I'm bitter, twisted and colder than an Eskimo's freezer, but I assure you my characters are far more pleasant.
I do believe you have the honour of being the first person on this site to make me laugh at their fiction...er...in a good way, obviously....but laugh I did. That was fantastic, brilliantly written, perfectly in character, mildly amusing throughout and with a superb punchline. Best of luck for the Quicksilver Quills, I'd vote for this!
A very interesting concept, and one I'll be keeping an eye on. Further to earlier answers though, I think that canon Harry - moulded by the Dursleys and Dumbledore - is in many ways preferable (as a person, if not a character, so to speak) to the one raised by James.
Nicely done, though the concept alone would be enough to make me add this to my favourites!
Author's Response: This is so fascinating. But good to see you around my stories! ^_^