My name is Caitlin. I'm sixteen years old, and a sophomore in high school. I play tennis and badminton. I'm a very girly girl, but also sporty too. I like to dress up at the mall with my friends and see movies and hang out. I also really like to write stories, and I hear I'm a pretty good writer. But, that choice is up to all of you.
Hello Sunchilde!! I really LOVE your story so far!!! You are doing a FANTASTIC job!!! I hope that you will update this story soon, seeing as it has been 3 months since you have updated, but take the time you need, I'm a writer for a fanfic myself and I know that you can't always write and update. But I have grown quite attached to your story and hope that you will update soon. You are a GREAT writer by the way!!
Oh, and another thing; I love that part in your story were you had Dudley kick Malfoy's butt!!!! I love reading these when Malfoy gets it!! Please update soon!! 10/10!!
Please update!! When you write a fanfic, you have to keep to it or don't write one at all. Because you haven't updated in forever!! Please update!!
Hi, I love your story!!! That was a great start to a story also. This is how I kind of think that it will happen, that JKR will do all this Ron/Hermione stuff and then suddenly turn it to Harry/Hermione. I, being a strong Harry/Hermione shipper, think that this will somewhat happen. I give your entire story a 10/10. You should keepn writing!! You write these very well and you have great ideas!! Perfect Story!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Go H/Hr, I say. I'm glad you liked it all, also very flattered. You rock! A-
this is one of the weirdest stories I've ever read, lol...........
This was such a sad story, it was really good though, but it made me cry (silently), because it was really good, but sad............
Hermione knew this thing she had with Malfoy was purely physical. She knew she shouldn't have fallen in love with him. And she knew that when he said he loved her too, a dozen misfortunes would befall them. Yet they both did admit it and just when she thought this temporary relationship might just last, she was left all alone and he?...Well he became one of Them.
RUNNER-UP in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards for "The Where Did That Come From Award" (Best Twists and Turns) and WINNER in the He Had it Coming Awards.
I also want to add that all this support you all have given me is just fabulous. Thanks a lot. I love you guys!
I agree, you have really out done yourself with this one. It is a really great story and I love reading it!! I hope that you put the next chapter out soon!!
Great story!! I'm glad that you FINALLY finished, lol. Keep writing, you really are a great writer!! Hope to read more from you soon!! Caity
Sean, I love your story so far, even though this your first one, I still really like it and I think that you are doing a GREAT job!! Please update soon, for I really want you to continue with this story!!
Hi, I really like your story and would like to know when you are going to FINALLY update. it has been over 2 months, so please review, I mean, after all, once yo start a fanfic, it's only right to finish it! 10/10 so far!
Wow, mudblood79, wow!! That was a great story, I truly loved it, it is definately going on my accounts "favorites" list!! Your story was great, and I say again that it was truly wonderful!! The only part that I didn't like was the fact that Ron and Ginny died, but it had to happen right??!! I truly hope that you write another one, because yours are very good. Also, you work with Sunchilde on her story "The Diary of Lily Potter" right?? I hope that you guys will update that story soon, as it is another of my favorites!! Anyway, I say once again, that was a great story and hope that you will write more. 10/10!!! (I would go higher if I could).
Author's Response: Hello, Thanks for your review, it's always great to hear from my readers. I didn't like killing off Ron and Ginny either, and that was a tough decision on my part. But from reading the books, I noticed how close the trio was. Then I got to thinking, you know, just what if, ron and Ginny died? How would Harry and Hermione act? Orginally I also thought I would have Ron become a deatheater but that was so much unlike Ron, even I wasn't too crazy about it. Now for the Diary of Lily Potter, I'd sure like to see Sunchilde update as well, but unfortantely she has too much going on in her life. She was in a car Accident and she's getting ready to move, and it doesn't help her story for the matter that she has a serious case of writers block as well. Which is a pity because I had so much fun working with her on the story. All is well I guess, because I'm deploying to Norway in August, then to Egypt in September, plus I'm getting ready to move myself. I'm going back to the University of Wyoming, to Major in English and Creative Writing. Thanks again for your reviews they mean alot to me.
Also, could you maybe help me sometime with my fanfic??? I sent in the first chapter last Monday, and it still hasn't come up yet, but when it does, could you possibly review it and tell me if it was bad or not?? I mean, I have other people already doing this, that have written other fanfics on this site, but since yours was so good and you have even written your own book......could you possibly?? That would be great if you did!! I can't wait to read more stories from you!!
Author's Response: I'll definately keep an eye out for it.
Hi Beth, will you please update soon?? This was the very first story I read on here and I really liked it, so could you PLEASE update very soon!!?? We are all waiting.
Author's Response: hey Caity! I know, and I'm sorry, but it's gonna be a while longer as I want to get the other story I'm working on out of the way. But I do have the first part of ch. 6 of 'Torn' done, so I'm almost there. Just be patient with me.
It was good, but.....a little short, I still loved it, I just wish that it was a little longer. I hope that if you get the time, you can put up the next chapter, I really want to know what happens.
Author's Response: :-D Thank you!! I know, I already finished the 10th chapter a long time ago... but MNFF gets really flooded with stories, so I understand the long wait... It now takes about a week, but I'll get it up asap!!
Hi, I just read your story, and I love it!! I hope that you update soon, I know that it takes some time, I mean I submitted a chapter for my fanfic awhile ago, and they haven't even reviewed it yet! Grrr.....Well, anyway, I hope that your next chapter comes up soon, again, I love it!!
Hey Sarah, It's Caitlin!! I finally figured out how to review on here!! Anyway, Thanks for the link to chapter 5 before, but now that it's on here, I read it again and I still think that it is really good!! But was that the of your story?? Anyway, I give your story a perfect ten!! And remember, you will read mine when it comes up right??
Author's Response: Of course I will read yours.
Also, you will have an epilouge right?? And it will be happier right?? Because your story is the only story I like that of which Harry actually dies, so please make the epilouge happy!!
Author's Response: yes the epilogue will be happier. It will sort of provide..closure.
Hey Sarah, remember me? It's Caity!! I loved your epilouge!! At first I thought that you were going to make it a SS/HG romance and it started to freak me out!! But, then I saw that you weren't and I was at ease, lol!! Anyway, this last chapter was really sad, it made me cry!! I was surprised at the end how Harry came back and all, but it was good to hear from him again. Also, I'm glad that Hermione is at peace now. This was a really great story Sarah, and you should be VERY proud of yourself!! I give your whole story a perfect 10!!! Keep up the good work and write some more!! Caity
Sarah, when are you gonna submit the epilouge???
Remember me? Haha. I've been thinking about your story a lot lately, and I decided I would log on (for the first time in almost a year, I might add) and reread it. Just like the first time I read it, over a year ago, it's still a wonderful story. And I continue to applude you on it. It's still very sad though. :]] I cried yet again. Anyway, again, fantastic story.