Summary: Everyone assumes Sirius Black has never truly cared for a girl. They're wrong. It's just that he can't do anything about it.
Sirius/Lily? Read to find out.
Lovely !~ =) Flows effortlessly, reads easily
accept my felicitations =)
I noticed only two typos:
"I tried too tame"
"somwhat of an optimist..."
Author's Response: Thanks for catching the typos—I\'ll be sure to fix them soon. Thanks! The next chapter will be back from my beta soon!
Summary: In my version of the DH epilogue, set 19 years later. Harry has pushed his family away to protect them from the consequences of his actions. But what will happen when the consequences are different then he thought they would be?
IWhile DH is not excluded, the last chapter is. This also happens to be a part of the Ellie Vicky and Ellie Cathy series, although it is not vital to read "A Potter and a Malfoy."
Good job! I just wish you'd introduced the killing of Lucius Malfoy somehow, we all know what awful, heinous, monstrous bastard he was, but it just seems so sudden..
Although I can see how witnessing someone who is obviously very guilty go free can be more than just a little disheartening.
Author's Response: Thank you! While it was tempting to focus on the actual murder itself, the point of the fic was more the consequences of the action, not the action itself. Although I was pretty tempted to go into detail :D
Summary: Severus Snape contemplates his relationship with Hermione Granger during his evening routine. Hope you enjoy it, and thanks for reading!
awww that's so cute.. *melts*
I don't even think it's *entirely* OOTC - we've seen the git sob over Lily's photos and whatnot and after all is said and done (and he's resurrected and avenged) he could have softened up a little. You're right about the love and happiness - I'm definitely feeling the warm and fuzzies right now (tea helps too). Would you mind writing a sequel? I'd beta =)
Author's Response: Melting is good!! Thanks very much for a lovely review, I\'m glad you didn\'t think he was too OOC. I was a little bit unsure about that. I\'d definitely agree that Snape can be a softy, Deathly Hallows was practically a sappy romance novel. Well, maybe not, but when you consider Snape, it definitely could have been :o) And if the offer still stands, I would love to have you beta, I\'m in dire need right now. Have you got a PI Beta account? No worries if you don\'t, we can work it out! Have a good one and thanks again for leaving your thoughts! -ickles.
Summary: Ginny and Luna have a nighttime encounter on the Astronomy Tower. One-shot.
Awww.. It's floofy, but I like it!
I remember the cute warning in your signature about femmeslash - it's kind of you to place it there - just in case.
I like femmeslash though and I think you thought of a lovely pairing - I adore Luna and I think Ginny is interesting in any pairing (except when paired with Harry ;). What was your inspiration?
Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it, even if it was floofy :) After I read Dracona Fortuna\'s review I thought it\'d be a good idea to tell people who don\'t pay attention to the warnings about the subject matter. And as to the inspiration, I\'ve always wanted to do femmeslash, and Ginny/Luna was one I\'d been considering for awhile.
Summary: Remus Lupin never dreamed of going to Hogwarts because of his 'furry little problem'. However, when the letter arrives, he begins to think otherwise...
Second place winner in the 'New Beginnings' prompt for the Autumn Challenge!
Awww that's so sweet!
Great story, very well-written, good vocabulary and choice of character (come on - it's lupin - our furry friend and mentor).
Everybody roots for the underdog, err.. wolf.
*adds to favorites*
Author's Response: Thanks! Well, there\'s still two more chapters coming up! ;)
Summary: The innocence of childhood, the love in friendship. Lily finds Severus alone one night and tries to find out what is bothering him. One-Shot Song-Fic to Carrie Underwood's version of "I'll Stand by You".
I enjoyed everything, but the song component. Please don't hate me!
I think you did a fantastic job of capturing Lily's naivete. She's idealistic and she's very protective of her best friend (all of her friends, actually - hence Mary MacDonald).
Will there be sequels by chance?
Author's Response: Aw, why didn\'t you like the song? ^_^ I don\'t hate you - it\'s hard to hate reviewers! I don\'t know about sequels - not that you mention it I do have a few ideas, so maybe! Thanks for reviewing, and I\'m glad you liked the story!
Summary: Chris White is a primary school teacher who is bitterly disappointed with the educational system. When ten-year-old Estela joins his class midway through the year, he is faced with his toughest challenge yet. At first he cannot believe what is happening before his very eyes. Then, as he gradually grows to accept the unexplainable, he forms a close friendship with a child who has nobody else in the world to turn to.
A thousand thank yous go to Kumy for her amazingly thorough Beta job! *hugs*
You're one of my favorite authors and I was very excited when I read the note about your new fic.
It really is very well-written, however, there are a few little errors, such as:
a) There has only been one suspicious incidents
- it's singular, is it not?
b) (Mr Wellton — the chauvanist!)
- should be *chauvinist
Don't let this sadden you! The story was wonderful and I adored it.
Your faithful reader,
Summary: It's Lily's birthday and Severus feels that no matter what he gives her, it will never be special enough. The problem? Lily agrees with him.
Written by Pondering of Ravenclaw for November's One-Shot Challenge: Young Love.
Awwww that's so sweet!!!
I loved your story and I adore *guilty look/shifty eyes* LE/SS
I think I'm going to go read everything you've ever written now,
Summary: A puzzle box. A perfect, Fall day. And a friendship they thought would never end. Severus can remember it all so clearly, even years later, even after she was gone. But most importantly he remembers the colors: yellow, red, and white. Yellow for friendship. Red for love. And white...
White for silence.
Nominated in the 2008 QSQ for Best Dark/Angsty. SECOND PLACE WINNER OF THE NOVEMBER ONESHOT CHALLENGE.
I am thegirllikeme of Ravenclaw and this is my submission for the November Oneshot Challenge.
Thank you so much for writing this wonderful, beautiful, adorably touching and well-executed piece of writing.
It's perfect, except for:
"object within could be scene"
"her mouth was pressing against her cheek"
* his, perhaps?
"was you that gave me"
* it was you who, "that" is reserved for inanimate objects and - quite unfairly - animals.
*goes to cry in the closet*
Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thanks so much. I\'m sorry for the typos, and thanks for pointing them out. I\'m glad you liked it despite them. Thanks so much *hugs* Chante\'
Summary: It is the Summer between The Goblet of Fire and The Order of the Phoenix. Severus Snape has been Summoned by Voldemort: and recalled to the Order of the Phoenix.
Neither side trusts him completely -- yet.
Very good, very good!
I'm sorry, I can't give you a more thorough and detailed review - it's very late here.
I think I shold mention, however, "Petrificus Totalus" is spelled with a U.
Author's Response: Thank you!I hope you enjoy the rest of the story. And thank you for the spelling hint!
Summary: Each moment is a decision, defined by the circumstances. Who knows? Had it not been for an overprotective cousin, perhaps Rose Weasley and Scorpius Malfoy could have been the best of friends. Perhaps in one point in time and space, they are. As it happens, their relationship was defined by one catalytic factor, James Potter, and now,they are sworn enemies.
This story is a chronicle of their first year at Hogwarts, and their last. It is a tale of happenstance and familial influence, of an enmity that was not theirs to decide. Read and find out how such an enmity can influence the lives of two innocent children and wreck them. Will the injury last forever?
Due to my heavy work-schedule, this fic will be on hold till early June. My apologies to all.
Ahh, Fluff McFlufferson.
Even if I don't agree that either Draco or mini-Draco (Scorpius) could have been any sort of attractive and even if I think that it's either Margaret, Margareta or Marguerite -
the fic is nice. Please continue.
Author's Response: LOL. I will continue, don\'t worry. Thanks for the review! *hugs*