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My name is Beccah, short for Rebeccah, I am a teenager from the U.S., and I live and breathe Harry Potter. :D

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Fate by Liisa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 598]

Summary: Sirius returns miraculously from behind the veil, uncovering a secret that's remainded hidden for too long and was obviously not supposed to be found...He undertakes the task of trying to fix the mistake he made all those years ago on Halloween night

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 135024 Chapters: 46 Completed: Yes
11/11/04 Updated: 11/15/05

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/18/05 Title: Chapter 36: Interlude Four: You Haven't Cried

I hate cliffhangers!!! That was a very mean thing to do!!!! lol. Great chapter, though.

Author's Response: yeah, I'm mean :p so sorry ;)

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/26/05 Title: Chapter 38: Only Four

Eventually, I will stop crying. That was a brilliant chapter!!!! Great job!!

Author's Response: geeze, I'm makin everyone cry...don't know if that's good or bad but...meh...


Summary: Imagine you live a broken life, with no one to love, no hope of rescue. Then imagine that you have a chance to escape your personal hell...This is the story of Seirian Macnair, twin sister of [Executioner] Walden Macnair, a damaged seventeen-year-old girl from a horrible home. Sent to Hogwarts to get her out of the way, Seirian will learn a lot more than just more magic...she will have the chance to live a life she only heard of...a happy one. That is, until she realizes that her happiness might also mean her death, and the death of the one person closest to her...(MWPP)

"I wanted to know why I'm not allowed to go Hogwarts, and Walden is..."
To my own distant surprise, I was overjoyed when I smashed my head on the edge of the bottom stair and sank into blissful darkness…
I didn't know how to care anymore.
*cough* And any author certainly appreciates some kindly reviews, eh, you guys? Come now, brighten my day, dears. 7/25/05: IT'S NOT DEAD YET!!! :) Oh em gee, an update?! I hear you cry. Go ahead, have a blast. New readers welcome!

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Sexual Situations

Word count: 43731 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
01/02/05 Updated: 07/25/05

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/23/05 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: Agony

Hey, good chapter. Anytime you want to update or anything, feel free!!!!!!! Lol, just kidding. You're a really good writer. You're really descriptive with everything!! Please update soon!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm hoping that by the end of today there will be a new chapter up. Here's to hoping! *waves a flagon of butterbeer* And thanks for reviewing!


Spirits in the Future by JessicaH
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 587]

Summary: Voldemort attacks the Potters, James and Lily try to protect their beloved baby boy. Then suddenly they're in a house they do not know. Harry isn't with them and they don't know what happened. Where are they? And who are the redhead children running down the stairs? Why have they been sent? The story is placed in the future, years after Voldemort's death, but danger is still lurking. Features Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione.

Joint winner in the genfic category of the Multifaceted Fanfiction Awards

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 108188 Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
01/27/05 Updated: 11/17/05

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/25/05 Title: Chapter 16: Waiting for something to happen

Awesome chapter - I love how long it was!!!! I can't wait untill the ball... OMG!!! When are Jordan and Lily going to start going out????????? You're killing me, here!

Author's Response: Hey at least stay alive till you read the end of it! The ball will be a few chapters still altough it is approaching, only a few weeks away.


Summary: Seventh year sequel to Power of Emotion. Harry is recovering from his captivity, but he’s hiding how much it’s effecting him. With his powers increasing, and Voldemort now aware of the prophecy, can Harry find the secret to destroying him before Voldemort learns of the existence of these ancient texts? Would this be HP fanfiction if it were that easy?

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 274209 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
03/24/05 Updated: 07/10/05

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/29/05 Title: Chapter 12: Back Where We Belong

Omg, you are getting these chapters up so fast again!!!! Yay! You did such a good job on this chapter. I like how you put Blaise Zambini in Malfoy's place right away. That's just the sort of thing that Crabbe and Goyle would do - find a new leader two seconds after there best friend dies. I'm also happy to see some Harry and Hermione bonding! I haven't really seen that in awhile, because Harry's with Ginny and Ron's with Hermione. And, you made Hermione more human! You had her admit she has a problem!! You are so awesome!!!!!!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/23/05 Title: Chapter 8: A Much Needed Break

Sorry I haven't reviewed for so long, I've been at Cape Cod with my family. Anyway. This is possibly the best chapter you have ever written. It was so, so good!!!!!!! If you haven't already, you should seriously consider writing a book. It would probably be sold out in two days!!!!! Your writing is amazing!!!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/23/05 Title: Chapter 9: Of Legal Age

You're getting the chapters up so fast!!! I love you for that!!!!!! Good chapter! I can't say it was my favorite - I didn't like Drunk Harry in PoE, either, so that's probably why. Great job, though. UPDATE SOON PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/28/05 Title: Chapter 11: Funeral for a Friend

Really, really good! I love the Molly and Harry bonding thing that's going on! And HG for Hermione Granger was very very clever!!! This was an incredibly sentimental chapter... I almost cried, which really doesn't happen often! I disagree, however, with what you say about Harry not dying. I think, as I said before, that he will die sacrifycing (yes, I know i spelled that wrong) himself, and kill Voldemort in the process. JK made Sirius die, remember? She is a ruthless murderer, she said so herself! I KNOW we don't deserve that, but still... We didn't deserve Sirius's death, either!!!!!!!!! lol. Oh, yeah , I forgot. I'm enjoying all this catfight stuff between Ginny and Cho. I'm a very shallow person, and I find those scenes highly amusing.

Author's Response: Thanks, I'm glad you enjoyed. We can agree to disagree, but I had to make one more comment. There are tons of adults who adore HP, but there are tons of kids as well. I know my kids would be horrorstruck if she killed Harry. Sirius, on the other hand, really didn't faze them all that much. It devestated me, but not them. I think that was much more heartwrenching for the adults than her young fans, so I'm sticking with my opinion. ;)

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 05/06/05 Title: Chapter 17: Vendetta

Hey cool, I'm the first reviewer! Awesome! OMG! Is Ginny going to be okay????? Please don't kill her off! Great job!!!! Please update soon!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Actually, I've submitted the next chapter and had it returned to me for an OOC Harry. I'm feeling really insulted by it, as well. I think I have Harry very "in-character" and I'm ready to spit nails. Can you tell? Can I have some opinions on whether or not everyone thinks Harry is in character or not?

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 05/03/05 Title: Chapter 14: Calm Before the Storm

Omg, I have a reply to your puppy story. Okay. My neighbor's cat had kittens recently, and I wanted one really, really bad. So, I managed to convince my parents, (mostly my mom) that getting a kitten would be a good learning experience for my youngest sister. Don't know why they believed it, but... whatever works, right? Well, since getting the kitten was my idea in the first place, I got to name her, and guess which name I picked? Ginny!!!! Harry Potter names seem to be very popular for pets. lol. Ok, now the chapter. HOW COULD YOU MAKE RON AND HERMIONE BREAK UP LIKE THAT?????????????????? They and Harry and Ginny are the ones that everyone expects to be together forever!!! You are going to have them get back together, right? Because Ron really seems upset. Great chapter!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/13/05 Title: Chapter 4: Money Changes Everything

I just finished reading PoE and the start of this story. You are a wonderful writer, and I can't wait for the next update!!!!! I hope Vernon gets what he deserves from Remus and Moody!!! I loved how you had Tonks "testing" Harry - it was so realistic!!!!!!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 05/06/05 Title: Chapter 17: Vendetta

Second review, I'm giving you my opinion about your question. Here it is: I think you've done an incredible job with balancing Harry and his emotions. I don't know why they didn't accept it, because you are not writing him OOC.

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 05/05/05 Title: Chapter 15: Defense Against the Dark Arts

I am definetely on Hermione's side. I realize Ron still has a lot on his mind from Malfoy, but that's no reason to blow up at his girlfriend whenever he feels like it!!!! In the words of my best friend, How Rude!!!!!!! Great chapter! Now, I'm off to read chapter 16!! Cherrio!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 05/05/05 Title: Chapter 16: Riddle...Tom Riddle

Very sweet!!! Harry has his blanket back!!! YAY!!!!!!! Lol. I love how you did that! You always take the little details and turn them into something that everyone notices!!! GO HARRY for sticking to what he believes in with the whole DA thing

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 05/01/05 Title: Chapter 13: Feast of Fools

Excellent job! I love the dream thing... Is Ron seeing all the stuff Harry went through, through Harry's dream? Wow. I've still got goosebumps from reading about the dream!! Oh, congratulations on getting that nomination... You really, really deserve it!!!! You are a wicked good writer, and if I was judging, you'd win hands down! Just to let you know, your stories are all on my Favorites List! GREAT JOB, UPDATE SOON, and GOOD LUCK!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 05/16/05 Title: Chapter 20: All Hallow's Eve

Haha, great chapter! It's taking a really long time to be updated, though, isn't it? There must be some kind of problem, because I started a fanfic, and my first chapter is still in queue, its been there for like a week! So, anyway, update as fast as humanely possible!!!!!!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/18/05 Title: Chapter 7: Political Maneuvering

Yay!!! The beach!!! With Ginny..... lol... GREAT chapter... I absouloutly love this story!!! :D Awesome awesome awesome!!!! Update soon!!!!!!!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/16/05 Title: Chapter 6: Recovering...Again

That was a wonderful chapter! They're updated so fast - I love it! Keep it coming!

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 04/14/05 Title: Chapter 5: End of an Era

OH NO!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! You killed off the Dursley's!!!!! It's not that I liked them, or anything, but Dudley was just starting to be nice! Poor Harry, he's going to blame himself again!!!! :( It's amazing how descriptive you are with your writing. I can't wait for the next update!

Author's Response: Yep, I killed them. Dudley and Harry were making a connection,'s not just the bad guys who are going to get in the line of fire on this one.

Reviewer: GryffinGal Signed
Date: 05/07/05 Title: Chapter 18: Quidditch, Anyone?

Yes! First reviewer AGAIN!!!!! I'm so glad Ginny is okay! You had me worried for a while!!! 10/10!!!!

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