Hey my darling people who acutally decided to read this. My names Remi, Im 14 and a hopeless romantic (even though my life has nothing romantic about it) Im mainly hear to reveiw on the amazing storys MNFF has to offer.
I enjoy Lily/James storys the most and I Adore Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione a whole lot. Ocationally Ill be bored and read a humour fic but I WILL NEVER READ ANYHTING NOT CANNON. Like those wacky Harry/Hermione shippers theyre nuts. Other than that I've been wokring on stories just havent gotten around to giving them to a beta or typing them up on my computer. Other than that there still just little ramblings in a note book under my pillow penned in blue color pencil =)
Aw the fluff was cute and i love flangst! And im soo extact that they got back together but lily and that dork who i totally forgot whos name he was mustn't ever get abck together. Hes too umm whats the work sweet. it bugs me!!
Author's Response: Heh...okay...
Aw that was cute again! Sirius sounds like this guy nick that i know in my class except this amazing girl briana whos my friend kinda took him off his feet and now there inseperable! He used to be just like old sirius!
Author's Response: Aww. Glad you liked it!
Love the chapter names thats soo cute how sirius wrote the note all siriuslike!! Wow that would definatly never happen to me! But hye thats why I read fan fction waitint gfor things liek what people come up with happpen to me!! =)
Author's Response: I absolutely adore Sirius. Thanks so much!
OO Secreats secreat are no fun you must share with everyone!! Ha i havent sang that in years!! Oh can't wait can't wati can't wait!!
Author's Response: You\'ll find out if you keep reading!
Aw soo cute! Darn that lily! They could've had a remus and amber kiss!! But no you just had to have Lily come in!! Yes in responce to you Authors notes do you know how happy youve made me?? Ha love this line the best though
“Yeah, right, I’m just a challenge to him. He only likes me until I like him back,” she said, and then quickly added, “Which will never happen!”
Ah if only my dea lilykins knew!!
Author's Response: I forgot how I used to have Lily act in the older chapters, heh.
Though, James resolved, Peter was his friend, and now that the other three Marauders were taken (he counted himself because he wouldn’t date anyone but Lily) he had a fair shot.
Ha again deff my favorite line in this chapter! I love how Lily is starting to like James, but are you going to be one of those authors that makes James not like lily as soon as she says that she loves him? If so I'll remember that!! I love the last line too, but everyone has to fall in love eventually and if they do love the person it could happen pretty fast.
Author's Response: True. You\'ll have to keep reading to find out the rest of the Lily and James stuff, though. :D
Nows thats smooth Peter almost peed himself in fright. and yet again this one made me have milk flying out of my nose then (on James’ command) flew over Snape’s cereal and pooped in it. and the milk tasted funny and now little milky things are in my cup.. *rusn to check the experation date* well now we know why the milk has things in it it expired yesterday!! Gosh every chapter I have read so far (what is this number 7?) has been amazing good thing i foudn this story becuas ei had the worst day today and this totallly has cheered me up! To bad now I have to go to bed! Ill be back here all day saturday though! I would be here tomorrow but my band and jazz band are playing at dorney for ginormous throphys! Ill dedicate one of my 2 solos to this amazings tory and the other to my friend jackie cause shes making me!!
Author's Response: Glad I could cheer you up! It\'s a little late, but I hope you did well at your jazz band thing! You might\'ve played against my school, actually. We\'re pretty close to Dorney and we\'ve got a really famous jazz band. I\'m not sure, though.
Love you authors note! And what did i tell you last time i reviewed? At least you gave me hints this time other authors leave you guesssing and stuff. I adore the being descret thing though! It was funny as hell!!
Author's Response: It\'s been so long that I totally forgot what that author\'s note said...
Oh my gosh that was the bestest chapter so far!! I just love Christmas chapters too bad lily and james didnt spend it toether like sirius and agie. WHAT IS THE PRESENT!!! Oh wait i dont need to freak out! *preshes submit button* I can read the next chapter!
Author's Response: Heh, lucky you. :D
Thats wasnt a fluff overdose it was amazing!! Okay the last line must mean James or well Ill just stab you with this umm *looks around* with this half eaten pretzel!! You better beware my pretzel stabbing skills!! Poor Agie hopefully she doesnt die or soemthing seeing as Sirius doesnt end up qith a girl *realizes she said something stupid8 OH NO DONT TAKE THAT LAST LINE SERIOUSLY! Yeah wellpp onward next chapter!!
Author's Response: Well everyone has to die eventually...Adriyana, not yet.
HOLY ALL THINGS HARRY POTTER!! WHAT HAPPENED!!!!! Damn maybe it really is teh grim or Sirius's stupid fan club going to far.. or maybe Voldy or snape or that loser guy thomas... mhhmm the possiblities *puts on detective hat*..
Author's Response: Haha. Detective hat. \\o/
Still wonderfull and amazing as I left it!! My favorite line is definatly this one. 'Bloody gorgeous idiot' Ive actualyl started to call this guy that. Hes a little stupid (but aren't we all) and hes amazingly hot!! I love this chapter and the confiertaion between lily and jeremy was oh so juicy!!
Author's Response: I love that line, too! You\'re like the first person to mention it, so thanks so much!
“You do know that if you told him any of this, he’d probably have a seizure of joy, and then his head would explode?” ANother favortie line! And I just love how in every chapter you have an amazing title thats insid ethe story!! Oh and Jeremy yand Lily BROKE UP FINALLY!!!!!!!!! YAY Partayyy time!! Yes that was the best thing that has ever happened to me today!
Author's Response: Does that mean you really like my story, or did you just have a bad day?
OOO Interesting Interesting!! Poor Remus and Amber though. theyre my favorites!! But good for Agie and the robes! And James being there!! SImply amazing work!!
Author's Response: Heh, glad you liked it, thanks!
Aw super sweet. i wish a guy would ask me to dance and stuff liek that. But guys dont liek me and apparently im a curse to them!! But petter has a girlish interest!! How amazing is that!!
Author's Response: Tell me about it. ;D
THAT WAS SIMPLY AMAZING AS ALL LILY AND JAMES KISSES!!If there was a contesst for best Lily and James kissing scene your would win Gold Silver Bronze and Cholcolate!! That was the best scene ever. You made me jump up and down screaming for joy!
Author's Response: THANKS!! Chocolate = Best Award EVER.
SImply wonderful. Poor Lils and Jamesy! Their soo cute though!!! Ahh I gotta go shower! But then I promise to be back cause this story is soo amazing. And my sister has to do a last minute project. Oh when will those procrastinators learn!! Haha! Oh im sencing some posible black family rivalry arent I not?
Author's Response: Glad you liked it! Heh. Yeah. Procrastinators. *shifty eyes*
Ecuse me but she has no memory!! Wow that wasa nice little put in that i wasnt expecting. poor Sirius though I would be a wreak one if i acutually had a boyfriend (which will never happen) and 2 if that were to happen to someone i would know i would cry a whole lot! Hes acutally taking it a bit well seeing as he didnt run off and cry and nevver come bakc like i though you would made him. =) all and all this is amazing.
Author's Response: I can\'t really see Sirius crying...
Now break and bake is amazing and I would love for some! Okay poor Lily at the end of this chapter. I first of all if I was here would just logically plan a situation like this out... oh wait Im not lily so well i would just run up to James and kiss him. Poor Sirius I sure hope that if Agie gets her memory back she does remember him and her togehter they're like my new fav couple. Jo should totally read this!!!
Author's Response: YES. Break and bake = BEST EVER.
Aw that was kinda depressing now if she remembers peter before Sirius I will throw this um *digs in computer room for soemthing* This old sock at your face!! Does REmus call amber star because his name is moony and the moon and stars are always out together? Wow if thats right am I like the last person to get that by now? haha love this soo far its amazing as hell.
Author's Response: No, not the sock! And yeah, that was in the 6th chapter, I think. unless I cut it out while I was editing.