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Hi, my name is Allie.

I live in America, I do not have an amazing British accent, no matter how much I wish I did.

I like to write, but I mostly read.

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The Cause by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Marty Price works for The Cause, which involves several campaigns and petitions on a weekly basis. It has become common knowledge within Hogwarts that if you see her coming towards you with a clipboard, you should turn and walk the other way. Or perhaps deny all grasp of the English language. And if this isn’t eccentric enough, there’s also her obsessive written observations of four boys in her year, which will one day make a rather interesting book ...

Remus Lupin, meanwhile, has always been a little different, too. Poor, sweet Remus Lupin is, to the casual observer, the picture of a sensible, hard working student. However, he has three friends who have done more for him than anyone knows and they have done this because of his troubled past, troubled present and troubled future. Why the gloominess? Because Remus Lupin just so happens to be a werewolf.

So what could these two possibly have in common? And how can their stories possibly connect?

Runner-up for the 2008 Best Marauder Era QSQ.
Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 14: Very Bohemian

I liked it! Not a personal favorite, but still "quenching," so to speak. Can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Well, hey, I\'ll take what I can get. Thanks!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 01/23/08 Title: Chapter 9: The King of Diamonds

Nice chapter, very interesting, and I doubt Marty is going to be in the dark about Remus' "furry little problem" for much longer. Great job! Marty's character is developing quite nicely.

Author's Response: Thank you! And yes, I\'m sure it will all come to light eventually ...

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 05/18/08 Title: Chapter 12: Asparagus

Very informative, I loved Marty's reaction to Remus' secret. I also liked the Lily/Marty friendship starting. Very good foundation work for more chapters.

Author's Response: Phew, I thought the review button had broken! I\'m glad you enjoyed it, hopefully the next one will be up soon.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 09/01/08 Title: Chapter 18: Uncle Morris

A tad bit traumatizing. It sounds out of context since I haven't re-read your previous chapters in the longest time, but it'll make more sense for a person just reading it in one sitting, yeah? Question- do you have a certain number of chapters planned for this? Can't wait for the next update, ~Allie.

Author's Response: Yes, I do only have a certain number of chapters planned; in fact there are only two left. But I'm afraid I don't quite understand the rest of your review ... what is traumatizing and out of context? Which part? Sorry to be a bit thick, but I'm really not sure what you mean.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 04/25/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Trust Test

Oh, I hope you will update as soon as humanly possible!

Author's Response: It\'s already in the queue, so don\'t worry! Now we just need patience. =)

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Plight of the Pixie

Going back to the tea shop, is what is a bit traumatizing. And as for the out of context- I forgot that Marty's mom was killed so I had to remember what happened at the tea shop, hahaha. ~Allie

Author's Response: Oh, I see. That makes a lot more sense now. Sorry I got confused, I'm still in that summer holiday frame of mind where it takes a long time to understand things! Although I should really snap out of that before double chemistry tomorrow ... Thanks for the review(s) anyway!

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 07/18/08 Title: Chapter 16: Fainty McPassOut

Thumbs up on another great chaptahh! I want some Remus-Marty lovin', as James so rightly put it. (:

Author's Response: Don't we all, my friend, don't we all ... =)

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 02/25/08 Title: Chapter 10: Hapless Slytherins

I love this story. Just thought you should know. (: Update, please!

Author's Response: I will - as soon as the queues reopen! Thanks for the review.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 09/05/08 Title: Chapter 19: Passing Phase

I'm expecting a huge climax soon. I cannot believe there's only one chapter left! I've followed this since the beginning, and I have to say, this is the first story I've read as it was updated starting from chapter 1 to the finish. I am going to be waiting impatiently for chapter 20. [= ~Allie.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm so glad you've enjoyed it all! I really loved writing and developing it over time, so it's a great feeling that other people enjoyed reading it, it really is. Hopefully I won't put chapter 20 up JUST yet, because I want to draw it out a little bit longer, and I don't particularly want this fic to end at all!

Dealer Agent by Angel of Dreams

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Even as the Dark Lord ascends, a few of his Death Eaters maintain a small, underground ring to import poisons, often with contacts abroad and in the darker sections of the Muggle community. But when their central agent delivers a drug of remarkable potency, the consequences may rock the magical world.

And may drive the agent to finally reveal what is hidden.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 04/27/08 Title: Chapter 9: The Way We Find Freedom

Wonderful, deep, and moving. Definitely a favorite.

7 Ways to Win Her Heart by x_lily_evans_x

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

Ah, Christmas. The season of joy and love. And Head Boy James Potter fully intends to use the loving atmosphere to his advantage by coming up with plans and using them to capture the heart of Lily Evans.

But since when do plans transfer beautifully from parchment to life?

Six plans become five, five become four, four become three, three become two, two become one, and then there are none.

Then his friends come to the rescue.

But of course.
Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 11/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I

a little confusing when it switched from the romance writing to reality, but i caught on. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 11/22/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I

a little confusing when it switched from the romance writing to reality, but i caught on. keep up the good work.

Author's Response: It was? Oh dear... and I thought it was quite clear. Oh well, thank Merlin you caught on. And thank YOU for dropping by! :D

Purple Ink by Nymphea

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: James and Lily didn't wake up one morning and find they were in love with each other...but two mornings in particular were a help. So were two letters written in purple ink.
Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 10/18/07 Title: Chapter 1: Purple Ink

I LOVE ORSON SCOTT CARD'S ENDER SERIES! AND SHADOW! hahaha they're great. and i remembered that line. nice one shot!

Author's Response: Yes!!! Someone else who appreciates them!! I\'m so glad you liked the story... and thanks for reviewing! (Bean is definitely one of my favorite characters of all time!--but Peter\'s good too)

Only Hope by Sly Severus

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Alone in her family home, Bellatrix makes a decision. She feels that it is the only choice avaliable to her until she meets a mysterious man in the woods. A man who is willing to offer her something different.
Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 04/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Beautifully written, and gives new light to Bellatrix's decision and early life. I've never thought about her this way, with sympathy. It
has always been apathy, or worse, pity. Wonderful.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! :D *hugs Bella*

Long-Distance Extendable Ears by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Fred is dead.

But that's just the beginning! Because one of George's ears is up in heaven, and the other is down on earth...

Oh, the possibilities!

Written for the Next Great Adventure challenge on the MNFF beta boards. I am Schmerg_The_Impaler of Hufflepuff House.
Twice nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts Story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Awards!
Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 01/12/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One and Only

This fic is remarkably original and entertaining. I have to say it is one of the few I actually love! A bit heartbreaking when George doesn't want to talk to Fred anymore, but the end is wonderful. Great job!

Author's Response: Oh wow, two reviews for this story in one day! Thanks so much! I was, er, shall we say, very emotionally involved in writing this story. (I sat in the closet of a hotel to write it, actually, and my parents were wondering why there was crying and laughing coming out of the closet late at night, but you didn\'t need to know that...)

A Black Tonks by Mistletoe

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: It's the biggest battle I've ever faced in my life: my blood or my love? The two can be ambiguous, but in my case, they are black and white, day and night. I had been seemingly repressed by my family for too long, so I did the one thing that allowed me a choice. I ran away.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Very nice job, I just wrote an Andromeda/Ted fic that is up on this site except they're still at Hogwarts. This is well written and enjoyable!

Author's Response: Thanks so much :] I\'m glad you enjoyed it. I might go check your fic out....

Blind With Stars by solemnlyswear_x

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The night sky was twinkling with stars, each yellow dot winking down at Andromeda as she walked along the forgotten path. Weeds, having grown long from lack of care, brushed and snagged her robes, but she wasn’t concerned with that. Instead, Andromeda's attention was drawn to the sky. On sisters, mourning, and stars.

A submission to The Color of Loss challenge by solemnlyswear_x of Gryffindor.
Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was very well written, and quite interesting. Remember me? I found your story and thought it was ironic both of our Andromeda fics were published on the same day! Thanks again for beta-ing Rain. :D

Author's Response: Haha, I do remember you! And that is really funny - I hadn\'t even noticed. Thanks for reviewing (and you\'re welcome for beta-ing)! :)

All He Knew by Indigoenigma

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Love.

It could lie dormant for years before it manifested. And once it did, it stayed.

And that was all that Albus knew.

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 04/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: All He Knew

This story was touching, for I rarely read same-sex fics. I was scared to start reading because of the rating- I thought it might be smutty or unappealing. But this representation of love at it's purest captivated me and held my attention to the very end. Beautifully done, thank you for shedding some light on Albus' feelings towards Gellert.

Author's Response: I\'m so pleased that you enjoyed it - even though you broke your norm by reading it! Thanks for the review.\r\n

Sir Oscar O'Reilly by MagEd

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Assigned to work on a project together, James Potter and Lily Evans find themselves getting to know one another through a silly game James has devised. A light, fluffy, slightly cliche one-shot. "Don’t look at me like that! I’m going to behave today." *one-shot*
Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 10/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh no! I really need a semi-fluffy oneshot, ASAP! Please see what happened, I'm sure you're just as frazzled as I am! :O

I'll Pick You Up by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: “Guilt brings people together. It’s a takes one to know one type thing.”

James Potter has always been a spoiled, arrogant, lazy show-off. When he enters his final year at Hogwarts School, he’s Head Boy . . . and he’s still a spoiled, arrogant, lazy, show-off. But because of that terrible summer, he’s also guilt-ridden.

Lily Evans has always been a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. When she begins her last year at Hogwarts, she’s Head Girl . . . and still a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. But the first night back — and the murder that takes the entire school by surprise — leave her guilt-ridden as well.

With the darkness that’s surrounding the Wizarding world slowly seeping, at long last, onto the grounds of Hogwarts and into the lives of James Potter and Lily Evans, what comes next?

Reviewer: ravenclawslostdiadem Signed
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Can Be Anything

Okay, I haven't reviewed in a while, but I'm not gone for good! I took a little hiatus. But I'm back, and apparently, so are you with a new story in the works.

Let me start off by saying that I was really intruiged by the first chapter. I didn't feel like I was forcing myself to read it because the rest of the story would somehow redeem it. So great job there.

I love the way you characterise, especially James and Irina. I could tell that James, although grieving, was a lively individual who was genuinely a good person. Irina seems like a timeless beauty, pillar, for him. I like how you shattered that illusion straight away.

I also really, really like the fact that James and Sirius smoke. It makes them more... well... human, in my opinion and fits the time period in which they were said to have lived.

Your story already seems realistic, also, because of the darker atmosphere. It's not all fun and games for James Potter now, is it?

So, with that said, I figured that I should leave a detailed review for you, since I've been quite lax recently. This is going on the favorites list so I can get updates!


Author's Response: I'm glad you're not gone for good! Thanks very much for the review! It's good to know that you liked the first chapter, as I was afraid it wouldn't be interesting enough to catch people's attention. And I agree that it's important for Sirius and James to stay realistic and do things like smoke! I'm glad you thought this start realistic and that you even put it in favorites -- that always makes me happy :)