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I'll Hate You Forever (I Think) by kris250
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1038]

Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 66757 Chapters: 56 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 09/27/11


Reviewer: mon18 Signed
Date: 08/30/09 Title: Chapter 52: Utter Melee

awesome! loved the fight scene, it wasn't too drawn out but it wasn't too short either. I'm glad you've started writing again, i can honestly say ive missed reading this story. Can't wait to read wat happens next!

 

Summary: Summary: Life for fifteen-year old Lily Evans is pretty crazy. So when Gods-gift-to-the-women-of-Hogwarts, James Potter himself, develops a crush on her, life gets even crazier. And with an insane, gorgeous best friend who belongs in a house for the criminally mad, a bunch of Marauders playing pranks and plenty of laughs, her only retreat is her faithful diary. Yes it’s shaping up to be quite a year…






This story is now in the process of being re-written. Please keep an eye on my author's page as I will update it with a note when I begin to put up the rewritten chapters.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 13919 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
09/27/05 Updated: 03/09/06


Reviewer: mon18 Signed
Date: 12/01/07 Title: Chapter 6: Touch Me, and I'll Kill You

hey love the story so far! i noticed that you've been spelling phsycomaniac physcomaniac, just thought id let you know.

 

Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158315 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: mon18 Signed
Date: 09/05/07 Title: Chapter 48: It's Nearly Over

omgg i loved this chapter, especially the last bit with the two elves it was sooo cute! :)


Author's Response: Glad you liked it!

 

Love Can't Be Stopped by ambush
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 146]

Summary: New year, new start, new feelings. Has James' newly deflated ego and mature attitude finally won over the heart of Lily Evans? With a mixture of embarrassing situations, falling out of bed, and roaming hands, this year could be an interesting one.


My first fanfic everybody, so any criticism is very welcome! enjoy!



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 22333 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
12/09/05 Updated: 08/24/08


Reviewer: mon18 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 10: An Eventful Holiday Season (part 2)

wow this chapter is just full of surprises! it was good! but wtf was up with all the random numbers thru the last half? it rlly took away fron the story

Author's Response: Hehe thank you. - Thanks so much for telling me that - must have been some error on the internet or something because they certainly weren't there when I was editing it! Thanks again.

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