Penname: Nundu [Contact]
Real name: Nancy Frances
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Summary: This story starts during the summer between Harry's fifth and sixth year. It follows his journey from the skinny, guilt-ridden Boy Who Lived to the Man Who Would Defeat Voldemort. Some H/G and R/Hr romance. Chapter 50 is up!!!! STORY COMPLETE!!! Written pre-HBP. This story no longer follows cannon.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 140900 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/31/04 Updated: 10/18/05


Reviewer: Nundu Signed
Date: 04/27/05 Title: Chapter 27: To Err is Human

Overall a nice little story, although the short chapters make it very choppy. I would highly recommend you spend a bit of time rereading and doing a through spell and grammar check. In the early chapters there are frequent occasions of missing or misused words that make for a rocky read. Common misspellings are 'allright' (should be either 'all right' or 'alright' and 'definately' (definitely). All in all, I am enjoying the story. It could just be made even better with a judicious going over by a rigorous beta whose opinion isn't prejudiced by love. ;D

 
Reviewer: Nundu Signed
Date: 04/27/05 Title: Chapter 27: To Err is Human

So all that going on about misspellings, and I miss spell 'thorough'. *eyes roll* How embarrassing!

 

Summary:

His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!

Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!

Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 61027 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Published:
05/23/08 Updated: 09/08/09


Reviewer: Nundu Signed
Date: 10/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

This looks cute! I shall be checking for updates.

Author's Response:

Add it to your favorites it will inform you of my updates...see you at the next one!

SLy

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