Hey my darling people who acutally decided to read this. My names Remi, Im 14 and a hopeless romantic (even though my life has nothing romantic about it) Im mainly hear to reveiw on the amazing storys MNFF has to offer.
I enjoy Lily/James storys the most and I Adore Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione a whole lot. Ocationally Ill be bored and read a humour fic but I WILL NEVER READ ANYHTING NOT CANNON. Like those wacky Harry/Hermione shippers theyre nuts. Other than that I've been wokring on stories just havent gotten around to giving them to a beta or typing them up on my computer. Other than that there still just little ramblings in a note book under my pillow penned in blue color pencil =)
Summary: “Guilt brings people together. It’s a takes one to know one type thing.”
James Potter has always been a spoiled, arrogant, lazy show-off. When he enters his final year at Hogwarts School, he’s Head Boy . . . and he’s still a spoiled, arrogant, lazy, show-off. But because of that terrible summer, he’s also guilt-ridden.
Lily Evans has always been a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. When she begins her last year at Hogwarts, she’s Head Girl . . . and still a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. But the first night back — and the murder that takes the entire school by surprise — leave her guilt-ridden as well.
With the darkness that’s surrounding the Wizarding world slowly seeping, at long last, onto the grounds of Hogwarts and into the lives of James Potter and Lily Evans, what comes next?
THis is soo cute, I love James and Lily's 4am conversation it was so cute and really gives you that nice picture in your head of whats happening. I really love how deep this plot is going!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm have a lot of fun writing this, both James and Lily's growing relationship and the murder mystery, so I'm glad you like both :)
Hello my dear!! I read both of the latest chapters together right now since I couldn't last week cause of my finals )I GOT MY CHEMISTRY REGENTS GRADE I GOT A 68!! haha its a big deal that i actually passed) I beleive that Regulus killed both of them, or well Regulus used the imperious curse to kill Jilly and then finished Lenore off in person to make it offical, I love the cute little Siruis & Lily banter and James had the perfect boy reaction to his birthday as well, I recomended this to my friend and I hope she starts reading too so I can finally share with others how great this story is!
Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, I know how killer chemistry can be -- congratulations on passing :) And I'm glad you liked this chapter -- liked the banter and James's reaction. As for your theory, well, you'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for trying to spread the story love!
I thought Lily knew already that Remus was a werewolf and that James was an Agamagnus? Hm maybe it was a different story i was reading? Well I think this is great although there was much of Lily and James being all cutesy which made me a bit sad :) I think that you should follow Lily and James through all the things that they're said to happen like three times defying Volders well i think theyve done it once already like for the battle at Diagon Alley so keep going Im going to talk this story up for everyone!
Author's Response: Someone else said the same, but I'm pretty sure in this story Lily doesn't know yet. Maybe I've messed up canon and she's supposed to know by her seventh year. Well, the next chapter should clarify everything. Do you want more or less of cutesy James and Lily? Because I love to include it, but I'm always worried it'll be TOO fluffy. Thanks for the review!
MORE FLUFF!!!!!! haha you write great fluffyness
Author's Response: Thank you! There's a lot of angst to come in the next few chapters, but a few major fluff explosions are also on their way ;)
I just nominated this story for best canon romance!! I hope you win! You're just absolutely one of the best writter here and it makes me so happy to read every single one of your stories! Best of luck! I'll be wearing my evil eye bracelet just for you to win!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like my writing and think it among the best -- that's such high praise and absolutely makes my day to read :)
I love how your going to add the thrice defied thing into this it's going to be soo awesome I can't even describe how great it is! I can't wait for the Boxing Day chapter its going to be liek the highlight of my day when I read it!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the next chapter isn't too far off.
My dear this is fantastic!I love how you amek James sounding like a real guy with hormones and stuff over how he feels like Lily, and detective James gave me such a laugh casue I was like picturing it in my mind and it wasn't going to well up in that old empty stop that i call my brain.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I could picture detective James perfectly, too, when I was writing him. I'm glad you liked that, and that you like how I describe James. :)
Ohmy god that was awesome. I kove how you make her seem so real and not perfect, as well as i love how you make James so much in love with her but yet he knows when to stop being the loveable jerk and be the person to hold to for support.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it and like how I portrayed both Lily and James! Thanks for the review :)
Summary: The final confrontation between Voldemort is over and those left must pick up the pieces. Hermione tries to hold everyone together while Ron suffers through the loss of his brother, and proves to be more than a mere support for him.
Everything is positively perfect! Except you need to write soo much more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! These little short chapters just don't satisfy my hunger! haha' your writing is flawless
Author's Response: Thank you!!! The next few chapters are longer and I hope you like them :)
Ive found someone that lovess describing words like I do, haha i love adjectives to descibe people i though i would share that. That was sweet her and Ron the little dance and them being made to dance together forever commenty thing.I've finally found a Ron/Hermione fic to follow!! YES MISSION ACCOMPLISHED! I'll be watching you sweetie ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I do love adjectives :) Haha now I feel pressure to do good
Summary: "Ron . . . it was never Harry. It was always you. It was ever only you. Just you."
It's been two months since Ron and Hermione shared their first kiss. Now they're facing another first: their first date. *one-shot*
in all my readings on this site with ron and hermione i've actually never come up with one of their first date so you've like set the bar extremely high for someone to follow up with if i ever read another one!! Simply wonderfully done and it was completely in Hermione's character to not go through with her own idea!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad this is something that hasn't been done before and that you think it sets the bar high ;)
Summary: Harry takes Ginny on a trip down memory lane. Some memories should be cherished forever, and sometimes we have to put the past behind us so that we can make new memories.
Mhh, what to say what to say. Ah i got it, it was cutesy and a bit adorable and its kinda strange how it was like written but still the effect in the end was pretty good, keep writing Ill keep reveiwing!
Ron knows Hermione said they'd take the lift to allow Scorpius and Rose to walk downstairs without him dogging their heels, but he still kinda hopes to get stuck.
Gosh that was prettty ahhhmazzzing yet again, i swear where have youbeen all my life!!!?!
I was here, you just didn't know it, LOL.
Summary: I hadn't seen him since I was eleven, but he had a rather distinct look about him. It was hard, after all, to forget that black hair that stuck up in the back and the bright green eyes behind those glasses. And the scar — I had always thought it neat to have a scar shaped like a lightening bolt.
Jane Martin sees the odd, quiet boy she went to primary school with years ago in a jewellery shop and she's shocked to see how much things have changed for the boy with taped glasses and baggy clothes. *one-shot*
that was likeee sooo adorable, thers to little tears on my face and its just likee the most perfectest thing i've ever read!!
Author's Response: I'm glad you liked it! It is a pretty adorable story ;) Thanks for the review!
Summary: “…and all the men and women merely players”
--William Shakespeare, As You Like It, 1600
When Professor Viola Cassio arrives at Hogwarts, she is dismayed by the lack of Muggle culture her students exhibit. She intends to make some changes - starting with the introduction of Shakespeare to her students. And organising a Drama Club seems like the perfect way to begin.
Compelled into joining by her friends, bookish Rose Weasley finds herself unwittingly sucked into Professor Cassio’s reproduction of Romeo and Juliet… as the leading lady. Unfortunately, it seems that none other than Scorpius Malfoy has been assigned the role of Romeo. But as personalities clash and sparks fly, Rose finds it increasingly difficult to distinguish where rehearsal ends and real life begins.
To top off the whole fiasco, someone is after the Drama Club’s closure, and will seemingly stop at nothing to get it…
oh my god ROMEO AND JULIET!! That play was likee the best thing i ever read last year in english! I adored it every day we'd act out what we were reading and my enlgish teacher he was soo funny with the meaning of everything shakespeare wrote! God i'd never forget it. i like this story, so im gonna be keeping an ey eout for it, you did so well, but it was totally too short!!
Author's Response: Huzzah for Romeo and Juliet! We got to watch the Baz Luhrmann movie and it was awesome. Anyway, thanks for your review, and sorry that there wasn't enough of it! ;-)
Summary: "My marriage is falling apart for no apparent reason," she declares.
Ginny Potter loves her husband, loves her children, and loves her life. At least, she used to. But things are changing, and she's not sure why. *one-shot*
That was soo cute, and I like this a lot you should definaly go with those feels more often!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks! I'll try :)
Summary: He knows he shouldn't say it, but there's still a part of him that remembers being fifteen, that remembers thinking it impossible to get Lily Evans to give him a chance, and it's never really been put to rest. "Don't stop loving me," he whispers. "Please, Lily. Don't ever."
He thought the war couldn't become any more unbearable. But, somehow, it does. It probably has something to do with his wife driving off in the middle of the night. (Companion to "You Told Me Once, Dear.")
That was soo brilliantly written I just adore the struggle James is going to it makes him feel so real to me and I have this nice little movie going on in my head thanks to your beautiful writing!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked it and could picture it :)
Summary: The seven men who loved Hermione Granger.
Aww this is soo cute! I would love to see this as a Molly and Authur Weasley one though just cause I figure you would make it soo good!
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it! I'll definitely do others, although at this point I have no idea who I'll do!
Summary: The seven men who loved Ginny Weasley.
Aw that was so cute!! I really love these little character things it's making into a great series!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad you're enjoying my little "series" ;) The next one is in the queue!
Summary: The seven women who loved Harry Potter.
That was really sweet the whole part with Lily his daughter, I love how great a father you portray him to be!
Author's Response: Thanks! I really liked writing the scene with Lily and I definitely imagine Harry to be a great father, so I'm glad you liked that!