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In Defense of Love by Sarakiel

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Ron hurries to find Hermione, knowing she’s in danger. A short high octane, action packed piece with a little dose of the power of love.
Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: In Defense of Love

"Accio spine!"


Best line ever.

Simon says... by Peach

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: In Harry’s sixth year a fifth house is added at Hogwarts. During re-sorting, recent events cause Harry to reconsider – and he unintentionally ends up in Slytherin, where he meets Simon, a former Ravenclaw.

When a new prophecy surfaces, old bonds of friendship will be challenged. Harry has to deal with the question of friend or foe, faith or fool, while living in times of mistrust, betrayal, and death. (No Slash)

The PG-13 rating and warnings are for later chapters. A short note will be posted at the beginning of each one of them.


Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 01/12/08 Title: Chapter 16: Through the Vanishing Cabinet

Welcome back.

Author's Response: Same to you! :-)

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 01/12/08 Title: Chapter 16: Through the Vanishing Cabinet

Hmmm. It's been a while since I've read this story so I went back and read the previous chapter. You're making Ron look awfully guilty for attacking Simon but the timeline seems... compressed.

How was Ron able to leave the Library and track down Simon in what comes across as a very limited amount of time? Ron didn't have the Mauraders Map.

We know Simon is skilled with the mental magic mojo, is Ron's expression of regret justified?

Author's Response: I\'m not going to comment on it now, but you will get an answer to that. Thanks for your thoughts!

The Greatest of These by IHateSnakes

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This story begins immediately after the conclusion of Harry Potter and the Forgotten Solution. While it would be helpful to know some of the background from TFS, it is not critical. Original characters used in this story from TFS are Diane Bradley, Jason and Jack Graham, Max Diggory and Tré Mellanson.
Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 03/06/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - The Sacrifice


For the love of all that is good and pure post the final chapter!!!


I just wanted to say that your post Final Battle storyline for Ron was the most interesting I've read for the character. I really liked Ron in France, fighting and growing on his own.

And I have to admit, as R/Hr is the only ship I really care about, I'm glad to see the two of them working things out.

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 02/13/08 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17 - The Sacrifice

Enjoying the story. When do we get to see more?

Something Worth Fighting For by lantis222

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: “There is a room in the the Department of Mysteries that is kept locked at all times. It contains a force that is at once more wonderful and more terrible than death, than human intelligence, than forces of nature. It is also, perhaps the most mysterious of the many subjects for study that reside there...In the end...it was your heart that saved you.” -Albus Dumbledore

What if, in order to save the world, you had to give up the one you love? Could you do it? And what would you do to get that person back? Is it even possible?

For Ron, anything is possible.
Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Something Worth Fighting For


No need to re-write, you're doing just fine without DH! And I love Hermione as a Curse Breaker, it's the perfect blend of her intelligence and the adventurist streak she would have picked up along the way while being friends with Ron and Harry.

Author's Response: I\'m sorry, I\'m sorry, don\'t worry the main story isn\'t changing. Hermione is still a curse breaker and my original plot isn\'t changing. All I\'m doing is adding a few of the pieces of DH that I loved and that I think will make this story just a little better. I\'m almost done and I have nearly 8 chapters written so when we get going again things should move fairly quickly. Thank you so much for reviewing, I really appreciate it!

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 12/15/07 Title: Chapter 2: Memories

Please post more chapters! The place is getting over run with Hermione/Snape stories and that is just all kinds of wrong.

Author's Response: I have been neglecting this site haven\'t I? Alright, your wish is my command. I\'ll put the next chapter up soon. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 01/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Memories

Are the mods giving you a hard time over posting a chapter you had up before?

Author's Response: Yes, they are. I don\'t know about this place. If you want to read anymore than I have posted you can always read it over on Phoenixsong.net. I know we\'re not supposed to plug other sites here but until I get it posted here that is where it is. Thanks for reading. I\'m still trying to get it posted here so if you want to wait it should be up in, oh I don\'t know, a month or so.

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 11/07/07 Title: Chapter 2: Memories

Welcome back. When last we spoke, you said you had 8 chapters ready to go. I'm looking forward to each one.

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m working on chapter 10 now and the next chapter is ready to go. It shouldn\'t be too long now.

Battling Jitters by EmilyJayne

Rated: Professors •
Summary: They have battled evil, fate, destiny, time, even each other. Now Ron and Hermione take an emotional ride to battle something equally as treacherous….nerves.

The third installment in my “Battles” series continues here in a fluffier-than-is-normal-for-this-author tale depicting the Jitters Ron and Hermione experience when popping the big question and the events leading up to it.

If you have just found this story, be sure to read “Internal Battles” and “Battling Boundaries”. This story stands alone, but the other two will help complete the back-story. You should enjoy them too! Let me know what you think!

Disclaimer: JKR started it…I am just playing with the fabulous characters!

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 10/22/07 Title: Chapter 8: A Change of Plans?

You have correctly guessed the origin of my screen name. ;)

Author's Response: Well that is absolutley hilarious! Congrats on the creativity! My daughters bedroom is decorated in vintage toys and many of old stuffed animals including a Monchichi! It is a baby one! That is so cool. Sorry to ramble on it! but that is so funny!

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 09/22/07 Title: Chapter 5: Know and Tell

I've enjoyed all 3 of your stories. Tell me, who do we need to bribe to get the next chapter validated?

Author's Response: thanks for reading! I have reposted, so we will be patient atleast one more time!

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 10/08/07 Title: Chapter 6: Dinner, Dancing and Drunk Before Dawn


Suggest a felony and chapters get posted. Must file this info for future use.

I enjoyed the chapter, by the way.

Author's Response: i will...thanks,

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 02/03/08 Title: Chapter 9: Guess who invited me to dinner

Welcome back! I was wondering what was holding up this story... a 3rd child is a valid excuse. I won't even ask you to produce a doctor's note or anything.

Author's Response: well thanks for undersdanding! I am glad that you enjoy the story!

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 10/21/07 Title: Chapter 8: A Change of Plans?

Am I a boy?

Only at heart.

I'm a happily married MAN and yes, proposing was one of the easiest (and best) things I've ever done.

Author's Response: well then you are lucky guy. I too am happily married, and while I know that proposing marriage was one of the best things that my husband ever did, because I asked him, I know it was not easy! Nerves, Jitters and asking my father all made it harder. On a side note, I just noticed your screen name...Monchichi. Is that what I think it is? I was born in 1981, so I missed the cartoon, but I still have one....Please let me know if that is what you are referring to or if I missed the boat completley!

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 10/06/07 Title: Chapter 5: Know and Tell

OK, bribery hasn't worked. Who do we need to blackmail to get Ch. 6 up?

Author's Response: it is up now! REad READ READ!!!

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 10/13/07 Title: Chapter 7: Treasures Once Forgotten


Proposing is supposed to be easy, why oh why must you toture Ron so?!

Oh yeah, it makes for a better story.


Author's Response: aer you a boy? I hope not because if you think proposing is easy, think again!!! My husband had a horrible time. It should be easy, but it is such a HUGE thing that no one in their right mind could call it easy.....and yes, I did it for the drama!

Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties by beauty and brains

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Ever wonder how Ron and Hermione really got together? How constant fighting seemed to lead to a romance? What happens when a letter to a certain Durmstrang student sends a certain Gryffindor over the edge? Join Ron and Hermione on the night they came together, and the pumpkin pasties that seem to get in the way. All told from Colin Creevey’s point of view, of course!
Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 09/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Passion, Pain, and Pumpkin Pasties

Probably my favorite story on the site.

Author's Response: Wow really? That\'s awesome, thanks!

Highway Code by shewhoguards

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Why Hermoine really *wasn't* sure that Ron could pass a Muggle driving test.
Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 09/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Thanks for the laugh.

Yes, You Can by Hermione Jane

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: I wrote this while back (right after HBP came out, actually). It's just a short missing-moment type of fic about Ron's reaction to Hermione when she asks him to the Slug Club party in Herbology. Enjoy!
Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 10/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Mental Musings

I love the famous last words bit at the end! Yeah, we all know what really happens (cause we read the book) but a guy should know better than to ask that question. You can always screw up something involving a girl you care about worse than you could ever imagine!

I guess this was the life lesson that taught Ron that simple truth.

Author's Response: haha, yes. =] I enjoy being ironic.

Harry Potter and the Skat-Hatokha Reaction by OliveOil_Med

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Nominated for the 2009 QSQ award for Best Male OC.

Harry's life is quiet now. He has a loving wife, a beautiful son, a career along side his best friend, and everything else he could ever want and never imagine having. But now, his career as an Auror will lead both him and Ron halfway around the world to investigate a mysterious school known only as the Skat-Hatokha Academy of Magic.

But from the beginning, something seems off. No one in the wizarding world has heard of this school, the board of directors can contact you, but you can't contact them, and the accepted students have all been in some trouble with the law and take their right to remain silent very seriously. Not to mention Lucius Malfoy's near obsessive interest in this case and his close involvement with the Ministry.

But as more time passes, the more the case begins to take on a life of its own, and not just for Harry.

Reviewer: monchichi Signed
Date: 01/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Notebook Paper Rejection

Thank you for the heads up but... how do I say this?

I have a pretty good idea where you're going thanks to my being married and all.

Author's Response: No prob. Knowlage is power!