Oh that was marvelous. Absolutley wonderful. I really like your storytelling, it flows beautifully. Remus' realization of what he'd done and how he made Tonks more vulnerable was perfect. :)betsy
Oh, craptastic! My heart is racing here, I do hope you've got Ch. 4 up and ready!
Great storytelling, suspensful and it flows beautifully. I knew this would happen (Remus leaving), of course, but it doesn't make it any easier to take! Please update soon! :)betsy
Author's Response: Craptastic is one of my favorite words. Thank you. :-)
Oh, that was heartwrenching! Well written and absolutely stunning, thank you. :)betsy
Author's Response: You\'re welcome! :-)
Holy goodness!!! My hearts just pitter-pattering with this delicious bit of naughty pleasure! I love Lucious...LOVE him and the though of him and spit-fire Ginny together....oh, that's just divine! I will definately be checking ff.net to see if you've continued!! :)betsy
Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you enjoyed it. There\'s nothing new to read at ff.net yet, but I do plan to continue. Thanks for reviewing!
Oh my goodness, this was fantastic! I am so proud of you! I really felt the emotions of both characters, especially Remus. He loves her so much but is so torn between wanting to be with her and what he believes is keeping her safe. I particularly loved this part: "Not to mention, Tonks is young. She deserves somebody young and whole, not old and broken. Also, I am far too poor. I can't just- she needs... someone better than me. Someone who could do more for her."
Oh girl, this was better than I anticipated and I'm so happy to finally read it! Chop chop and get up Chapter 2!!!! :)betsy (YaYa)
Author's Response: Thank you so much Aunt YaYa!!! I like that line too. I am thinking I need to add a few more words into the story, like dialogue. I\'m not sure. Don\'t worry, the next one should be posted in the next few days.
Oh, that's a heartbreaker. I mean, it's for the best but it still makes me a bit sad. I'm pretty new to the Remus/Hermione ship so I'm still kind of 'feeling' my way around it...but I could probably jump aboard, I do like me some Remus. Of course it helps when the story is as intriguing as this, as well-written and enjoyable. Looking foward to Ch. 3!
Author's Response: Yes, the exposition is quite sad, but I\'ve got to get them all single and stuff before they can get together! =)
The romance comes pretty slow in this one so you should have plenty of chance to feel your way through it! Thanks for reviewing!
This is wonderful so far. We all know Remus should have lived so I'm so excited to see where your take on him as a single father will lead. :)betsy
Oh this was precious! I love Lucious fics where's he's not a complete jerk. Feel free to continue this, I know I'd love to see where this relationship goes. :)betsy
Author's Response: I\'m glad you enjoyed this. This fic will not be continued, but if you visit my author\'s page, you will see that there are several other Lucius/Andromeda fics by me, if you are interested in reading them. :) Thanks for reviewing!