Wow, not bad!
I really like it, but i'm not so sure if it's true!
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it, I wish it was true.
Since no-one else is reviewing, I think I'll do so myself! Well, c'mon! If you're sitting there reading this, SUBMIT A REVIEW!
Author's Response: LOL, I'm responding to myself...I'm serious...I need reviews to build on and raise my self-esteem!
Well, I'm not a big fan of free verse, but it was good! I like how you made this poem. 8/10
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. If anyone ever says that they like free verse please refer them to my poems!
Wow, great title! That was very imaginative. I can never come up with titles...hm...well, I'm reviewing, like you asked me to, and I thought it was very good. It DOES start out a little slow, though.
Author's Response: Thanks! I like the title as well. I can;t come up with titles either - it took me a full afternoon to come up with that! Thanks for reviewing! It does start out a little slow, but I've written almost all of the next chapter, entitled 'Robert's Sandwich Shop.' Hope you'll read on!
Aww...I want Remus to get the girl! He is so sweet, and it seems like he is always overshadowed by James and Sirius. Ah well...life goes on...Anyways, great story! This girl, Elisabeth, has potential!
Author's Response: I want Remus to get the girl also... We'll have to see... Remus almost always is overshadowed in Marauder fanfics, unless he is the main character. I think I'll write a Peter/OC story next! Lol! The poor OC! Thanks for reviewing.
Well...hm...I felt bad 'cause you didn't have any reviews, so I decided to read...and review...Hermione is one of my favorite characters, so I don't really like that one, but the rest are pretty good. Write some more, if you like.
LOL, not bad! Would you be a dear and R&R some of my poems? I only have two, so it wouldn't take long. Thanks much!
Author's Response: Thanx so much for the review! ~loverofluna~
Wow, I felt bad 'cause there was only one review...anyways..I liked it. Would you do me a favor and R&R my two poems? They are called "What Happened" and "Confused." Thanks much!!
Author's Response: Wow thanx for the review! Ur SWEET! lol well thanx again! ~loverofluna~
It sounds like the humor is a bit forced, I think that a good humor fic just flows right along and doesn't need any additions. I will still be looking daily for an update.
Author's Response: Yes, yes, I know, Chapter Three in my opinion just sucks. I'm not sure how I would change it and still keep the spirit of the story, though. I shouldn't have added all that stupid extra crap, yeah.
Huh? I don't get it....
Wow, I'm reviewing before honeydude...hm...I still don't get it, but it's pretty good.
Author's Response: What?
LOL!! AWESOME!! Too bad it sucks being a girl...believe me, I know! Update soon! ~10
Yay! I'm the first review for the second chapter! I hope the mods hurry it up....bra shopping, huh? Ron ogling him? I really love this story! 100/10!
Author's Response: My second 100!! =D
hehe, im before honeydude again! much funnier this time! What WILL happen to harry at "that time if the month?"
Author's Response: *Evil grin*
ok, I liked it, but it could be a bit funnier. Ah well, no matter. Hey, can you be a friend and R&R my story? It's called Harry Potter and the Dream that Wouldn't End. Thank you very much!
Author's Response: I did! It was good, I will read your other stories as soon as I get a chance! Chapter 2 is in the queue. It gets funnier!
LOL, not bad! I write poetry too, so I know how hard it is to get a good rythem (sp?) going. Keep it up! P.S. since I reviewed yours, it would be a nice thing to do if you reviewed mine. Just click on my name to get to my stories!
Author's Response: I agree, getting a good rythem (sp?) going is very hard. And I am going to review your stories as we speak...
Wow, the first to review! LOL, you got the babysitting deal exactly right, i know how it feels... update soon! ~10/10~
Author's Response: Thanks for the 10 !! :-D Look for an update soon !
I like the way that you put this in the mind of a Death Eater, very original, in my opinion. Most of the time you see poems from the Golden Trio or Voldemorts point of veiw.
If you don't update within the week I"'m afraid I might go into withdrawl.... I love your story. Abso-freaking-lutely LOVE it! Great character development, a clearly developed plot... this has all the makings of an awesome fanfic!
Author's Response: I'm so glad you like this story. I've enjoyed writing it except this part I'm doing now that's making me crazy! It should be ready for validation in the next couple days or so. Thanks!