Hey my darling people who acutally decided to read this. My names Remi, Im 14 and a hopeless romantic (even though my life has nothing romantic about it) Im mainly hear to reveiw on the amazing storys MNFF has to offer.
I enjoy Lily/James storys the most and I Adore Harry/Ginny and Ron/Hermione a whole lot. Ocationally Ill be bored and read a humour fic but I WILL NEVER READ ANYHTING NOT CANNON. Like those wacky Harry/Hermione shippers theyre nuts. Other than that I've been wokring on stories just havent gotten around to giving them to a beta or typing them up on my computer. Other than that there still just little ramblings in a note book under my pillow penned in blue color pencil =)
Summary: “Guilt brings people together. It’s a takes one to know one type thing.”
James Potter has always been a spoiled, arrogant, lazy show-off. When he enters his final year at Hogwarts School, he’s Head Boy . . . and he’s still a spoiled, arrogant, lazy, show-off. But because of that terrible summer, he’s also guilt-ridden.
Lily Evans has always been a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. When she begins her last year at Hogwarts, she’s Head Girl . . . and still a self-righteous, impatient, temperamental know-it-all. But the first night back — and the murder that takes the entire school by surprise — leave her guilt-ridden as well.
With the darkness that’s surrounding the Wizarding world slowly seeping, at long last, onto the grounds of Hogwarts and into the lives of James Potter and Lily Evans, what comes next?
Wow this story like made my day! Like usual I love how the characters are so perfectly written, James is written so perfectly, and I love how instead of just falling in love with Lily you put in the exact moment when James realized it I think that it was soo cute. I can't wait to read the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm so glad you think the characters remain well written. And if you like the romance in this chapter, I think you're going to love the next one! ;)
oh my gosh i LOVEEE that cliff hanger!!! That was a spectacular chapter no seriously, if i could find you to track you down i will make you a big cupcake and i will be at your beck and call for the rest of my life jsut becasue i need to live off your stories!!
Author's Response: Haha, thanks very much! I think that's one of my favorite chapters so far, so I'm glad you enjoyed it so much!
oh my lanta oh my lanta oh my lanta!! haha i bet you've never heard that before! thats one crazy chapter you have tehre!! I got sooo concerned when i first read the fight i was likt OH MY LANTA NOOOO!! haha but then it made scence to me midway through reading it, I adore the plan and I love how you have the map being taking by flilch totally canon and not many people have that at all in their lily and james stories! I adore this soooo much I cant wait!
Author's Response: Oh my lanta? Yup, I have no idea what that means! But I'm glad you liked it and enjoyed that I included Filch taking the map. I think a lot of James/Lily stories just don't cover it -- my last one didn't -- but it fit for this story :) Thanks for the review!
Woah my lanta! I really adore all the complexity you have in this one chapter, i was litterally jumping up and down yelling at the computer screen. I'm sooo happy my computer is finnaly fixed! Reg is absolutely perfect, still so human in his feelings even though he's a bit diluted with evilness. Roiser's an absoulte nut job, but hes a great antagonist haha onward to the next chapter! Oh and oh my lanta is like my way of saying oh my god btw in case you were wondering
Author's Response: Thank you very much! This was such an exciting, fun chapter to write, so I'm glad you liked it and enjoyed all the complexity :) Rosier is a complete nut job, you're right -- he's certainly the sort of character you love to hate! And oh my lanta is what Uncle Jesse on Full House used to say, right?
I loved the last scene!! This whole story is marvalous, I love how you have your readers take a good look at your characters you make them so complex and they act not like characters but really like people too!
Author's Response: Thank you very much! I'm glad you like it and like all the characters. Trying to write the characters well was really my main goal when I wrote this :)
Why my dear, this is simply awesome, im eating it up just like i would to chocolate cake!! I really like this whole James POV thing going on and Sirius is wonderful!
Author's Response: Haha, well, thanks very much! I'm glad you enjoy it so much so far. :)
Aw I love this part so much but wait what did Jamesy put togheter? AH well im just so frazzled!! Haha the name Heather Mills reminds me of this evil permident sub we had hah that jsut made me laught i hadnt heard the name since 8th grade english!
Author's Response: You know a real life Heather Mills, huh? That's fun! (I'm sorry she's evil though!) I'm glad you liked this chapter, and you'll find out what he put together soon. Thanks for the review!
The drama! The suspence! The wittyly funny Sirius!! ahaha This by far is the cutest chapter in this story, I love how James acts like a real boy in this with the whole i kind of love you stuff it was intirely refreshing and so relateable! Mh i wonder whereRemus is that should be an interesting tidbit of information! Can't wait for more since your single handedly saving me from my project right now!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! I'm glad you liked this chapter! As much as James clearly loves Lily, I still think he'd be what all teenage boys are when it comes to love: ten kinds of awkward :) The next chapter is about half written! Hopefully it'll be posted soon.
Aw my darling, i lovee whats your doing to the story, its like spectacular, and i lovee your cliffe hangers! they dont get me mad like some storys to they get me excited and eager for the next chapter!!
Author's Response: Thanks very much! It's good to know my cliffhangers -- as evil as they might be -- get you excited and eager for another chapter! Hopefully the next chapter should be up soon. :)
THis is soo cute, I love James and Lily's 4am conversation it was so cute and really gives you that nice picture in your head of whats happening. I really love how deep this plot is going!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I'm have a lot of fun writing this, both James and Lily's growing relationship and the murder mystery, so I'm glad you like both :)
Hello my dear!! I read both of the latest chapters together right now since I couldn't last week cause of my finals )I GOT MY CHEMISTRY REGENTS GRADE I GOT A 68!! haha its a big deal that i actually passed) I beleive that Regulus killed both of them, or well Regulus used the imperious curse to kill Jilly and then finished Lenore off in person to make it offical, I love the cute little Siruis & Lily banter and James had the perfect boy reaction to his birthday as well, I recomended this to my friend and I hope she starts reading too so I can finally share with others how great this story is!
Author's Response: Thanks! Haha, I know how killer chemistry can be -- congratulations on passing :) And I'm glad you liked this chapter -- liked the banter and James's reaction. As for your theory, well, you'll just have to wait and see! Thanks for trying to spread the story love!
I thought Lily knew already that Remus was a werewolf and that James was an Agamagnus? Hm maybe it was a different story i was reading? Well I think this is great although there was much of Lily and James being all cutesy which made me a bit sad :) I think that you should follow Lily and James through all the things that they're said to happen like three times defying Volders well i think theyve done it once already like for the battle at Diagon Alley so keep going Im going to talk this story up for everyone!
Author's Response: Someone else said the same, but I'm pretty sure in this story Lily doesn't know yet. Maybe I've messed up canon and she's supposed to know by her seventh year. Well, the next chapter should clarify everything. Do you want more or less of cutesy James and Lily? Because I love to include it, but I'm always worried it'll be TOO fluffy. Thanks for the review!
MORE FLUFF!!!!!! haha you write great fluffyness
Author's Response: Thank you! There's a lot of angst to come in the next few chapters, but a few major fluff explosions are also on their way ;)
I just nominated this story for best canon romance!! I hope you win! You're just absolutely one of the best writter here and it makes me so happy to read every single one of your stories! Best of luck! I'll be wearing my evil eye bracelet just for you to win!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I'm so happy you like my writing and think it among the best -- that's such high praise and absolutely makes my day to read :)
I love how your going to add the thrice defied thing into this it's going to be soo awesome I can't even describe how great it is! I can't wait for the Boxing Day chapter its going to be liek the highlight of my day when I read it!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Hopefully the next chapter isn't too far off.
My dear this is fantastic!I love how you amek James sounding like a real guy with hormones and stuff over how he feels like Lily, and detective James gave me such a laugh casue I was like picturing it in my mind and it wasn't going to well up in that old empty stop that i call my brain.
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I could picture detective James perfectly, too, when I was writing him. I'm glad you liked that, and that you like how I describe James. :)
Ohmy god that was awesome. I kove how you make her seem so real and not perfect, as well as i love how you make James so much in love with her but yet he knows when to stop being the loveable jerk and be the person to hold to for support.
Author's Response: I'm glad you like it and like how I portrayed both Lily and James! Thanks for the review :)
Summary: The final confrontation between Voldemort is over and those left must pick up the pieces. Hermione tries to hold everyone together while Ron suffers through the loss of his brother, and proves to be more than a mere support for him.
Everything is positively perfect! Except you need to write soo much more!!!!!!!!!!!!!! These little short chapters just don't satisfy my hunger! haha' your writing is flawless
Author's Response: Thank you!!! The next few chapters are longer and I hope you like them :)
Ive found someone that lovess describing words like I do, haha i love adjectives to descibe people i though i would share that. That was sweet her and Ron the little dance and them being made to dance together forever commenty thing.I've finally found a Ron/Hermione fic to follow!! YES MISSION ACCOMPLISHED! I'll be watching you sweetie ;)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Yes, I do love adjectives :) Haha now I feel pressure to do good
Summary: "Ron . . . it was never Harry. It was always you. It was ever only you. Just you."
It's been two months since Ron and Hermione shared their first kiss. Now they're facing another first: their first date. *one-shot*
in all my readings on this site with ron and hermione i've actually never come up with one of their first date so you've like set the bar extremely high for someone to follow up with if i ever read another one!! Simply wonderfully done and it was completely in Hermione's character to not go through with her own idea!
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm glad this is something that hasn't been done before and that you think it sets the bar high ;)