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Hey! I honestly don't know why you're taking the time to read this. There are much better things to do on this site, such as reading the thousands of fanfics (by the way, I really recommend that you read stuff by cjbaggins, and I'm not just saying that because she's my mom).
I guess you have nothing better to do with your day, as you decided to sit here and continue reading. I might as well tell you something about myself. I love everything Harry Potter, duh. You probably do too, otherwise you wouldn't be on this site. I play volleyball and am on my school's track team. I'm addicted to the orange scented marker in those packs of smelly markers you can get, although I hate the black one. I think it's licorice or something. I love all of Chris Daughtry's songs. If you have been living on the moon or something and have no idea who he is, I suggest you look him up on the net and listen to some of his songs. If you are one of those people, who for some strange reason, don't like his music, than I think you should change your mind, as he is AWESOME!!!
that was great. i really enjoyed it because you wrote the characters very well, so it seemed like it actually happened in the book.
this is so well written. i love it!! do you have any other stories about snape?
Author's Response: Thanks! Er, yeah, you might say I have a couple. Check the authorpage... ;)
that was so good, i can't believe i'm wasting time writing this instead of going to go read the next chapter!
this is brilliant, you are really good at writing for the characters. i love that some of it's from hermione's perspective, cuz i find it much easier to relate to than harry's
really sweet!! love how you wrote it (you got the characters right and everything!!) sorry, it's just that lots of stories make them sound very odd.
Author's Response: Thank you! I realize it was quite fluffy, but it\'s nice to hear that someone thought I had the characters more or less right. =)
wow. that was pretty good, although i was surprised that they were playing a muggle game.
Author's Response: hmm. I guess I never thought of that.
i read the first sentence, and it's kinda bugging me, but hermione's middle name is JEAN, not jane
(says so in the beginning of DH, in the will of albus dumbledore)
millicent bulstrode??? i thought the whole time i was reading it that you were writing about ron (up until the herbology part). really good!
Author's Response: Thanks!
And in the middle of the scurry and flurry and before the outright fury of the confrontation, Harry’s two best friends come upon their own piece of the revered word and its many-fold but meekest meaning.Don’t let my artsy summary fool you. This is my one true pairing, pure and simple, and the events that just piled on top of each other leaving Hermione with no other inclination than to finally fling herself to Ron for that Kiss.
~Written as a present for Ginny Weasley Potter. Happy birthday, sis!
i've been a r/hr since the 2nd book, so i loved this. it was really well written
i love the stories that take place within the books, because even after another book is written, your story is usually still correct. and i'm not really making any sense now, so i think i'm just gonna go read another story
Author's Response: *grins* I think I understood, anyway. Thanks for reviewing!
hi mom! good story! it looks so much more professional on screen than in your notebook
Author's Response: thanks sweetie. now get off the computer and do your homework!
just thought i'd comment on this. sorry, but cryptic messages??? i don't even know what cryptic means! oh, great. shouldn't have said that. now you're gonna tell me to look it up in the dictionary.
anyway, i love the story. you should really write another one. soon. please?
Author's Response: I will, I will. Let me finish my course first, would you? Oh, and by the way ... look it up! Mom xxoo
your daughter doesn't like snape for many reasons. for one thing, he missed all his chances with lily. the guy's way too shy. and then he held so many grudges against harry. that was really unfair. and these aren't very good arguments. but i still don't like him.
Author's Response: The grudges I\'ll give you. Snape was a very petty, petty man. I understand his pain and jealousy was overwhelming, but he could have been more mature in his treatment of Harry et al. The shyness, I won\'t give you. His is the classic unrequited love story and it made him an unexpected hero. As a hopeless romantic, in all senses of the word, I appreciate that storyline, and that\'s why I love his character and his portrayal at the end of the series. I find his character easier to swallow than the switch in Dumbledore that we saw, with the whole using Harry. That bugged me more, I think, than Snapes\' petty treatment.
finish writing the next one ok? but don't do it right now, i need the computer
Author's Response: I will, I will. I\'m out of ideas at the moment, though. and I\'m almost off the computer, I was exploring Ms Rowling\'s site!
awwww....... couldn't be first review. you probably like it better this way, because then you know somebody other than me is reading this story. anyway, i really love it. my only concern is that you haven't sent in the next chapter yet. this might disappoint your millions of fans out there, so you better start writing soon! this review is getting way too long. i love you mom!
Author's Response: You\'ll always be first with me, sweetie! My concern is that I haven\'t finished writing the end of chapter 2 yet. I need some help, please! *millions of fans* rofl. I wish. I love you, too!
yay! first review. finally. you gotta hurry up and do the next one now mom. i still think ginny's line about the neighbour is too cheesy, ooc.
Author's Response: I\'ll work on the next chapters over Christmas break, you know that. And I know you still don\'t like Ginny\'s line, but I thought she was being all supportive of Hermione, so there. *sticks tongue out at daughter* Still love you.
fred and george have been my favourite characters from book one, so i was very sad when he died. i love reading all the stories about how the death affected everyone, but i've never before read one from fred's pov. very well done!
Author's Response: Thank you! Fred\'s death left me reeling. Knowing Fred, however, I figured he\'d accept it and make the best of it, so I\'d better do the same. This is the first post-DH story I\'ve been able to write (haven\'t been able to really accept it all til now). Anyway, thanks for the R&R!