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Ardent by junior_achievement
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 58]

Summary: Following the Final Battle, two young couples share their first post-war conversations and finally admit their true feelings for each other.

one-shot

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3689 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/03/08 Updated: 01/09/08


Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice story! You got the characters just right

Author's Response: thanks for the review =)

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice story! You got the characters just right

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice story! You got the characters just right

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 01/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice story. You got the characters
just right

 

Great Expectations by Cassandras Cross
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 505]

Summary: A weekend trip to the mysterious Rose Cottage leads to Ginny's second pregnancy and Hermione's first. The Potters and Weasleys take on “The Next Great Adventure” as they anticipate the births of Albus Potter and Rose Weasley.

NOW COMPLETE!


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 107864 Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/08 Updated: 07/25/08


Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 03/23/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: A Safe Bet

Very nice little snippet. I love the " thud" but would relly liked to have actually heard the conversation between H and R. Still, woth the wait. Will you continue with this story? Hope so.

Author's Response: Oh, yes, I\'m continuing the story. I\'ve already written 23 chapters ahead, but Mugglenet has been very slow in validating updates. Sorry about that, but it\'s really not my fault as I\'ve been posting new chapters the very same day the last ones are validated.

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 04/18/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Life Challenged

This story keeps getting more and more intersting! Keep up the good work

Author's Response: And there are plenty more twists and turns to come. Thanks for your comments.

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 04/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Wistful Looks

Great story

Author's Response: Thank you!

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 05/30/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Meet the Parents

What a beautiful chapter. It was nice to finally meet "Lily Potter". I do think she and Ginny would have loved each other.
Please keep on with this wonderful story. I think its wonderful that Rose will be there to help Albus with his quest. Is the other one of the future trio Scorpius?

Author's Response: I do think Lily and Ginny would gotten on quite well. Though of course if Lily had lived, Harry\'s situation would have been very different, wouldn\'t it? It\'s interesting to speculate. As for the third member of the \"new\" trio, that will be revealed in a future chapter. Thanks for your comments!

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

Another beautiful chapter. I felt as though I were in the NICU with Ginny, everything was so vivid. Excelent chapter.

Author's Response: Thanks, that\'s very flattering. I appreciate your review.

 

The Women Who Won by Laurelyn
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 33]

Summary: The battle is fought, the war is won--but no victory ever comes cheap. Join Alice, Andromeda, Ginny, Narcissa, Luna, Molly, and Hermione as they discover the cost of war.

EDIT: I'm back! And I am SO SORRY I was gone so long. There is absolutely no excuse for making you wait almost three years for an update. *hides from angry reviewers* The next chapter is in the queue!

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mental Disorders

Word count: 9238 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
01/16/08 Updated: 12/31/12


Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 02/26/08 Title: Chapter 3: Ginny

Very nicely written. I could just "see" Ginny and Harry. Keep up the good work. Will you be doing one on Hermione as well?

Author's Response: Yes, a chapter on Hermione will be up eventually. Thank you for the review! I\'m glad you could \"see\" the characters; that was my intention!

 

I'll Never Let Go by bubblegumpinkhair
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 49]

Summary: Hermione decides that she's done with Ron and his constant want to pick fights with her. Not thinking that things could get any worse, Ron tells her how he really feels. Cute little One Shot form Ron's POV. Definitely a little fluffy.

Excerpt:

Her eyes widened and she opened her mouth to say something. When nothing came out, I removed my hand from her chin, and I felt my face flushing scarlet again.

How could I have been so stupid?

I understand, I heard myself saying, but deep down I knew I never would.


Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1746 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/23/08 Updated: 02/09/08


Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 02/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice little story. I can just "hear" Ron thinkinf his thoughts about how inadequate he thinks he is. Ron and Hermione have always been my favorite pairing. Keep up the good work

Author's Response: Thanks! R/Hr has always been my OTP too! Well, besides R/Me, but that fic is for a different time.....*goes of to her fantasy land* ......... Anyways thanks for taking the time to review, it means alot!

 

Challah and Pumpkin Juice by Calico
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 119]

Summary: Tzipporah Stein, a Jew living in Vienna, Austria on the eve of WWII, is shocked when she gets a letter telling her she is a witch. The volatile state of Europe as it waits for both a muggle and a wizarding war to begin has prompted Hogwarts to take in students from many countries. How will Tzipporah handle magic, mischief, and even a little romance while trying to be true to her religion and culture at the same time?

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 32994 Chapters: 16 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/24/08 Updated: 07/26/08


Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 05/14/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter Eight: Beneath the Stars

Another excellent chapter in a wonderful story. I hope you can continue this for a long time. BTW did I miss Yom Kippur? I remember reading about Rosh Hashanah but not the Day of ATonement.

Author's Response: Everyone seems extremely worried about the fact that I skipped Yom Kippur. No, I didn\'t forget the order of the Jewish holidays. I simply decided to sort of mush it into Rosh Hashana (note the line where Tzipporah apologzies to God for committing the sin of lying to her friends) because if I made a chapter for every single holiday this story would be too long. Plus, I really want to get to Tu B\'shvat ASAP, but you\'ll have to wait and see why. And for all you reviewers who insist on repeating the Yom Kippur question, this is the last time I\'ll answer it.

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 02/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Very interesting premise. Tzipporah powers will most ikelymake her an outsider to her co religionists and her religion and customs will most likely make her an outsider at Hogwarts. an't wait to see where you are going with this.

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 07/27/08 Title: Chapter 16: Epilogue

Another absolutely perfect chapter. So...
Tziporah is Harry's Grandmother. Thatwould make Harry 1/4 Jewish. How apt.After all the Jews went through during WWI, it's no wonder that Harry fought injustice and evil ( Voldemort) as hard as he did. this has been just a wonderful story to read. It is with my favorites. I know I'll read it again and again. Hate tohave it end. Beautiful epilogue

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 05/18/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Nine: Chanukah Revelations

Another lovely chapter! I'm glad you've allowed us to enjoy these rather " light" days, because we know darker things will be coming. Can't wait for the next installment. Shalom

 
Reviewer: elevenses Signed
Date: 05/07/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter Seven: Rosh Hashana

This story is getting better and better .Just one question. shouldn't Yom Kippur come after Rosh Hashanah or is that just too hard to write.

Author's Response: You are quite right - Yom Kippur should come next. But I decided to kind of skip over it since they\'re so close together, and because so much of Yom Kippur has to do with the congregation (I mean, can you imagine Tzipporah getting out her shofar and trying to find a place in Hogwarts where no one would hear it?) But I did slip in the line about her repenting of her sin of lying. That\'s about as much as I could do.

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