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Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 06/01/06 Title: None

IT'S AUNT MARGE!!



Mourning by sweetdevil

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 6 Reviews
Summary: A story of death and loss in Harry's world.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Mourning

"I scream,
For your voice
So I never forget,
How it sounded.
I had never realized,
How close,
We were,
And now I can't forget it,
For the world."

That section really stung me, because I've had good friends pass away. I know exactly how you feel, and I think that writing will help you... I know it helped me. :)

Author's Response: Awww, thank you. I was really thinking of my friend while I was wriring this, so it hit me hard, too. You\'re right, writing is something I do during emotional times, it really helps.



Founder's Treasures by Alluria

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 5 Reviews
Summary: A poem about the artifacts left behind by the four Hogwarts Founders.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Founder's Treasures

Well, generally, it was pretty good. I liked how you describe the Four Founders and their artifacts, but I didn't like the beginning. I thought it was somewhat choppy, which can sometimes be a good thing, but this time it wasn't. I liked the idea and the writing style, but the beginning just wasn't my thing.



Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Founder's Treasures

Well, generally, it was pretty good. I liked how you describe the Four Founders and their artifacts, but I didn't like the beginning. I thought it was somewhat choppy, which can sometimes be a good thing, but this time it wasn't. I liked the idea and the writing style, but the beginning just wasn't my thing.



Reminiscent Rain by EtherealElation

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 13 Reviews
Summary:
One foot.

One foot in front of the other.

One foot in front of the other, step-by-step, walking

So careful not to tread upon the crumbling dust and bones that is all that is left of



Them.



Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/14/06 Title: Chapter 1: Amori

Oh my.

Amazing. I love the way you show Hermione's thoughts and feelings.. kind of reminds me of me :)

The way you show the graveyard without really describing it.. that takes skill. I love how we don't really know who the poem's about until the end.

Excellent. Just.. keep writing, for this site's sake.

Author's Response: Thank you... That certainly puts things in a different light!
~Juli



Umbridge-itis by Dragon_Warrior

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 5 Reviews
Summary: The students in Defense Against the Dark Arts class have a lee-ttle surplise for Professor Umbridge.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Umbridge-itis

Haha, interesting. I like how you incorperated Umbridge's "fairly wide load." It's an unusual idea, and you pulled it off really well. The only stanza I had a problem with would be the second one... it just didn't seem to flow as well as the others. Nice job, though!

Author's Response: Secon stanza, huh? I\'d say you\'re right, but that happens when you write a rhyming poem like this, I suppose. Thanks for your review!

Author's Response: Oooooops, misspelled second. Tee hee.

Author's Response: At least I didn\'t misspell \"misspelled.\"



A Ruthless Quest by sweetdevil

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 3 Reviews
Summary: A three-part poem of Voldemort's rise to power, downfall, and life in the second war.



~*~Chapters two and three comming soon!!~*~

EDIT:Well, one rather embarassing typo has been fixed, it was brought to my attention by one of my readers. Ironicly, neither my mod, beta, nor myself caught this. Oopsie! :P

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Tom Riddle 1943-1981

I love the way that you portray the battle, and how you describe Voldemort without really describing him. I just love it when people do that :) You're really good, so I hope you don't stop!

Author's Response: Thank you! First review. And, don\'t worry, I won\'t stop ;-*



Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/19/06 Title: Chapter 1: Tom Riddle 1943-1981

I love the way that you portray the battle, and how you describe Voldemort without really describing him. I just love it when people do that :) You're really good, so I hope you don't stop!



Empty Lust by FireBreather0285

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 2 Reviews
Summary: A poem about everyone's favorite werewolf and his own struggles in the world.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/27/06 Title: Chapter 1: Empty Lust

Pretty good for a newcomer :) I liked your use of choppy sentences, and I also liked the lack of predetermined structure. I always feel that free-form poetry expresses emotions better than distinctive rhythmic structures. I especially liked the lines:

"These feelings of numbness,
This feeling of guilt.
This pain is ripping me whole."


A nice interpritation of our beloved werewolf's thoughts. Bravo!

Author's Response: Thanks sooo much! I\'m glad you like my improper style of poetry (lol). Thanks again!



Dudders by bajab

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 18 Reviews
Summary: Dudley Dursley never hated Harry Potter, but he did want what was in his room. Humour, one shot - post GOF.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh dear, what a great ending.

!!!

Author's Response: Hope fully you enjoyed the other bits too!



Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 10/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Oh dear, what a great ending.

!!!

Author's Response: Hmm, seem to already have this one :)