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bahhhh cliffie! i love/hate those. you're such a good writer, and the james/lily is definitely great! I LOVE IT!
Lily Evans has always pushed guys away, keeping her distance away from heartbreak. If she never got too attatched, she would never get hurt.
Yet, James Potter refuses to be pushed away. Will he be the one to actually tear down Lily's walls that separate them?
2) vita... surprisingly
3) the one where james and lily FINALLY get together... for real.
4) everything. seriously.
5) ethan. he was an (for lack of a better word) ass.
6) nope haven't read it.
7) yes i have (: loved 'em all.
Summary: Harry is struggling to come to terms with the events of his fifth year. Can he learn to depend on those he considers family and become what he needs to be in order to survive?
cliffffffffy! i can't wait to read the next chapter! i thought i'd review though just to tell you what a remarkable job i think you are doing. if you don't write more fics i may have to start reading other people's... gasp!
this chapter made me want to cry. not many chapters do though, i'm impressed!
this is really good. really addicting! i can't wait to see what happens next! and p.s. admitting you have an addiction is the first step to fixing it. i also have a punctuation addiction hahaha. (:
i love your writing style, it's very much like jo's. keep writing, its an amazing feat for you if this is your first fic. :D
Summary: ***COMPLETED!***Five years ago, half way through her third year at Hogwarts, Regan Jayden was expelled for reasons only she and a very select few know. But now that she's been allowed to return-- under certain terms-- in what would have been her graduating year, will she be able to regain the trust of her fellow Hogwarts students, and of herself?
Excerpt from story: Merlin, he was going soft, Draco thought as he tried not to grimace. He'd start spouting off poetry in a minute if he wasn't careful. This whole love thing was sending him round the twist.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO. not draco! the way you present him in this story is strangely intruiging and quite.. erm... sexy. (;
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
woahhhh i'm in love with your writing style and i am so happy that you updated! definitely keep on writing this series! (: (: (:
i don't know what else i can say besides profess my love for this fic. HAHAHA but still, amazing job! KEEP IT UP!
Summary: At the start of Harry’s sixth year, the wizarding world is falling further under Voldemort’s evil control. Fudge has declared a draconian State of Emergency, but he is little more than Lucius Malfoy’s corrupt puppet. But when Malfoy seeks to impose Voldemort’s racist Pureblood ideology upon Hogwarts - the last bastion of the Light - the students rise up in revolt.
The spirits of the great Witches and Wizards of the Light, fearful for the future of the Wizarding world, send Harry and his friends a powerful ally, to help them in the desperate struggle to save Hogwarts and the wizarding world from impending darkness.
An epic struggle of Good against political corruption, racism, elitist ideology ... and Ultimate Evil. The roller-coaster plot twists and turns into the past and future – and Nightmare Realities, where the terrible consequences of failing to stop Voldemort are chillingly revealed.
A story to fascinate the intelligent reader ... philosophy, politics, time-travel, romance, humour ... and a few very cunning ideas.
Beautifully done. EPILOGUE was a bit fluffy, but aren't they all?
Rickkkkkk what did you do?
PANSY IS A PIIIIIIIIIMP. I like this story so much!
Yeah, so I'm not liking Ron too much, the stubborn moron. But I love Rick!!!
Summary: Harry and Ginny are destined to have a love that endures. He Who Must Not be Named certainly thinks so. Could their love be the key to fulfilling one of his greatest wishes?
i really like the character of nathan borgin.. good idea. fabulous story though, i enjoyed it IMMENSLEY. (:
Author's Response: Thank you! I love Nathan, too!
Summary: Harry, Ron, Hermione, Ginny, a blond Weasley. It's Harry's sixth year. Voldemort is back, yet strangely quiet. A second prophecy. This is my version of what happens next. The whole book is written, along with all of year seven. I will post as fast as I can get the chapters past the moderators.
Story is now complete. Look for the sequel, I will be posting the first chapter tonight 6-2-05, and it usually takes 4-5 days for the mods to approve it. The title of the sequel is, Harry Potter and the Unlocked Mind.
/good story, but 'Mione' is a bit noncannon for me.