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Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 05/31/05 Title: None

It sounds like the humor is a bit forced, I think that a good humor fic just flows right along and doesn't need any additions. I will still be looking daily for an update.

Author's Response: Yes, yes, I know, Chapter Three in my opinion just sucks. I'm not sure how I would change it and still keep the spirit of the story, though. I shouldn't have added all that stupid extra crap, yeah.

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 05/31/05 Title: None

Huh? I don't get it....

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 05/31/05 Title: None

Wow, I'm reviewing before honeydude...hm...I still don't get it, but it's pretty good.

Author's Response: What?

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 05/18/05 Title: None

LOL!! AWESOME!! Too bad it sucks being a girl...believe me, I know! Update soon! ~10

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 05/25/05 Title: None

Yay! I'm the first review for the second chapter! I hope the mods hurry it up....bra shopping, huh? Ron ogling him? I really love this story! 100/10!

Author's Response: My second 100!! =D

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 06/07/05 Title: None

hehe, im before honeydude again! much funnier this time! What WILL happen to harry at "that time if the month?"

Author's Response: *Evil grin*


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 06/04/05 Title: None

ok, I liked it, but it could be a bit funnier. Ah well, no matter. Hey, can you be a friend and R&R my story? It's called Harry Potter and the Dream that Wouldn't End. Thank you very much!

Author's Response: I did! It was good, I will read your other stories as soon as I get a chance! Chapter 2 is in the queue. It gets funnier!

Ode to Snivellus by hp_princess

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 27 Reviews
Summary: An Ode to Snivellus, written by the Marauders. Showing their true feelings for him, once and for all.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 06/04/05 Title: Chapter 1: Ode to Snivellus

LOL, not bad! I write poetry too, so I know how hard it is to get a good rythem (sp?) going. Keep it up! P.S. since I reviewed yours, it would be a nice thing to do if you reviewed mine. Just click on my name to get to my stories!

Author's Response: I agree, getting a good rythem (sp?) going is very hard. And I am going to review your stories as we speak...

Sirius Black . . . Babysitter Extraordinaire?! by Scheherazade

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 201 Reviews
Summary: If Sirius Black can handle Severus Snape for 7-years at Hogwarts, then watching baby Harry, his godson, for the weekend should be a breeze right? WRONG! Find out what really happens when James and Lily leave Harry in his watch.

**This story was written in collaboration between me and the wonderful author, Crimsonphoenix1.**
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 06/11/05 Title: Chapter 1: The Rough Beginning

Wow, the first to review! LOL, you got the babysitting deal exactly right, i know how it feels... update soon! ~10/10~

Author's Response: Thanks for the 10 !! :-D Look for an update soon !

A Death Eaters story. by darkwritterchild

Rated:10 Reviews
Summary: The regrets of a Death Eater.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 01/31/06 Title: Chapter 1: A Death Eaters story.

I like the way that you put this in the mind of a Death Eater, very original, in my opinion. Most of the time you see poems from the Golden Trio or Voldemorts point of veiw.

Harry Potter and Hope for the End by Julybug

Rated: Professors • 488 Reviews
Summary: Starts where HBP leaves off.

Will Harry and his friends get to live happily ever after? Or will the Prophecy and You-Know-Who be too much to overcome?

This one has it all, folks! Love and lust! Money and power! Hob Nobs and Fairy Liquid! The Beatles and U2! C'mon! You know you want to read it...

Oh, yeah - it's got H/G and Hr/R romantic stuff, plus, you know, that war they're having.

BIG THANKS to my beta, Tabletop Joe (now, go read his brilliant fic!).
Next chapter is IN THE QUEUE. Thank you for the reviews, emails, and continued support of this story!
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 04/01/06 Title: Chapter 9: Happy Birthday

If you don't update within the week I"'m afraid I might go into withdrawl.... I love your story. Abso-freaking-lutely LOVE it! Great character development, a clearly developed plot... this has all the makings of an awesome fanfic!

Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this story. I've enjoyed writing it except this part I'm doing now that's making me crazy! It should be ready for validation in the next couple days or so. Thanks!

Stoical Silence by lupinslover12

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 6 Reviews
Summary: Living in disappointment, the shadows of the past, Impressions and expectations that last. His whole life, Neville has been masking all the sorrows he has experienced. The broken expectations cloud his every existence, as he lives in such stoical sorrow.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 03/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Stoical Silence

Understandable. Thanks for all 5 reviews you left for me =). Ah well, this IS MNFF, after all. They do screw up a lot, ha ha. You're right about nobody reviewing poetry, and to tell the truth I think that it's just sad. Poetry is as much a legitimate genre as any other, although friends of mine with chapter fics DO look down on the poetry.... hmm.... must ponder...

Author's Response: I've actually gotten more reviews for this one and the other poem than for my chapter fic...odd.

Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 03/21/06 Title: Chapter 1: Stoical Silence

In the very beginning you had a nice rhyming pattern, but towords the end you sort of broke away from it, making it less effective. To tell the truth, that's the reason I prefer writing and reading free-form. You did a decent job of showing Neville's emotions, but you didn't really dig down deep inside of him and find out what makes him that way. You didn't show your audience what really made him tick. Generally I like it, but It'll only get a 6/10 from me. Keep working at it, because you've got a great start there!

Author's Response: Yes, in the beginning I started writing it in class, and the bell rang and I was interrupted. That disrupted my flow. Once I lost my flow, I really couldn't get it back.

Love Me For Today by lupinslover12

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 4 Reviews
Summary: The future is unclear for Ron and Hermione. They are very much in love, but who knows fate? They could be dead by tomorrow. Out of the depth and darkness of death and war, Hermione laments her uncertainty for the future, and for their lives. It incorporates the technique of internal rhyme. If you like Sondheim-style lyric poetry, this poem is for you!
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 03/24/06 Title: Chapter 1: Oneshot

All in all, I enjoyed it. Your style is there, and the meaning is clear, but the form is inconsistent. Not that that's a problem, but I feel that poetry should either have no form a a consistent form. But, I think that I might be biased because Ron/Hermione is my second favorite ship, only overthrown by Harry/Ginny. I dub it an 8/10.

Author's Response: Thank you! Yes, biases are hard in ships. I do agree with you, I'm a little inconsistant, I was trying internal rhyme in honor of Stephen Sondheim's 76th birthday, and it was my first crack at internal rhyme, and also, once again, the divided writing periods. Yes, usually my school doodles turn into poems, that's why they're a little inconsistent.

What I Love About You by james and lily fan

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 4 Reviews
Summary: Hermione is in love with Ron, but she doesn't think he feels the same way. This poem is just about her thoughts for him. Please read and review! Thank you!
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 04/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: What I Love About You

Wow.... that reminds me soo much of the guy I have a crush on it's not even funny. =) Love it. You showed all the things that come to mind when you think of Ron, INCLUDING the freckles. Just an awesome little touch, right there. I thought that it showed Hermione's feelings extremely well, and it also gave her one of those little girl qualities, first crush and all that. It was innocent, and I like that about it. 10/10, and job well done. *bows*

Author's Response: wow thank you so much! i wasnt getting like ANY reviews so i was jsut like ummm.......is it really that bad? thank you so much!!!!!!!!! you are so great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Surviving Love by james and lily fan

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 3 Reviews
Summary: After a brutal war with Voldemort, Hermione seacrches for her lover, but she never told him that she loved him. Please read and review!
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 03/29/06 Title: Chapter 1: Surviving Love

For the most part, it's decent. A few grammatical and spelling errors, but overall a nice poem. I like the free-form, but with the message you're trying to get across it might have been a bit better rhymed. 7/10.

Author's Response: thanks! but just for the record, poetry has no grammatical rules (actually it has no rules at all) and thats why i love it so much. but thank you SO MUCH for reviewing! i LOVE it when people do that!

Avada Kedavra by Louisa Chocolatecake

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 4 Reviews
Summary: He's dead.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 04/02/06 Title: Chapter 1: Avada Kedavra

*tear* *sniff* 9/10, I like your style

Burning Thoughts by Periwinkle

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 6 Reviews
Summary: Third person about a young prisinor in Azkaban. This perticular one is different from the rest, and she reflect on her decisions and current situation. Please review.
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 04/07/06 Title: Chapter 1: Burning Thoughts

I'll give you more than 30 seconds, my friend. Geez, I'll even take the time to use proper grammar and spelling. =) So, your poem. For the most part, I enjoyed it. I thought it was well thought out and easily read. I like how you kept the identity of this "innocent looking" woman a secret, and I also like the way you describe her thoughts and reflections. I think a 9/10, which from me is an extremely good review. Keep writing!

Author's Response: Thank you for your kind review! I'm flattered that you took the time. Thanks again!

Your Eyes by Lilypudding

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 9 Reviews
Summary: Hermione Granger has always loved Ron Weasley secretly, deep in her heart. Only in his eyes, can she find truth. However, when she comes to this realization, how can she cope with the knowledge she has known forever?
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 05/04/06 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

It seems very similar to the song in RENT... the one that Roger sings to Mimi when she's like half dead? Did you base it off that, or is it simply your own thought? Just curious about that part, I really liked it. I liked the free-form and short sentences, kind of reminds me of my poems. Keep on writing, and a 10/10

Author's Response: I seriously did not base it off the song in RENT, cuz I don\'t really like that part when Mimi\'s half dead because I feel its overdramatic. If it seems like it, that\'s because RENT has actually became a part of my life, and I probably based on it without realizing. I write free form because I can\'t stick to a set rhyme scheme, and I used short sentences because I wanted to make the point of being numb with emotion, and I actually was numb with emotion. I\'ve never read your poems, but I\'ll check them out. Thanks for the review!


Rated: Reviews
Reviewer: BuckbeakBeyond Signed
Date: 06/01/06 Title: None