Summary: This story sets right after the end of Harry's seventh year at Hogwarts. A final battle seems to have put an end to the conflict with Voldemort. But the future is uncertain, choices must be made, and they prove more difficult than expected... Harry's world is about to change dramatically, and he must deal with a rising threat on top of sorting his personal relationships.
Great story! The plot with Maldemort is really inventive and Harry being the new Defense Against the Dark Arts teacher is both realistic and compelling. You've put Harry in almost the same situation as Snape was in Philosopher's Stone and it'll be fascinating to see how that turns out. Great work!
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Well done first chapter! The intro was particularly classy. I liked your portrayal of Snape (it's so easy to mischaracterize him as too mean or too nice) and the resumed Occlumency lessons is a good way to explore teen angst. Keep it up!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your insightful review!! Really means a lot to me! The intro just sort of... happened. But I'm glad you liked it! I was so nervous about writing Snape. He's a complex character to portray. I'm pleased you thought it was alright. Thanks again!
Summary: ONE-SHOT. Minor fluff warning.
There was just no way around it. Whether it was necessary or not, heroic or not, there was simply no escaping the fact of his actions. He had killed.
And he made me just like himů Harry thought miserably.
Loved it! Other random thoughts ahead. The fluff warning wasn't necessary; there was just enough fluff for a good romance story. Loved the Harry angst, but then again I'm a fan of angsty stories in general. I don't normally like stories set after Voldemort is defeated, but that's because some authors use the fact that the main characters are now adults to virtually ignore character development; you do not, which makes this story all the richer. Easily the best romance/angsty fic/treatise on the nature of fighting evil I've read. Oh yeah, and the ending was great, too. Magnificent work!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for the review! I put the fluff warning out of nerves, really... believe it or not, that's actually as "fluffy" as I've gotten so far in a fan fic, so needless to say I saw scared about how it turned out. Thanks for your lovely compliments... they mean a lot to me- truly. Especially since I'm such a die-hard fan of your fiction!
Summary: Parvati makes a love potion, but who is she planning on giving it to? Hermione finds out, but will it be too late? Please read and review, I like to hear how I'm doing!
Nice spin on an old classic romantic storyline: the love potion! You've got the characterization of Harry and Hermione down pat, so this story definitely has potential. Write more!