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Who is your Harry Potter Soulmate?
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You scored as Ginny Weasley
Thats right! You are the brilliant redhead named Ginvera! She's the coolest girl in the HP universe, to be sure...other then Snape...oh, waiy, nevermind
I'll get around to writing my bio someday. Right now there's just random stuff here :D
Great job! I love how everything fits together. and it wasn't too fluffy.
the characters were all really good. Harry especialy was very in character. Ginny was good too. [:
you're forgiven :)
this chapter wasn't that funny, but lily's upset, so it works. i loved how thier not kissing when lily walks in on them, it's more real the way you wrote it. i don't hate terry- he seemed confused. i hope lily and james could get togeter now!
where did chapter 3 go? i saw it before, but i didn't have time to read it, and now its gone.
wow. this chapter was just as good as the last one, even better. i loved how lily and james are so happy and in love, despite the circumstances. and i love how lily still cares about snape-she doesn't seem like the type to just forget him. also, i like how you used the few real glimpses of spape we got in the book (especialy his selfishness) and gave him a personality. i think his real emotions would show durring the scenes you wrote, not a mask. my favorite part was where lily cares for james after the fight and snape turns to the death eaters. it shows how the war's going on through all this, and its sad how little time lily and james have together when thier so much in love, just because of snape's 'friends'
well. that was kind of long, but i loved this story. i think its almost as good as the books :)
Author's Response: Believe me, I don\'t mind a long review! :) Thanks for the high praise, I\'m glad you like what I did with Snape. I too think it is incredibly sad how little time James and Lily have together.
this chapter's even better than the last one. i love how you characterized ginny and neville. i especialy like how you made luna more serious, yet kept her weirdness. i think the ministry breakin in should have happened a little later though.
can't wait to read more ;-)
Author's Response: No, the Ministry break-in really happened on September the second. Harry comes back to Grimmauld Place on the first and notes that surveillance is even greater than usual, and then he goes in and has the conversation with Ron and Hermione where he says, \"I think we should do it tomorrow.\" And they do.
i loved this story! i was smiling like an idiot by the end. i like how you had backround stories about lily's dad and the little kids. i especialy like how lily's life isn't perfect and that james isn't the only reason she was unhappy at the begining.
Author's Response: Ahh, thank you! I\'m glad you liked it, I wasn\'t too sure. :D
i love how you jumped into the plot at the begining, instead of making us wait. i also liked how Lily woke up on her desk. you also write really well- the words kinda flow. can't wait to read more!
ok. i was just reading the 1st part all the way in the begining. i KNEW the car was gonna crash! thats all i had to say. i'll go read the rest now:-)
... that was really sad. i had tears in my eyes even though lily's mom was a OC. i love how you wrote all the emotion, it seemed very real. i think you also wrote lily's character well, ialways pictured her very strong. i liked the way you started this story-very unique.
can't wait to read more!
I love this chapter! you're really good at making characters- even though Daphne and Nott already existed. I love Daphne's character especialy. not all slytherins have to be mean :)
the whole daphne/nott thing was really good too. It's so cute how she gets shy in front of him. i think i was grinning stupidly near the end :D
I'm really looking foward to the next chapter! is it going to be about ron again?
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I\'m very glad you liked my depiction of Daphne and Theo - there\'s going to be more much \"interaction\" between them in future chapter ;) And yes, not all Slytherins have to be mean or even 100% bad - I think all of them have a good and bad side. The next chapter is in the queue and should be posted soon, and the one after that will be 100% about Ron and Herm, so you won\'t have to wait very long!
I like this! It's intresting from the start, it made me wonder what happened to the engagement. i love how you started the story with charactes we don't know. it shows how other people were effected by the war too.
Author's Response: I\'m glad you like it, and thanks for reviewing. I really want to create a large scope on the impact of the war in this story, outside of Harry\'s group of friends. You\'ll find out more about Daphne soon :)
i know i just reviewed the last one, but this chapter is really good.
i love that part where ron feels like he has to help george-that's just like him. it also makes sense that hermione would take comfort in the muggle world, after all she's been through.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I\'m glad you liked the way I wrote Ron and Hermione, they\'re characters dear to my heart, and they have alot coming up in future chapters. I agree that Ron would definitely be the type to stick to his family in times of need.
oh yeah. i forgot to ask- what does the title mean?
Author's Response: lol I should probably have said that in the first chapter! It means \"he who conquers is the one who first conquers himself\".
you write harry/ginny really well! this story keeps getting better and better. The thing i love the most is that its not a happy ending right away.
You wrote the problems between harry and ginny really well. Ginny especialy was completely in character the whole time. And i love how you brought Neville's gran in- the last part made me laugh. : D
Can't wait to read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks - I\'m really, really glad you liked my take on H/G because I didn\'t want to be fluffy and have them reconcile right away, but I was afraid it was too angsty. I just like to write them that way ^^ The next chapter will be up very soon!
that was really good. i loved the end when james comes home and snape watches through the window.
He should hate it: it was Potter’s flesh and blood. But his eyes were bright green and curious. Lily’s eyes.
That was my favorite par. you're the first author that made me see how wrong james/lily seemed through snape's eyes.
one thing that seemed kinda wierd was that snape even got in thier home. even if it was before the prophacy, i think there'd be some spells protecting the house. both lily and james were in the order, so they'ed be targets.
but i still loved this story! i'm gonna read another one of yours right now. (:
i thnk this is gonna be really good. you stayed in character with eveyone we're familiar with.
hermione's line in the article seems like something she'd really say. the article was one of the best parts. it seems just like harry to reject the tornament idea.
my favorite thing was that teddy hated victorie. it'd be boring if he loved her from the start. can't wait till the next chapter comes up!
Author's Response: I agree, I definitely didn\'t want to do a love at first sight think. This way\'s more fun to write. Thanks for your review.
that was really good! i love how andromeda's a slytherin, it makes it more intresting for her ro be fighting with her feelings for ted. is this the end, or is there more?
i hope there is *hint hint* *nudge nudge* :)
wow. this was the best post-battle fic i read yet. i love how harry couldn't sleep in the begining, it was very realistic.
i also loved all the emotions. Especialy the fact that evryone was still sad. i think the best part was when harry walked around the castle- you wrote the very well :)
hope there's more!
Author's Response: The walk around Hogwarts was one of my favorites. Harry just had to say good-bye. Chapt. 2 is with my beta. Thanks for the review
Great Job!!! That was really good, even if it was short. It was one those fics that make me love Harry even more. it was hilarious how slow he was. He is after all, a little clueless on emotional girls. :)
'But Ginny had said that wasn’t the case. How perplexing.'
I had to quote that. It was really funny :D
Author's Response: Clueless!Harry is among my favorites to write. I\'m really glad you enjoyed it! :D
this is even better than The Last Goodbye. Your stories are always so real. I love them! I think this is one of my favorites. :)
I love how James made Lily happier than Snape. I hate the thought of Lily loving Snape more. But you made snape's character really convincing- he was brave and clever, yet a little selfish. Of course i loved Sirius too. And the reason James hated Snape was convincing.
p.s.- Congrats on winning the Quicksilvers! you deserved it :)
Author's Response: Aww! Thank you. :D
that was really good! i love the last line the most. i think that's exactly how goerge would have felt, since they always did everything together before.
Author's Response: Thank you!