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Raindrops by Mary

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Rain leaves a trace of itself. It's rather like tears in that way. Short Oneshot, Adult!Hermione/Snape hinted at.
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Raindrops

So poignantly sweet...

It's really depressing... I'm going to start cutting my wrists now.

(Please write a sequel or a prequel, I like your writing!)

Painfully Obvious by Mary

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: "Severus... I only thought that I was being painfully obvious during my last year." HGSS, Challenge Response, COMPLETE
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Painfully

I like this one!

Writer's Block by Mary

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Hermione and Snape's respective cures for writer's block turn out better than expected. HG/SS, End of 7th year. Response to the WIKTT writer's block challenge. COMPLETE
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Block

awww that was so cute

There they were - In Love by ancientgirl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is a continuation of the first story with the same name.
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 12/07/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

awww, this story is so cute!!! I love it!!!

Author's Response: Thanks, I\'m glad you liked it.

The Thoughts of Tabitha by mugglegurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Meet Tabitha, the fourteen year-old daughter of Harry and Ginny Potter. What happens when she finds herself attracted to the son of her father's worst enemy? Along with a set of new characters, and the return of some old ones, this teen will find the meaning of friendship and family.
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 01/31/08 Title: Chapter 15: Conversations

Good chapter!!! I've been waiting forever for this (don't mean to make you feel guilty- okay maybe just a bit).

I love your story. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Haha. I already feel terrible. . .

Not Only a Granger by ferporcel

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: [WIP] Post-HBP. Eleven years after the end of the war, Hermione finds herself in a delicate situation when her only son leaves for Hogwarts and threatens her most guarded secret: that he’s not only a Granger, but also a Snape! SS/HG.
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 08/17/07 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 24: Needing More than a Name (Part II)

Good Chapter!!! You have excellent ideas!!!!

Dance is the Hidden Language of the Soul by Soap

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Set Post-Hogwart's, Voldemort has been defeated and the Wizarding world has returned to normal - well, as normal as Wizarding worlds could be. Hermione has a job at Gringott's, the Wizarding bank, but what will happen when an old enemy turns up as a colleague?
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 18: The Last Chapter

aww, that was cute!!!

Fair Exchanges by fawkes_07

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione wants to learn Occlumency, but Snape isn't known for doing favors out of sheer kindness. Both may learn something unexpected before it's all over...

This is a Book Five canon fic, hopefully fun and poignant. Enjoy.
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Great Escape

This chapter was really funny (and gross too, ugh, Umbridge!).

Author's Response: Thanks!

Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 24: Epilogue

aww, that was a cute ending!!!!!

Author's Response: Yah, too bad I had to print it about 25 chapters too soon...

A Sleepwalk to Remember by Lady Knightly

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: For once in her life, Hermione is faced with a problem she does not know how to solve...
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 12/31/07 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

Oh my freakin' goodness!!!! [hyperventilates in a bout of extreme emotion] That is the very sadest thing I have ever read!!! Please make it better, please!!!! The pain in my heart is too much to bear, let alone the anticipation!!!

Good chappie though. Can't wait for the update!!!!! Please update soon!!!! [theinvisibilitycloak gets on knees and begs pathetically, followed by a session of lying prostrate on the ground for a hopefully very soon update!!!]

Author's Response: hahaha, well how can i refuse such graceful groveling? thanks so much for reading!

Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 10/26/08 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

Whoooo!! Hot like none other. I love this chapter. Brought me back into the groove of the story. Oh, and I have that scent too, so fitting; one of my faves as well. Oh, and I loved the playfulness of the letters, so clever and

Author's Response: YAY for getting back in the groove :D :D Thanks so much for reading! Glad you enjoyed the letters -- that was one of my favorite parts to write :D

Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 01/18/08 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

So sad... poor Sirius!!! Everytime he dies my heart breaks.

Please update more frequently. That way, we as readers will remember what you wrote the last time.

Author's Response: yeah, again, i\'m sorry if you forget what happened in the last chapter, but it shouldn\'t take more than a minute or so to just skim over it real quickly. i always have to do that with the fics i read xD

Third Time's the Charm by Ginny_W

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After being setup on two disastrous first dates, Hermione reluctantly agrees to a third.
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 12/05/07 Title: Chapter 1: Third Time's the Charm

that story was awesome!!!

Cutting Down His Shadow by patelnotpatil

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Meera Rupali Chanduramani has had the media in her face since the day she was born, seeing as she is the daughter of the most feared wizard of the century. However, her values are not the same as her fathers and she wants the world to know. Follow her journey through Hogwarts - classes, Quidditch, romance - and see how she manages to break away from the image as "the princess of evil" - how she manages to cut down the shadow her father cast over her life.

Higher rating for some issues mentioned in later chapters.

I swear I have not abandoned this fic. It's hard to write because I have so much work to do in college, but I'm writing the chapter little by little as time goes on. I may not be able to upload it until after the hacker problems with MNFF are fixed, but know that this story is still alive and kicking. I am NOT leaving Meera. No way.
Love you all!

Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 01/22/08 Title: Chapter 12: "Enemy of His Blood"

Oh my gosh, I feel so bad for Oedipus. But it just happened so fast, I failed to process it. I just stared for a while at the text. Interesting story.

Smells Like Sirius Black by Soap

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Hermione Granger finds herself in an unusual place, an unusual time for that matter. Through an unintentional mishap, she is tossed right into the mix with James Potter, Remus Lupin, Peter Pettigrew, and Sirius Black. Will she make it back to her own time without altering the future irreparably? And what will happen when she returns?


Thanks to everyone who nominated this story for a Quicksilver Quill, and congratulations to the winners!!
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 21: Wedding Bells

Damn, this was the best fanfic ever! I love how you wrote it, especially adding littile details to connect it with the actual story. I have to wonder, though, if you got the idea from the 3rd movie when Sirius was right behind Hermione, I recall thinking that it was a strange seating arrangement.
Well, keep up the good work! You are my best author so far!! (It's 6 in the morning and I didn't sleep one bit, yet I'm not at all sleepy!)

Thin Lines by Ron x Hermione

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: “If you defy it, though, I will be gone by tonight.”

There is a thin line between teacher and student. In Severus Snape’s case, this line is extremely thin.

He has been watching a certain young girl take the body of a woman for many years, yet he has never professed his true feelings before now. But when he finally comes out with the truth, the girl defies him. He is not able to take this, and has told her he will have to depart Hogwarts forever, ultimately switching to the Dark Side, or worse.

But does this girl- woman- have feelings for him? And if she does, will she be able to stop him from leaving in time?
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 11/25/07 Title: Chapter 1: Thin Lines

[theinvisibilitycloak greedily munched her chocolates in great anticipation, sitting at the edge of her seat while finishing the story]

this story is a real shocker. Incredible. Creepy. Surprise ending.

Good Job!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

Polly by Soap

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Everything is going swimmingly in the lives of Sirius Black and Hermione Granger. But that doesn't make a very good story, does it?

Everything is going swimmingly UNTIL the Ministry (infiltrated by several former Death Eaters) passes a horrifying new law that threatens their relationship. How will they cope with this new situation? And will Ron ever learn to say the right thing at the right time?

The much-begged-for sequel to "Smells Like Sirius Black".
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 08/02/07 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Interesting, but I liked the prequel better.

Author's Response: Yea... me too! Sorry, I\'ll try to get it going better, but this one\'s giving me trouble. Thanks for reading. =)

Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 08/26/07 Title: Chapter 11: Under Arrest

can't wait for the next installment!!!

Lolita by ChanellaBella

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Hermione finds herself thinking about her Potions professor more than she'd like . . . And her Potions professor is wondering why "the mudblood" dominates his thoughts as well.
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 08/01/07 Title: Chapter 2: Nabokov Was A Complete Nutter

Wow, this is interesting. I like how you try to echo Humbert Humbert in that you make Snape have a diary/journal. This is very unlike Snape, but works to makes similarities. Keep up with the story!!
It's pretty good for your first fanfic. Oh, and I like the chapter titles, too!

Moonlight Shadows by liveforthedream

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Sometimes situations call for a things to be done because they are necessary– not right, or kind, or fair – but essential. When Hermione is caught up in this desperate battle where there are no rules or guarantees, it is in the most unlikely of places that she finds her strength and safety.
Reviewer: theinvisibilitycloak Signed
Date: 01/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Tonight

Wow, this is pretty good so far. Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: I\'ve glad you\'ve liked it; the new chapter\'s up so I hope you like it.