One-Shot (for now)
I loved this! I owuld love to know if she was so unhappy as him. And I wonder why she dated him in the first place if she was lying to herself.
silly silly girl.
This was so cute!!! ^_^
I really wanted to know what happened next (it isn't difficult through the "dots so close together" clue). But I guess the imagination is flowing in my head and birds are singing *blushes*
Great story! :D
Author's Response: That way you can imagine the end the way you prefer... holding hands? Kisses? accidental bumb against one another? Have it your way, but have fun with it. Thanks for the review!
Probably I'm just one more of thousands of reviewers. But I don't care.
Your story touched me in a way I never felt before. Fortunately for me I've got a person that loves me and holds me in a way I've never imagined before. Reading your story made me think about what would be to lose that someone.
Don't go think it's a bad thing, 'cause it's not. Sometimes you don't give the true value to people in your life, and never say the things you really want to. The last chapter was the only one were a small tear dropped from the corner of my eye. I couldn't help it. I sense that you feel the same way as me, that Hermione didn't need to Ron to tell her (in her grave) that final PS. She knew it, didn't she? Of course.
Sorry to take your story so seriously, but I must admit that this is the best story I've ever read in my life (and I've been in the ff world about two years). You've captured Ron's emotions in a way i can't even describe.
I know I'm just one more reviewer, one more person who enjoyed your story. But remember that I'm too, a person you touch the heart.
Thank you very much for writing this story.
Author's Response: This may sound cheesy, but you are not \'just another reviewer\'. To me, all reviews, and reviewers, are important and meaninnful. They are a great motivation to keep writing and it\'s always a wonderful thing to read that some people liked your work, especially when you put so much effort into it. This story is really simple in a way and the general idea is nothing new, but I still needed a lot of time, rewrote chapters completely up to seven times, negociated with betas, and thought about the plot for a considerate amount of time. So, no, you\'re not just \'another reviewer\'. I would not take the time to reply to everybody if they didn\'t mean a thing to me. I appreciated your review very much and I\'m glad to read that it made you realise the importance to appreciate the important people around us while they\'re still here. I wasn\'t intending to put a moral in the story but I wanted people to be able to relate to the plot and the characters. I wanted it to be realistic enough that readers would be able to understand what was going on, even the many unsaid things. You are also right about that; Hermione didn\'t need to head the P.S. She knew, and I believe she had for a long time. It was hinted in one of the letters. And she knew Ron enough as to not expect it said so bluntly. His actions always spoke better that his words. Well, I could go on and on, but I\'m not even sure if you\'ll read this reply... But I still thank you very very much for this review. It meant a lot to me.
OMG please continue because I'm so hot just imaginig Draco in a towel and all wet.... xD
But I'm really enjoying the story