's Response: Yes, the exposition is quite sad, but I\'ve got to get them all single and stuff before they can get together! =)

The romance comes pretty slow in this one so you should have plenty of chance to feel your way through it! Thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: betsy Signed
Date: 11/10/07 Title: Chapter 1: Keep Going

This is wonderful so far. We all know Remus should have lived so I'm so excited to see where your take on him as a single father will lead. :)betsy

 

Couldn't Be Happier by Hermione_Rocks
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: Lucius does not understand what there is to like about snow: itís cold, itís wet, and it sticks to everything. Perhaps his mind will be changed once this afternoon is finished . . .

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1499 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/03/07 Updated: 12/03/07


Reviewer: betsy Signed
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Couldn't Be Happier

Oh this was precious! I love Lucious fics where's he's not a complete jerk. Feel free to continue this, I know I'd love to see where this relationship goes. :)betsy

Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed this. This fic will not be continued, but if you visit my author\'s page, you will see that there are several other Lucius/Andromeda fics by me, if you are interested in reading them. :) Thanks for reviewing!

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