I read, garden, knit and study engineering.
I don't read or write fanfic so much anymore, but I reappear periodically to check up on old friends.
Lovely !~ =) Flows effortlessly, reads easily
accept my felicitations =)
I noticed only two typos:
"I tried too tame"
"somwhat of an optimist..."
Author's Response: Thanks for catching the typos—I\'ll be sure to fix them soon. Thanks! The next chapter will be back from my beta soon!
Good job! I just wish you'd introduced the killing of Lucius Malfoy somehow, we all know what awful, heinous, monstrous bastard he was, but it just seems so sudden..
Although I can see how witnessing someone who is obviously very guilty go free can be more than just a little disheartening.
Author's Response: Thank you! While it was tempting to focus on the actual murder itself, the point of the fic was more the consequences of the action, not the action itself. Although I was pretty tempted to go into detail :D
awww that's so cute.. *melts*
I don't even think it's *entirely* OOTC - we've seen the git sob over Lily's photos and whatnot and after all is said and done (and he's resurrected and avenged) he could have softened up a little. You're right about the love and happiness - I'm definitely feeling the warm and fuzzies right now (tea helps too). Would you mind writing a sequel? I'd beta =)
Author's Response: Melting is good!! Thanks very much for a lovely review, I\'m glad you didn\'t think he was too OOC. I was a little bit unsure about that. I\'d definitely agree that Snape can be a softy, Deathly Hallows was practically a sappy romance novel. Well, maybe not, but when you consider Snape, it definitely could have been :o) And if the offer still stands, I would love to have you beta, I\'m in dire need right now. Have you got a PI Beta account? No worries if you don\'t, we can work it out! Have a good one and thanks again for leaving your thoughts! -ickles.
Awww.. It's floofy, but I like it!
I remember the cute warning in your signature about femmeslash - it's kind of you to place it there - just in case.
I like femmeslash though and I think you thought of a lovely pairing - I adore Luna and I think Ginny is interesting in any pairing (except when paired with Harry ;). What was your inspiration?
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it, even if it was floofy :) After I read Dracona Fortuna\'s review I thought it\'d be a good idea to tell people who don\'t pay attention to the warnings about the subject matter. And as to the inspiration, I\'ve always wanted to do femmeslash, and Ginny/Luna was one I\'d been considering for awhile.
Awww that's so sweet!
Great story, very well-written, good vocabulary and choice of character (come on - it's lupin - our furry friend and mentor).
Everybody roots for the underdog, err.. wolf.
*adds to favorites*
Author's Response: Thanks! Well, there\'s still two more chapters coming up! ;)
I enjoyed everything, but the song component. Please don't hate me!
I think you did a fantastic job of capturing Lily's naivete. She's idealistic and she's very protective of her best friend (all of her friends, actually - hence Mary MacDonald).
Will there be sequels by chance?
Author's Response: Aw, why didn\'t you like the song? ^_^ I don\'t hate you - it\'s hard to hate reviewers! I don\'t know about sequels - not that you mention it I do have a few ideas, so maybe! Thanks for reviewing, and I\'m glad you liked the story!
You're one of my favorite authors and I was very excited when I read the note about your new fic.
It really is very well-written, however, there are a few little errors, such as:
a) There has only been one suspicious incidents
- it's singular, is it not?
b) (Mr Wellton — the chauvanist!)
- should be *chauvinist
Don't let this sadden you! The story was wonderful and I adored it.
Your faithful reader,
Awwww that's so sweet!!!
I loved your story and I adore *guilty look/shifty eyes* LE/SS
I think I'm going to go read everything you've ever written now,
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful, beautiful, adorably touching and well-executed piece of writing.
It's perfect, except for:
"object within could be scene"
"her mouth was pressing against her cheek"
* his, perhaps?
"was you that gave me"
* it was you who, "that" is reserved for inanimate objects and - quite unfairly - animals.
*goes to cry in the closet*
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thanks so much. I\'m sorry for the typos, and thanks for pointing them out. I\'m glad you liked it despite them. Thanks so much *hugs* Chante\'
Very good, very good!
I'm sorry, I can't give you a more thorough and detailed review - it's very late here.
I think I shold mention, however, "Petrificus Totalus" is spelled with a U.
Author's Response: Thank you!I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. And thank you for the spelling hint!
Ahh, Fluff McFlufferson.
Even if I don't agree that either Draco or mini-Draco (Scorpius) could have been any sort of attractive and even if I think that it's either Margaret, Margareta or Marguerite -
the fic is nice. Please continue.
Author's Response: LOL. I will continue, don\'t worry. Thanks for the review! *hugs*