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Destined to Be by The Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: James is passionately in love with Lily, but she despises him. Each year things seem to get worse for the love sick boy. When he finally finds the courage to tell her the truth about how he feels, how will Lily react? Will her heart finally make a change?

Follow the two through each year at Hogwarts as hearts are wrenched, twisted, and finally touched as the two struggle to find the love they were destined for…

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Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 08/16/07 Title: Chapter 9: YEAR SEVEN PART 2

it started a bit slow, but eventually it got really good! i love the final 2 years!

So Into You by unknown_force

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: One-shot, HBP missing moment Lavender seems like the girl that has everything. She's pretty and attracts boys like a magnet, but deep inside, she has the same insecurites, just like all other girls. Deep inside, she wants to find the boy that will sweep her off her feet. Just when she thought she found the one, it all turned out to be a hoax. Look into the world of Lavender's heartbreak as she reflects on her relationship with Ron.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 09/23/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Definetly feel sorry for her. How could I not?

I liked the story, by the way. Its easy to believe it happened that way.

His Better Side by Karalyn

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: While watching a Quidditch match in her sixth year, Lily Evans gets a glimpse of James Potter's better side.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 08/04/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

i looove it! for once a fic that doesn't portray lily as an alien! she isn't a cold-hearted bitch that all of a sudden decides that her nemesis is the love of her life. thank you for that one!

My Deliverance by TwinSuns

Rated: Professors • Past Featured Story
Summary: Voldemort's rising reign of terror, NEWTs, death attempts, a Headship, a tangled affair with James Potter, hilarity, grief, love, secrecy, maddness... it's almost hard to believe that I've survived to graduate. I am Lily Evans, and this is my 7th year.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 09/13/07 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Six: Intrigue

i love it! it's well written and the plot is entrancing. good job.

Friendship, Love, and Pranks: The Story of the Marauders by Padfoot is MINE

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Chapter Thirty-Eight in Queue!

They say someday your life will flash before your eyes...

The Marauders. The name alone strikes fear into the hearts of teachers and makes girls swoon. Watch as Sirius, who has always kept his emotions locked up in a box, finally finds the girl that has its key; as James masterminds everything, except how to win over the girl of his dreams; as Remus finds love, but learns it's just as hard to keep it going, and as Peter tries to prove he's just as good as the other four, no matter what he has to do. They're unstoppable, and it's safe to say that once they're gone, Hogwarts will never be the same again.

...let's make ours worth watching.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 09/19/07 Title: Chapter 29: Of Puffapod Seeds and People who Don’t Know When to Stop Talking

come on! you cant leave us hanging when things are finally getting interesting between james and lily! update now!
(sorry, I get a little bossy when people don't update good stories quite as regularly as thay should).

Author's Response: Er...okay. I don\'t have a problem with people who ask me to update, because, well, everyone does that (including me), but I\'m slightly bothered by the \"you\'re not updating fast enough\" thing. I\'m glad you like the story, but the truth is I have other things in my life that need attention as well, and it takes time to write an entire chapter.

The Epic Tale of the Hogwarts Food-fight by Gin_Drinka

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Some mistakes are too much fun to make just once."

After Lily Evans, Head Girl of Hogwarts, starts a food-fight with James Potter, Head Boy of Hogwarts, they are both given detention for the rest of the year, and are assigned a 'detention journal', which the staff say will help to settle their 'overwhelming and disturbing differences'. We have come across Lily's journal; her take on why the whole affair ever started, her intriguing relationship with one ‘supreme git of the galaxy’, the extents to which she will go for revenge and where it will lead her...

"And if for some unknown reason you come across this, Potter, and the paragraph above does not manage to penetrate your unusually thick head and convince you of my stupendous dislike of you, I hope the following sentence helps: I HATE YOU!"
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 12/13/07 Title: Chapter 11: Twenty-fifth detention... and the immortalized game of Truth or Dare

oh... I think this is my favorite fan fiction ever. It is original, well-written, funny as hell... You rock!!!

I'm brazilian, and I personally think that Mexican Soap is incredibly funny (mainly because it sucks so hard that you just have to laugh. Not to mention the dubbing...).

I just love McGonagall in this fic.

Author's Response: Oh, cool! You\'re brazilian too! Yay, another brazilian! Lol, sorry about that. My sister was into mexican soap for a while. She watched Rebelde. Have you heard of it? Yup, the voices taped over are the best. They\'re so misplaced it\'s hysterical! Thanks so much for reviewing, and I\'m really glad you like it.

The Wrong Werewolf by A House Elf

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It wasn't really that exotic. There were no "damsels in distress" or deadly dangerous dragons lurking school grounds. Voldemort didn't use Veritaserum to make Lily admit she was madly in love with James. James didn't offer to become a Death Eater to save Lily.

But there was a werewolf.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 08/27/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

This was a really good idea, congrats to your sister!

The beginning of the story was specially well-written; in my opinion, the way an author starts a story is very important, and you initiated yours incredibly well. Keep it up!

Moments by Ravencorgi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: "We do not remember days; we remember moments."

~Cesare Pavese

What follows is a collection of little memories that make up life: moments, both significant and obscure. A series of vignettes more than anything, that, put together, may paint a picture of the lives of our favorite Marauders. Rating because of language.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 01/17/08 Title: Chapter 6: An Exceptional Christmas

oh... how adorable!
the story started a little slow, but it's getting better and better! i love this chapter. good job!

Author's Response: Ahh, thank you!

Unrequited by R_Ravenclaw

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Everyone assumes Sirius Black has never truly cared for a girl. They're wrong. It's just that he can't do anything about it.

Sirius/Lily? Read to find out.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 5: Mudblood

I really don't think Sirius ever loved Lily, but I have to congratulate you. You arrange the facts perfectly, so that everything fits very well. And the reason behind Sirius' prank on Snape (although I personally don't believe it's the real cause) was brilliant! Only a truly gifted writer can make a story convincing for a reader who is against the main idea of the plot. Congratulations!

Author's Response: I always considered Sirius much more Slytherin than he would ever let on, so writing this was simple as far as that went. Thanks for your amazing compliments! I hope you keep reading!

7 Ways to Win Her Heart by x_lily_evans_x

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

Ah, Christmas. The season of joy and love. And Head Boy James Potter fully intends to use the loving atmosphere to his advantage by coming up with plans and using them to capture the heart of Lily Evans.

But since when do plans transfer beautifully from parchment to life?

Six plans become five, five become four, four become three, three become two, two become one, and then there are none.

Then his friends come to the rescue.

But of course.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 11/08/07 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter IV

If you love the next chapter so much, I trust I'll love it too. Post it soon, then!
I like your story, it can explore all the well-known clichés without "actually" using them. In a way, it makes fun of the normal stories that we sometimes come across at this site.
The story manages to, however, keep the romance. Well done!

Author's Response: It\'s really fantastic to know that you\'ve so much confidence in my \"taste\"! Lol. Glad to know that the essence of romance is still in this fic. Thanks for reviewing! :D

Dark Side of the Moon by Lioness06

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

In fifth year, Sirius along with James and Peter managed the difficult Animagus transformation. In fifth year, Sirius played the ‘werewolf prank’ on Snape. One was an act of loyalty, brotherhood, and friendship; the other an act of betrayal, vengeance, and recklessness. This story spanning the Marauders' fifth year will deal with both these incidents, as well as Sirius’s increasing rejection of everything having to do with ‘The Noble and Most Ancient House of Black”.

Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 12/17/07 Title: Chapter 2: Summer's End

I like it! It's a proper Marauder Era fic.
I hate those stories that are actually a romance between Sirius and some stupid unbelievable OC disguised as Marauder Era. This is about the actual characters, who are the most interesting people JK Rowling has created (I just love the Marauders and Snape).

I just wish you could've written something about James's life. I hope it happens on later chapters. *slight nudge*

Keep it up, it's really well-written!

Author's Response: Yes, this will be a \'proper Marauder fic\' -- not to say there won\'t be romance, but I\'m concentrating more on their friendship. I will be putting some things about James\'s life, don\'t worry. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 02/07/08 Title: Chapter 3: Mrs. Potter's Cookies

allright! i like it! update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you like it, and I\'\'ll update soon - even though right now I can\'t submit new chapters yet.

Memories of a Lily by VoldemortsTwinSister

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: So ... it's Lily's last year at Hogwarts. But what challenges will she have to face? How will she cope with being Head Girl? And, most importantly, will she find the guy of her dreams ... or nightmares??
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 11/19/07 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter I

Ohh! I love it!
The beginning is quite promising, I hope you can keep it up for the next chapters. How long do you think the story will be?

One thing: Bellatrix is older than them. She's Lucius' age, right?

The Last Goodbye by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans is getting married, or so Severus Snape has heard. There is only one way to verify it -- see Lily.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 11/08/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Goodbye

Oh... I feel so sorry for him...
I love your writing, your stories are never over-done, boring, or even incredibly creative.
They are simply... well written. Very much so.
Congratulations! You sure have a way with words!

Author's Response: Thank you so much!

Flowers by KASK

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans always had choices. But this is the hardest one she's ever had to make. Severus or James? Loyalty or love? Severus' happiness or her own? And can she ever forgive James?
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 11/12/07 Title: Chapter 1: Flowers

It's really well-written (all your stories are). The story is quite good, but I don't love the way you've written Severus; I think it's a bit OOC.
I believe the main reason Snape was so bitter is the fact he didn't really try. He didn't put himself out there, and that's why he was soo jelouse of James, even before he got Lily.
He was jelouse of James because the Gryffindor took chances. He made himself vulnerable for Lily, and that's why he got her in the end. Snape loved the girl, but he never actually told her that. He loved her, but he remained involved with dark arts. That's why she didn't end up with him, and that's why he changed (as much as he could). Because he felt remorse.

Author's Response: Maybe. But why couldn\'t he be bitter that as much as he loved Lily and told her, she didn\'t love him back. With your theory, he never knew how Lily really felt. If she told him she didn\'t care for him, that would hurt worse. Sometimes not hearing it is easier.

A Little Lighter Than Black by kritchen

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: From the ancient and noble house of Black to the obscurity of being Muggleborn, seventh year just promised to be another school year, although their last. Andromeda is testing her boundaries and the limits placed upon her. She's rebelling a bit from the ideals that she was brought up with. Ted is just living in the moment, still trying to decide what he wants to be. Fighting with habitual messiness and lack of organization, the cheerful, happy-go-lucky Hufflepuff soon finds himself in the midst of something he hadn't expected. Two unlikely characters, a spark of life, and the awkwardness of repeated encounters leads to more than they expected out of their seventh year.

I'm sorry for the long wait for the next chapter. It's finally finished. I graduated high school in 2010 and then entered college. It was quite a stressful time and quite the transition. I also lost the chapter once when my computer crashed. I had struggled with it for so long (writer's block) and when it was almost done, there it went into technological oblivion. I was so frustrated, I couldn't bring myself to try rewriting it until recently.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 12/19/07 Title: Chapter 2: Jealousy Becomes Him

So far, the story seems quite promising. I like it!

The way you have managed to make Andromeda a nice girl without denying the fact that she is a slytherin is great. She is in said house because that is where she belongs, and her personality does not deny that. Still, she is not an awful girl for it.
I find that most people make characters in that house horrible, but when it comes to Andromeda, they write her as a little angel who was sorted in slytherin for some strange, incomprehensible reason.

Well done!

PS: sorry if there are any mistakes ragarding grammar in this review. I am barazilian...

Author's Response: Well thank you. I tried very hard to stay true to my image of Andromeda. I know how diverse people are based on my own personal experiences with people. It sounds... I guess cliche is one word for it. But I know that there\'s good and bad sides to people. Lol. I\'ll shut up now. Thank you again. And your grammar seemed fine to me. :]

Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 3: Damsels in Distress and Knights-In-Shining-Armor

that was waaaay too short!
it's good though.

Author's Response: XD lol. I\'m sorry you feel that way. Chapter four is still with my beta but hopefully once the queue opens again, I\'ll have more than one chapter to submit. :]

Charmer by impervius raincoat

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: "Remus Lupin thinks his life would be easier if James didn't smile so much."

James Potter's smile has been getting Remus into a lot of trouble recently. And, strangely, Lily Evans is usually involved in someway. A short, sweet romance about how Lily and James really got together, told in five chapters from Remus' point of view.
Reviewer: Lana Moonland Signed
Date: 08/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: The First Incident

i really liked it, love the fact that it's from remus' POV, makes things different. just thought it could be longer, i hope you have a new chapter out soon, to make up for it xD