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Summary: The final installment in the Potter’s Pentagon Trilogy. Read “The Five” and “The Truth” first, myess? Okay!

WARNING! Contains Muggle adventures in Diagon Alley, unusual eyebrows, cheesy clichés galore, psycho Ted, the not-so-lost years of Merlin, a school-wide singalong, the old potato joke, Tyrone’s Princess Bride obsession, Emma’s stubborn denial of the existence of Tyrone’s mustache, a graphic death, a joke shop product as a major plot device, hobo Jordan, Jordan hugging, Jordan pulling pranks, time travel, the Love Shack, angst, and worst of all, Professor Zabini.

It’s the sixth year for Potter’s Pentagon and company, and our heroes learn that in the wizarding world, coming of age has a somewhat weightier significance. Students are busy with an Inter-House Unity Project, Jordan is having weird dreams, Pansy and Ophidias Malfoy have been released from Azkaban, Professor Zabini has a mysterious project of his own, and almost everyone is acting strangely. Meanwhile, at the Ministry of Magic, a man with a vendetta against Ron Weasley is trying his hardest to get him in the biggest trouble possible. Is the only way to save him to travel into the past?

New talents are discovered, new friendships form and old ones change, pasts are dredged up, and, of course, there’s lots of good old-fashioned snogging. And one of the five kills for the first time… while another becomes a casualty of war.

Starring 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, Emma Weasley, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Post-Hogwarts Story.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 183223 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
07/09/08 Updated: 03/15/10

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: In Which Anatoly Matches Giorgi In Sheer Eccentricity

i absolutely love this story!!!!! it made a really bad day really good :)

Author's Response: Awww, thank you! I'm sorry you had a bad day. :-( Next time, try drawing mustaches on pictures of people you don't like, that might help you feel better.

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 06/16/09 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: In Which Emma and Ted Are Just A Tad Cranky

fantastic update!! i couldn't stop laughing. i loved the part about ted's "inner nose" :P and i also loved how you've made tyrone so much deeper

Author's Response: Awww, thanks! And I did like providing some insight into Tyrone's character-- I love him so much, and I wanted to show a little bit of the backstory I'd had for him all along!

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 03/10/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: In Which Ted and Merlin Chat With Some Professors

YAY this is fantastic, and i'm so happy you're updating again!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm excited to be updating again!

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 03/15/10 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: There And Back Again

this is one of the best epilogues i've ever read!!! you tie up loose ends and have everybody happy and where they should be. i LOOOOOVE the choice to have jordan work in a world where he can earn his own name instead of living under and using (or trying not to allow special treatment because of) his father's. this was great!!

Author's Response: WAAAAOOOO, thank you so much! I'm really happy you like the epilogue, because so often, epilogues do disappoint a lot, and I did not want to do that! And I was worried people wouldn't like Jordan's career (I wrote these stories without knowing anyone would ever read them, so I didn't take that into account), but I am sooo relieved that you liked it!

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 12/05/09 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: Is This A Kissing Book?

this is brilliant. you are brilliant. it was hilarious/gripping/filled with fantastic references/etc... i loved it.

Author's Response: Oh my goodness, thank you! I really hoped I could combine the comical with the intense in this chapter, because it is such a hodge podge! ANd thank you so much for your review!

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 03/30/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter : In Which Jordan is Unnecessarily Dramatic

this was a fantastic update!! and good luck!!!

Author's Response: Oh wow, thanks!


The Magic of Romance by Hypnotica
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Romance is what is driving the Gryffindor seventh years. Frank and Alice are still going strong, but what about everyone else? Remus and Ellen refuse to admit their feelings for each other; could Lily be harbouring feelings for James? And all they know may be thrown into question when Sirius and Madeline get a shocking surprise...

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 4272 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
07/14/08 Updated: 11/03/08

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 08/27/08 Title: Chapter 2: CHAPTER TWO

i liked it a lot!!!!


Reluctant Love by cassie123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: There were three things Lily Potter and Rose Weasley knew they had in common. They both shared their names with rather popular flowers, they had both inherited the Weasley red hair and freckles gene, and they both had fairly famous fathers.

But there was still one unfortunate similarity that Rose and Lily were ignorant to: they had both grown a strong interest in the enemy. And the fact that both Rose and Lily shared a common ‘enemy’ only increased the undesirability of the circumstance. Oh, and by ‘enemy’ they meant Scorpius Malfoy.


‘I don’t understand you, Malfoy.’
He smirked. ‘You don’t have to.’

Categories: Various Pairings Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10992 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
07/21/08 Updated: 09/03/08

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 3: Scorpius

aaaaaaaa!!! i mean, it was really well written and interesting... i hope it gets a bit happier later on :P

Author's Response: It hopefully will in the follow up one shot I plan to write :)


A Different View On Love by helz_belz
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 364]

Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!

After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 51560 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
07/23/08 Updated: 04/08/11

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 08/29/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter Two: When You Become Exceedingly Handsome

This was a really great chapter!!! It is so funny and interesting, and I can't wait at all to read more!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I have sent of Chapter Three to my second wonderful beta. I will update as soon as I get it back!

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 09/23/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter Three: It Must Be The Shampoo

As always, this story is fun and sweet and entertaining and overall just fantastic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: That you so much! Reviews like this really make my day. I have decided to put a sneak peek of chapter 4 up on my author page if anyone wants a look.

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 11/07/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter Fourteen: Love Works in the Weirdest of Ways

AHHHH THIS WAS SUCH A WONDERFUL ENDING!!! this story has been fantastic all the way through. SO well done

Author's Response: Thank you so much, it's great you read all the way to the end and reviewed, Reviews are awesome :D

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 12/07/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter Six: Concurrent Concussions

this was a fantastic update!!!!! i can't wait to read more :))

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I can't wait to write more :)

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 02/13/09 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter Ten:: Every Man's Worst Fear

i absolutely love reading this story. every update is funnier and more entertaining and interesting than the one before. you write so well and have a great plot. good for you!!

Author's Response: Aww thanks for all the compliments, I'm glad you are enjoying reading the story because I love writing it :)

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: The Head's Dormitory


Author's Response: Thanks :D


Summary: Day Don’t-Ever-Ever-Ever-Call-Me-Daisy-Or-I’ll-Break-Your-Fingers Springs isn’t exactly a chip of Janey Weasley’s block. Instead of Hogwarts’ most notorious trickster, she’s more like Hogwarts’ most feared and esteemed ice queen. Well, that’s how she’s seen, anyway, and let’s face it; she doesn’t do much to change that image. But is she really as cruel and hard as she acts? Or is she, like every other moody teenager claims, wholly misunderstood? Well, now’s your chance to find out, in the sixth and final chapter of the Janey Weasley series. You thought it was all over? So did I, but then here it is, so have fun! After all, aren’t you just dying to find out what happens when someone is finally brave enough to do something that ... well, that might just annoy our ice queen a little bit?

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 5975 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
08/18/08 Updated: 08/28/08

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 02/18/09 Title: Chapter 1: Living In The Weasley-Springs Family ... Merlin Help Me

i like her lots!! this series is SO MUCH FUN!

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm really glad you enjoyed it!


Fall For You by pheonixflame
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary: It's the end of sixth year, and James talks to Lily. And she smiles.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 930 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
11/25/08 Updated: 11/26/08

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 11/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: We're Not Fighting

I liked this, a lot :D

Author's Response: Aw, thank you! I'm glad. :)


Sin by SexY_LydZ
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 32]


‘Thou shalt not sin’ – Bible

Yeah, right.

Sirius knows what he wants and he’s not afraid to chase it. She makes him feel more than he’s ever felt before, but getting what he wants may cause him more heartache than he ever imagined. Thus begins a thrilling game, a game of vice and virtue, of betrayal and affection, of sin and atonement.

The forbidden fruit tastes the sweetest.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 33975 Chapters: 8 Completed: Yes
12/09/08 Updated: 06/06/09

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 06/08/09 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue: Patience

THANK YOU SO MUCH for adding this update!! i was so upset thinking they weren't going to end up together :P great story!

Author's Response: You are very welcome! I'm glad you enjoyed it.


Happy Birthday, Professor Snape by AlwaysSS
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Just a short one-shot to celebrate the Potions master's birthday. Snape is caught off guard by a bit of unexpected gratitude.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 1229 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
01/06/09 Updated: 01/07/09

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 01/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Happy Birthday, Professor Snape

aw i liked this!!!! nice job =)

Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!


Everything We Could Have Been by redcastle
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 44]

Summary: With Ron's constant snogging of his new girlfriend, Lavender, Hermione is never around. Yes, she was jealous of Lavender and upset with Ron, but what was she doing all this time? The rise of Voldemort, constant pressure in school, and her love for Ron are clear issues in her life, but what if Hermione was struggling with other problems—problems no one else, save one, knew about? What if, while in love with Ron, she found herself falling in love with someone else—someone none of her friends, nor herself, would ever have expected? This is the bittersweet tale of the love that blossomed between Hermione Granger and Draco Malfoy during their 6th year at Hogwarts and beyond.

**UPDATE:** I am sorry for taking such a long break. I am now rewriting the story from a third person perspective because I just feel it is my stronger style and I feel I could not describe things the way I wanted to simply from Hermione's eyes, especially because she could not know Draco's thoughts, which I would like to include. I hope to finish the new Prologue in a few days and hopefully it will be validated quickly. I will probably just delete the current chapters as soon as the new version is accepted. Please continue to review and let me know what your opinion of the new version is. Again, I am so sorry. Future updates will be announced on my livejournal account so please follow there and comment. Thank you for any fans left out there who believe in my story. I am also looking for a beta to please look over my chapters before I submit them. Send me a message on the forum (username: redcastle) or on livejournal (username: cherryredcastle) if you are interested.

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 1100 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
01/18/09 Updated: 01/13/11

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 02/02/09 Title: Everything We Could Have Been

aahhh this story has amazing potential. you write really well and i personally love draco/hermione... i can't wait to read more!!

Author's Response: Aw thank you :) I hope you enjoy the rest.


Artemis and Actaeon by Calico
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: In James and Lily’s seventh year, everything changes. A war has begun, N.E.W.T.s are approaching, and James is suddenly acting like a whole new person. Lily doesn't know what to think or feel anymore, but it may well be that the events of one moonlit night on the grounds, combined with a dash of Greek mythology, will settle her head and her heart once and for all.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5036 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
01/31/09 Updated: 02/12/09

Reviewer: Rislans88 Signed
Date: 02/16/09 Title: Chapter 1: Artemis and Actaeon

this was incredible!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!!!!!!

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