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From Fen to Glen by Magical Maeve

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Salazar Slytherin is old and weary, but still working his own brand of magic. He finds himself in a tavern in the northern town of Alnwick, reflecting on what was, and on what could have been.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 11/28/07 Title: Chapter 2: Birth

This is so good! Really atmospheric! *adds to favourites*

Silenced Whispers by LostMaeblleshire

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Little is known of the ghosts which reside here within the walls of Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. For some, their pasts have been entirely erased from memory, and all that remains is but a shadow of their former selves. We mortal beings know nothing of death, for it hides its secrets, only unearthing them as we pass beyond after our final moments, yet then, there are still some who fear what lies ahead once we are gone.

A book of death-day one-shots, put together in this manner because of the prologue. (Otherwise, it might be separate one-shots in a series.) This could be horror or angst, but I thought, as it isn't intentionally morbid, that historical would do best.

Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 10/24/07 Title: Chapter 2: The Bloody Baron

this is the best history fi I have ever read!

Harry Potter and the Grace-Fallen Widow by kxlayton

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: THE END IS NEAR. . .

Even Draco Malfoy is fearful of the end and joins ranks with Harry for his own protection, or at least that is what he leads everyone to believe. An unidentified Deatheater is found murdered in a dark alleyway. A Hogwarts teacher is found dead within the halls of the castle with Harry's name engraved in the forehead. It is definitely dark times.

Harry finds himself in constant self-conflict about who he really is, realizing new strengths and weaknesses. Hormones begin to flare. Secrets are created and exposed. Hearts are broken. Friends are lost, and the darkness of death envelopes the magical world, and even the Muggle world.

With the aid of the mysterious Grace-Fallen Widow, will Harry finally end all this chaos or shall he be destroyed in it?
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 08/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: Tarnished Silver and Fire Glass

Great! I am so please that I get to beta a story as good as this. I can't wait for the next chapter.

Always Off The Mark by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Merope Gaunt is sick of bending over backwards to please her family, is sick of always doing things wrong, is sick of always being off the mark. She mixes up a potion to change her life, hoping that maybe this time she's done something right.

Originally entered for the fifth New Year's Challenge, To Laugh or Cry.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 11/24/07 Title: Chapter 1: Always Off The Mark

Very good! And so said! *cries*

Author's Response: Thank you so much! *hands tissue* :)

A Father's Sacrifice by FeatherTrader

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Dean Thomas never knew his real father, yet his father was the one who made his life possible.

I am Sour.Apple. of Slytherin, and this is for MWPP: OWL level.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 08/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Brilliant and very affectting.

Poor Dean, not to know how good a man his father was.

Author's Response: Thank you for the review.

Jackie and her Giant by Thoth

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: As hard as it is to believe, Rubeus Hagrid was once eleven. Follow along through his awkwardness of being half giant, the death of his only parent, a very scandalous third year and his friendship with Jackie O’Reily, the only person who saw him for what he really was.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 06/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: When They Met...

How come you've only got one review? I love this fic so much. Hagrid is a great character and there isn't enough fics about him. I loved this story. Well done. Update ASAP

Teddy by dumbledorefluertwins

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. As an orphan, he has bounced backwards and forwards between his grandmother and his godfather. Follow him on a journey where he discovers the values of friendship, family and love, along with fighting the prejudices against his father, and getting through Defense Against the Dark Arts, with a teacher who just seems to hate him for no reason...

*DH spoilers, obviously*

NOTE: I am sorry, but I have left this site, due to lack of time and personal issues concerning RL and the site. This story is discontinued here, but may well be posted elsewhere in the future.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 2: With Love, Hugs and Warnings.

Brilliant (I never know what else to say in reviews sorry)

Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 11/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Really good! Please update soon!

Author's Response: Trying!

A Fresh Start by Hypatia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Scorpius Malfoy was brought up in the knowledge that he came from an old pure-blood family. Hogwarts is going to teach him a great deal more. Will he be able to rise above his family’s tainted past, or will history repeat itself?

First place in the 2007 Autumn Challenge’s New Beginnings prompt.

Nominated for Best History/Mystery in the 2008 QSQs!

Canon compliant with all seven books, however, not compliant with all interviews given by JKR.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 12: Den of Vipers

I am really enjoying this! Please update as soon as you can.

(No pressure though)

Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Great Expectations

Great update and brilliant characterisation.

Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 11/17/07 Title: Chapter 4: Seeing Things in a Different Light

Please update! It is fab!

Author's Response: Will do! And thank you!

Just Because of a Stupid Baby by Valentinia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Scorpius was finding it hard to concentrate on potions, and when he heard someone crying he just had to know what the matter was. What he discovered was more than he bargained for, and less than he imagined.

Originally for the September Challenge.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 09/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Interesting, and the way you used Scorpios was very good.

:) Molly

Ink Stains by bluemoon13

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The joys of the holidays are in the air. As many children wonder what is under their Christmas tree, there is only one thought on Severus' mind. Willshe like it?

Written by bluemoon13 of Hufflepuff for the November One-Shot Challenge.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 11/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very good! Really touching and sweet!

Little Things by lucilla_pauie

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
There are those ‘little things’

that could bridge the chasm of time,

fan dying embers,

burst into flame,

and bring a heart to touch another heart.*

~This is LucillaJoanna of Hufflepuff sipping cocoa and waxing poetic By the Fireside for The Winter Tales Challenges

Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 11/29/07 Title: Chapter 1: All chasms bridged

*sighs* I never know what to say in reviews. It was fabulas but I always think I should say more.

Anyway keep up the good work!

Angels Fall First by amzing

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a story of Tom Riddle, the boy that never became a man. This is how he changed to become what he was. This is the story, the real story, of how Tom Riddle became Voldemort.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Falling

Repaying you for my review!

This is really great. I love the characterisation and the very dark tone. Please update as soon as you can. :)

Author's Response: haha thanx for the review im glad you like it. I have a first chapter already written but i still have to edit it... Ill try to update as soon as I can :)

The Patient by MaiaMadness

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
“I’m still right here, giving blood and keeping faith, and I’m still right here.
If there were no rewards to reap, no loving embrace to see me through this tedious path I’ve chosen here, I certainly would have walked away by now.
I’m gonna wait it out. Be patient…
If there was no desire to heal, the damaged and broken met along this tedious path I’ve chosen here, I certainly would have walked away by now.
And I still may.”

Neville sits in St. Mungo’s, contemplating the futility of sitting there, hoping that his parents will get better and knowing they won’t; wondering if he’ll ever dare to allow himself a life; wishing that things had been different, that he’d had a mother’s arms to comfort him when he was sad, that he’d had a longer childhood and that he dared tear himself off the path of tedium and self-pity he is on to go talk to someone who cares…
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 08/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Patient

I loved this piece! It was really well written and I thought that the exploration of Nevel was exceptional.

Keep writting.

All He Knew by Indigoenigma

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Love.

It could lie dormant for years before it manifested. And once it did, it stayed.

And that was all that Albus knew.

Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 08/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: All He Knew

Beautiful. Lovely, lyrical prose and great characterisation.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.

"I Want To Go Home." by coolh5000

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: “But I want to go home,” whispered the girl. “I don’t want to fight anymore”
DH p558

Not everyone who fought in the Battle of Hogwarts wanted to be there, and not everyone survived. This is the story of one of those people.
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 08/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: "I Want To Go Home."

Brilliant. You are a true writter.

Honey by cassie123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione Granger made a career out of protecting house-elves. At forty-eight, she had moved on to bigger and better things. But when asked to take leave from work, Hermione is certain this can only mean failure.

So when Ron brings home the story of Honey the house-elf, Hermione makes a decision that could alter the course of her career - and ultimately her life.

Not only does Hermione have to convince the entire Wizengamot of Honey's innocence, she must also prove it to her family. And they have become those least likely to believe her.

‘Honey,’ I said. ‘That’s an unusual name for a house-elf.’

Ron cleared his throat loudly. ‘It’s also unusual for a house-elf to commit a murder.’


Epilogue now up!
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 08/11/08 Title: Chapter 1: Part I: The Arrest

Fantastic! Well done. Really great characterisation.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you think so! ~ Cassie

The Young Idealist by GryffindorGoddess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Charity Burbage has just received a degree in Wizarding Education and is ready to change the world one student at a a time. But first she must interview successfully and begin planning for next year’s classes!

Submitted for the Summer Challenges: Educational Decree by Gigi of Ravenclaw
Reviewer: CakeorDeath Signed
Date: 06/30/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Young Idealist

I love this! A great one shot and the character is really intriging. *Favourites*

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you like her, as she\'s really based on me and my experiences in being a first-year teacher this fall. O_o I\'m tickled that you left a review...I\'ve seen your posts around the forum (as I lurk there pretty much all day since I have too much time on my hands this summer) and I can\'t help but giggle every time I see your username. *loves and jealous I did not think of it first* Thanks again!