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No Inhibitions by GringottsVault711
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 82]

Summary: Ron accidentally takes a potion to free him from his every inhibition - with 'interesting' results. Will this finally be the push that makes him reveal to Hermione his true feelings? Not so much fluffy as funny.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2879 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
11/30/04 Updated: 11/30/04

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 07/30/08 Title: Chapter 1: No Inhibitions

oh, your story was so funny! I thoroughly enjoyed reading it. Keep up the good work.


Ginny's Love by The Marauder
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 412]

Summary: After Sirius' death Harry is in his own private world of misery, but with Ginny's love and a plan to bring together his best friends, he is brought back to reality with much more than he expected...

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 21905 Chapters: 12 Completed: Yes
01/01/05 Updated: 08/14/05

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 08/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Letter

I really liked this story, especially the part where Ginny and Sirius had the conversation at the waterfall. The research you had to do was well worth it and tied the story together nicely. Keep writing.


Bittersweet by Aebhel
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 118]

Summary: It's funny about wars. They drive people to do things we never would ordinarily--good and bad. Harry and I had only been dating for four months. He loved me--I know that and I knew it then--but if there hadn't been a war, he would have waited. I think he just wanted something to hold onto...for when it was all over.

Ron comes across Ginny's diary, four years after the war has ended.

EDIT: 1000 reads!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3803 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
04/02/05 Updated: 04/02/05

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 08/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

This was a beautifully written story. It made me feel like I was right there with Ron reading his sister's diary. By the end of the entry I was also crying. Thanks for sharing this piece with us!!! Keep up the good work.

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 08/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

This was a beautifully written story. It made me feel like I was right there with Ron reading his sister's diary. By the end of the entry I was also crying. Thanks for sharing this piece with us!!! Keep up the good work.


Saying Goodbye by Gryffindor Girl
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: This is a recount of Hermione's last hours of life, as she says goodbye to those that she leaves behind: family and friends, and the love of her life.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 2496 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
01/31/06 Updated: 01/31/06

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 10/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Saying Goodbye

This was such a beautifully written story and it made me cry, but I promise in a good way. Keep writing.

Author's Response: Well, thank God it\'s in a good way... Thanks for the review. ;)


Tomorrow Was Today by tot_desidero
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 18]

Summary: Hermione has become obsessed with something other than S.P.E.W. and interestingly enough it's cleaning, the Muggle way. With each passing day less seems to be getting done and her projects are starting to add up. A rather large distraction is the culprit but what can it be?

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2163 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
05/19/06 Updated: 05/25/06

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 08/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so beautifully sad!!! Keep writing, your words have a wonderful way of touching the heart.

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 08/14/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

That was so beautifully sad!!! Keep writing, your words have a wonderful way of touching the heart.


Ils Veulent Que Nous Dansions by NorskHeksen
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 24]

Summary: A fluffy songfic about Ron and Hermione at Bill and Fleur's wedding.

Lyrics from "Asking Us to Dance" by Kathy Mattea in italics.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2340 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
07/15/06 Updated: 07/22/06

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 08/09/07 Title: Chapter 1: Ils Veulent Que Nous Dansions

What a cute story! I loved all the reactions from the various Weasley's, it totally made the story. Keep up the good work.


Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2008]

Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).


There have been errors when this story gets submitted for validation, so the mods have to do it manually. Therefore it does not show when it has been validated -- but it has!!

Thank you to all my reviewers!!!

Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 40191 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
09/20/06 Updated: 01/16/09

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

I just found this story and as much as I'm not usually a fan of Hermione with Harry fics, I really like this one so far. I hope you update soon.

Author's Response: =)


Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations

Word count: 46326 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
11/29/06 Updated: 09/18/11

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 04/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: First detention...87 more to go...

oh, I hope you update soon. This was an excellent chapter as usual. I loved the grapes OMG!!!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. :)


A Letter Never Read by beauty and brains
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 64]

Summary: A motherless child. A heart-broken father. A box filled with long lost treasures. And a letter holding all the secrets that have been buried for over ten years. Will Harriet discover why her father has kept her in the dark for so long? Will she finally come to know her mother…through a letter never read?

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 4292 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
12/04/06 Updated: 12/06/06

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Letter Never Read

A beautiful piece of writing that made me cry. Keep up the amazing work and thank you for sharing this piece with us.

Author's Response: Thanks very very very much! I\'m glad you liked it. I love your user name! \'Tis cute cute. =]

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 08/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: A Letter Never Read

A beautiful piece of writing that made me cry. Keep up the amazing work and thank you for sharing this piece with us.

Author's Response: Pressing submit is the most fun! HAHA!



2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story

Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 175402 Chapters: 28 Completed: No
02/03/07 Updated: 01/16/10

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 05/16/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - A Chocolate Induced Revelation

Just so you know, it made my night to log on and see that this story had been updated.

I love the whole situation between James and Lily and what James said, "I've waited seven years for you, I think I can wait a little bit longer." totally made my heart sqush!!!! I like that you're building up to them being a couple and not rushing it.

Now I'm curious about what's going to happen with Sam and Emma. Please update soon.

Author's Response: I know, I was squealing in the libaray in school this afternoon when I checked my emails to see that this chapter had been validated after only a week! Aw, glad you liked Lily and James I think it\'s really important to build up their relaionship, they are the most important couple after all. Hmm, Emma and Sam *remains silent* I should be putting chapter 9 in the queue tonight! Thanks so much for the review!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 06/30/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9 - Gryffindor versus Slytherin

OMG... Sirius and Emma commentating the game....this should be awesome. As usual this was a great chapter. I will be on the lookout for the update... Keep up the good work!!!

Author's Response: Hehe yes it should be! Thank you, glad you enjoyed it! Part Two is now in the queue, so keep your eyes peeled!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 11/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Gathering

I just read this story for the first time and I LOVE it!!! I laughed so hard I had tears rolling down my face. I hope it doesn't take you a long time to update.

Besides the humor I love the way that you've portrayed the characters. Too many people have made Peter an unlikable character in stories when in fact he was at one point their friend. And the fact that Sirius was heartsick when he figured out his brother was a Death Eater seemed to make him a better character.

Keep up the good work and update soon.

Author's Response: Aw thank you SO much, your review made my day (school\'s been stressful lately)! I\'m so glad it made you laugh! Thank you, character portrayal is always something I worry about when writing this so I\'m immensely glad that you love it. I will try to keep up the good work lol and an update shouldn\'t be overly far away. Thanks so much again for your review!

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 11/29/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 5 - The Pickup Line

Wonderful! I love how playful you make the girls, especially since we all expect it from the guys. The part where Kristy, Emma and Lily are running around the common room and throwing things at each other was priceless. I also loved the line during the detention about Sirius's guardian angel storming out in protest. Wonderful line.

Update soon.

Author's Response: Aw thanks a lot! I really enjoyed writing the girls\' fighting bit, so I\'m glad you enjoyed reading it! Thanks, I\'m glad you liked the line, it\'s one of my faves too! Thanks for your review, I\'m hoping ot update before Christmas so I can leave all my lovely readers and reviewers an early pressie! :D

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 05/08/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 7 - Aftermath: Part Two

excellent chapter as always, sent me into giggles for a few minutes, especially after the mostly non verbal conversation between Remus and Sirius when Kristy asked Sirius," I wasn't supposed to understand that, was I?"

I can't wait to read more, please update soon.

Author's Response: Yeah, that bit seems to be quite popular, glad you liked it! Chapter Eight in the queue!


A Fresh Start by Hypatia
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 314]

Summary: Scorpius Malfoy was brought up in the knowledge that he came from an old pure-blood family. Hogwarts is going to teach him a great deal more. Will he be able to rise above his family’s tainted past, or will history repeat itself?

First place in the 2007 Autumn Challenge’s New Beginnings prompt.

Nominated for Best History/Mystery in the 2008 QSQs!

Canon compliant with all seven books, however, not compliant with all interviews given by JKR.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Mental Disorders

Word count: 56993 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
10/04/07 Updated: 12/31/08

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 05/30/08 Title: Chapter 11: Slytherin's Legacy

And the plot thickens... I can't wait to find out what happens next, please update soon. Pretty please with sugar on top.


Across the Line by Skipper424
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: Scorpius is much different than his Malfoy name would suggest. He’s a very friendly and genuine young wizard who, against the odds, has become close friends with Albus Potter. He is bright as a student and has an amazing talent for Potions, drawing him comparisons to a former Hogwarts Headmaster named Snape. His quick smile is charming and he has a sense of adventure and mischief to match any Potter. And, unbeknownst to Albus, he’s fallen for the youngest Potter, Lily.

It all sounds like countless other school-age romance scenarios taking place at both magical and Muggle schools worldwide, none of which end in tragedy. What makes this one different? There is a line existing between safety and danger. Not all people posses the ability to recognize it, or foresee possible consequences of their actions when they cross it. Even in the absence of malicious intent, awful things can happen when one strays across this line into an uncharted and treacherous wilderness of ignorance.

This is the first place winner of the September One-Shot Challenge. Very special thanks to joybelle423 for her wonderful beta reading. I cannot thank her enough. Thank you, thank you, thank you ...

Warning: This story contains implied non-consensual sex. There is nothing graphic and the reader does not witness the act, but learns enough about it to possibly be disturbed if sensitive to such things. Please proceed with this warning firmly in mind.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Non-Consensual Sex

Word count: 6938 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
10/17/07 Updated: 10/17/07

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 10/17/07 Title: Chapter 1: Across the Line

This was a well written story. The circumstances are very sad but you seemed to have captured everyone's personalities very well, especially from having the story told from the brother's perspective. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thank you very much.


Fairytale by x_lily_evans_x
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 39]

Summary: Seventeen-year-old Rose Weasley has always liked romance of the fairytale variety. She thinks she’s found her Prince Charming in Daniel Corner, the handsome Ravenclaw Seeker. But into her life enters Scorpius Malfoy, and it’s unclear whether he’ll be leaving it anytime soon. Suddenly it’s as if Rose is trapped in one of those devastatingly romantic soap operas her mother keeps telling her about… only that she’s not sure if it will have a happy ending… if she will have a happy ending.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4843 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
10/20/07 Updated: 05/20/08

Reviewer: MissHufflepuff Signed
Date: 05/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I really liked this chapter and was so glad you've updated.

My only criticism is that the letter at the beginning you said was from Lucius Malfoy when due to the content it appears to be from Draco. It took me a moment to sort it all out.

Other than that, excellent chapter and I'm looking forward to reading more.

Author's Response: I\'ve gotten the Lucius-Draco thing sorted out. It was a mistake on my part, sorry! Thanks for telling me that! I hope you continue reading this fic. (:

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