I love it! It's really good. I don't usually go for Remus/Hermione but I like it the way you put it :D Update soon...please? with chocolate on top?
Hello There,I just noticed something in the story...Harry was born the 31st of July,right?And in your story it says..."Lily got up and picked up Harry, her one-year-old son."and at the end it said..." Gotta get ready for tomorrow, it’s going to be your first Halloween party…”...If Harry was born the 31st of July,1980,wasn't he 3 months old on his first Halloween???Then the day his parents got killed both in you story and on JKR's wasn't it his second Halloween? Also...the date for the last half of the story it reads...October 30th 1981,in which Harry would already be 2 years 2 months old [since July comes earlier than Octuber]at which the date [in JKR's]Harry's parents would be dead for about a year already and he would be living with his Aunt.I realise this matter is kind of confusing,still it leaves more questions,but I just wanted to point that out,yet again I may be wrong.Good Job Hallie Black.
*gasp* that was AWESOME! So much like I pictured it...
Great story!why havnt you posted for like a year?
Wow!that was good...but I think a little too Harsh.I mean in one chapter they are almost shaging and in the next one they almost break up and the chapter ends in a suspense...I know that all couples fight and that it was getting a little too fantasie like and that kind of cliffhanger makes the story better also the fact that you made it a suspense at the end will contribute to make this an even better story...just wow.Keep up the good work! Wendy
Wow!That was funny! Wonder what will happen wuth the whole 'I love you,Fewat!' thing, should be fun.
Author's Response: Oh you shall see. XD
wow! great update.
Malfoy turned to look at the sleeping Hermione before whispering, “I think you and I are going to get along just fine now, Granger.”
I loved that part!
Author's Response: That was one of my favorite lines as well. XD
Harry's life stands at a crossroads.
He is torn between a return to the only true home he as ever known or a dark and dangerous winding and twisting road through Horcruxes and ending with murder.
But can he become a murderer? Can he over come the Dark Arts, while dabbling within them? Will Ron and Hermione stand beside him on the road to doom? And if love is truly his greatest power then why did he let his only true love go?
To defeat evil, Harry must climb a mountain of dark Death Eaters and Ministry mayhem - but will he come out on top in the Final Battle?
Great Update!!! I LOVE HARRY/GINNY ROMANCE! Update soon!
message to everyone-
"The 'Harry Potter' series are not just amazing books, exciting movies, or the best stories that have been written in years. J.K. Rowling isn't just the writer of the stories that have kept us reading , writing, reviewing, and waiting anxiously for each next book, movie, fanfiction or anything else that could have told us how the end of each books was going to be like. J.K. Rowling is simply a genius. And I am not, like thousands, maybe millions, just a fan. I am one of the people that will make sure that 'Harry Potter' is forever remembered, loved, and alive. And always remember, never forget, Harry Potter' it's not over, just starting."
Author's Response: Nice message wendy.
Craig- YOU ARE AWESOME! I loved this chapter! If I had an office, I would print it out and frame it! You did something I will never be able to do...you made decent smut. That last line was *staresatthescreeninlookforanappropiateword* AWESOME. ' she smiled and then moaned as Harry slid under the covers ! xD I LOVED the way you made them taking their relation one step further revelant to the plot. I siriusly can't wait for the next chapter! Update soon! or else...
Author's Response: Thank you. Yea I wanted to let people know what Harry was doing under there without actually saying it. Smut.... hhmmm there making love its not smut, the foreplay is smut. Glad you enjoyed and Ill try to get the next one up before the x-mas close season but I cant make a promise on it. Sorry.
That was great! Loved it. Finally they decided to accept it! They were a couple of mistakes, but the plot was awesome! The question is -Will Ginny break her promise[no tongue]? Hopefully.
Congratulations, Craig! This is my favorite H/G story. Love it. Update soon?
Wendy, I leave mistakes in for you to find ... ok thats not true.
Will Ginny break her promise, Ithink she will hold... for a bit. Next chapter is with my Beta, hopefully no more than two weeks before the next update... hopefully less. - Craig
No Updates? Has the next chapter gotten rejected? :(
Do you have the next chapter on another website? If you do, can you PLEASE send it to me by e-mail? :)
I'll appreciate it. This story is really, really good. Once again, love it. And I have become addicted :( So I am asking you to PLEASE feed my addiction :D Emphasis on the PLEASE.
Author's Response: Sorry I dont send chapters by e-mail, and I could not send this one anyway due to it still being with my Beta, I hope to get it back sometime soon - next day or two. I promise I\'ll get it up as soon as I can.
Hello there! Good story! Please update soon!!!
Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you like it!
Nice. But when is the romance going to start?
Author's Response: Haha, not for a bit still. Things will start to pick up. But if good things come to those who wait, can you imagine what I\'m going to give you guys when the time comes? ;) Thanks so much for reading and reviewing!
Sorry! I forgot to vote! ;) Yes, I would like you to post up a chapter from the Boy's point of view. It would be an awesome! Believe me, csl.
Author's Response: Thanks, dear. I have it written, I\'m just having problems getting it posted. ttfn
Hello. Here is my 2-week awaited long 1007 word review that took me an hour and 10 minutes to type ;) my coments are after the ' ~ '
Quotes and Remarks-
"Thank Merlin," he breathed. ~ Draco is saying thanks?! How predictable *coughNOTcough*
"Your name, you tit," Draco snapped. ~ Harry has hit low! He doesn't know his own name in this fic? Where have his six years of magical education gone? To a warmer place? With his sanity and heart? Probably *smirk*
'Defiantly, Draco's grip tighten on Hermione's waist'. ~ You go, Hermione! Lucky girl!
'She felt extraordinarily safe and grounded.' ~ I would too! Those big, strong, manly hands...yum.
'She could almost picture a miniature version of her partner standing on her shoulder holding a pitchfork, encouraging her to antagonize him.'~ Ruby...did you get that from personal experience? *smirk*
'Draco seems to be 'appreciating' you.'~ Again, VERY lucky girl.
'Hermione shivered and it wasn't from the cold.' ~ O_O *looks innocent* Why is she shivering? Is she getting sick?
'He seemed reluctant to let her go, but didn't fight her." ~ I really do hope that is not foreshadowing anything.. I am NOT going to look at the double meaning, I might choke you.
"You left her once before; it should be second nature by now." ~Ohhh....you go Draco!
...'his mere presence calmed her.' ~ *sigh* It probably made her feel hot all over too...she DOES have a cold!
Because you were too busy focusing on other parts of his anatomy. ~*looks innocent again* What parts?
“It’s a labyrinth.” ~ *smiles knowingly*
You need to be a Slytherin tonight.~ *sigh* Don't we all? *looks pointedly at Ruby*
Draco did not remove his hand, and she was more relieved than she ought to have been~ *innocent* Why was she relieved? Oh! Now I get it! She didn't want to fall!
“Perhaps not, but we’re partners. Besides, I’ve always maintained that Potter was insane. Someone needs to mediate.” ~LOL! Draco mediate? HA! Potter insane? Well, he is insane, in this fic. But I have the urge to laugh even though it isn't funny, so...HA!
“Who are you and what did you do with Draco Malfoy?” “He took a holiday — be back in the morning.” ~ Hey! I thought he was drinking beer with your spleen...
Startled, Ron stood up quickly, forgetting his head was inside the ‘box.~ LOL! Maybe his brain will fall back into place...wait! Ron? Brain? I do want to laugh...
“Piss off, Malfoy,” ~ I didn't know Draco was peeing on Harry! At least not in public...
“I should kill you for what you’ve done,” Harry said menacingly. Draco said nothing, but a shadow of his trademark smirk ghosted across his lips. ~Harry, Harry, tsk tsk. Don't you know that he is too sexy to die? Why else do you think that Jo didn't kill him?
“Not until Malfoy leaves.” “Not an option,” she said firmly. ~ HELL YEAH! There would be no fic then...
“No Ron, the day you left me, you took his side for me. Had I been with you, he’d be dead.” ~ It's a good thing she didn't leave then.
“I did, and I’ve not regretted it once. Now, if you want any of your questions answered, please release him and sit down.”~ You go girl!
“As ever, your powers of deduction are exceptional.”~ Very true. If there is a fic where Ron is not a fool [counting the books] then it's not Ron they are talking about.
“We left you behind to protect you!” Harry shouted. ~*snort* The only one she should be protected from is you! Oh, and the weasel!
“It never seemed to bother you before,” ~Ouch! Screw you! She was helping you, you fucking idiot!
"He’s shown more concern for my well-being in the past week than either of you have in the past four months. So yes, he’s my friend as well.” ~ Ooohhhh....yes, that is true.
Perhaps Malfoy was rubbing off on her. ~ How come you didn't put them rubbing each other!?!? It sounds like fun! Plus, it would be good for Hermione to get some heat, since she has a cold.
“Shut your face before I shut it for you, Death Eater. Or maybe I’ll just turn you into something small, white and fuzzy…that ought to do the trick. At least then you’d look like the rodent you are.” ~*gasp* How dare he?! Though Draco DID look good as a ferret.
“I am not a Dark wizard.” ~ No Harry, you are not a Dark Wizard, you are a dumb wizard. Big difference.
“NO!” he shouted again. ~ Stop shouting you insolent PRAT! My ears hurt!
“Granger is many things, but a liar is not one of them. Do you really think she would have even suggested something like she just did without reasoning it out until her head burst with it? Especially considering you lot act like a couple of five year olds who’ve just had their brooms confiscated.” ~ Yeah! Defend the girl you'll love! *cough*
"She is my business. You should get used to the idea.”~He should. Yet again, Draco and Hermione get married and he'll still pair her with Ron.
He was scratching his head dumbly, looking disturbingly similar to an orangutan.~ LOL!! I bet he did. *smirk*
“Do you have the Dark Mark to match it?” ~ *gasp* Oh, that female dog!
“Don’t insult her like that. You mistook a loyal friend for a fool, and now you have to live with the consequences.” ~ o_O Draco is wise...
“Let us know when you’ve put your head on straight, Granger.” ~ Let us know when you get your head out of your ass, Potter.
That emotion wrapped itself around Draco’s lungs making it hard to breath and forcing his heart to beat much faster than it should have been. ~ L-O-V-E what does it spell? Draco is falling for Hermione !
“Granger, if I weren’t here, there wouldn’t be a problem.” ~ *scoff* If you weren't there then there would be no story, genius.
Draco smirked. ~ *imagines him smirk and sighs dreamily*
She’s beautiful when she smiles. ~ Ah, young love :D
~ I loved the way you made up with the vampire thing! It screamed :WICKED! And I like wicked ;)
The last thing he needed to be thinking about was the fact that Hermione was wearing pink underwear. ~ *glares* NO COMMENT.
Those fucking bastards. ~ Draco! Language!
~ I loved the kiss ;) Surprised much? ~
So much for keeping it professional.
You didn’t really expect that to last, did you?
You are so in over your head.
Shower. Now. ~~~ That was awesome! Very much alike what would go through Draco's head..*smirk* And I do mean both heads.
Great job! And I must say I love Harry Potter, just not in this fic. Keep it up! Though I still am a bit mad at you for the underwear thing...*glares* It was good ;)
Author's Response: First my eyes widened in surprise. I know you said you were literally reviewing the entire chapter, but I still hadn\'t expected that much. Wow, I\'m impressed for a girl who doesn\'t like to type.
The part with devil-Draco holding a pitchfork on Hermione\'s shoulder was actually my beta\'s idea.
\"No, Harry, you\'re not a dark wizard, you\'re a dumb wizard. Big difference.\" \"Let us know when you get your head out of your ass, Potter.\" ROTFL. I seriously cracked up.
I understand and appreciate your stance on what color Hermione\'s underwear should have been, but glaring at me is not going to make me change them *winks*. Pink they are, and pink they shall remain. Maybe, if you\'re really nice to me, I\'ll make them green later.
Thank you for reviewing! It totally made my night. Oh, and Bean\'s figured out how to dance in circles. It\'s the cutest thing ever.
Hello there, csl. I just thought I'd come here for a minute to...oh, I don't know... review...? Yeah. I think that's the evil word. Anyways, I loved the cut-in dialog. It was very Hermione to just go on and on and very Draco for him to keep calm and then snog her socks off so that she would shut up. Again, good job. The "what are you afraid of" was genius, and it made sense. The thing I liked about it and that made it not seem cliche, was the fact that you managed to keep both controversial characters in character throughout the discussion, which is rarely seen. Believe me, I would know. And then you kinda surprised me when Hermione threw herself at Draco, I siriusly thought she had slapped him. The "spitting over the table" thing was funny, and Draco's response even more. You used some of our quotes, I see. Good thinking, bad quotes couldn't come from conversations as intellectual as ours. * cough* I have a good quote for you, and no, I didn't get it from Harry Potter! It's from "Crispin" I've wanted to tell you about it for months now, since I read the book, but my lazy bum forgot. Now, I would criticize the way you said everything about the horcruxes so fast, but I don't think I am in a position to criticize how fast things go. I do hope you don't live up to your name, csl. Otherwise I'll be pretty dead by sundown *creepy music starts* Now, I bid thee goodbye. There is a chocolate swiss roll waiting to have my complete attention. You do know how jealous those get. Maybe not.... *hides* Sauda was awesome, though I still can't properly pronounce her name. The Death Eater meeting was ok, though before you do a more intense one, try to get your hands on one made by Jo, It'll certainly help. I really did like the whole " for Draco" thing. For the fact that is a very sad yet completely wonderful thing for a mother to sacrifice herself for her child. Especially if your child is Draco Malfoy, who is too hot to die. Now, for real, goodbye. Looking forward to the next chapter,
Author's Response: Well, well, well, look what the cat dragged in...*ducks* It\'s a happy Friday present :) Thanks for all of the positive things you said in the first part. For the rest: I thought Hermione slapping Draco here would be a bit counterproductive, and I rather liked how that whole scene played out (and I should, considering how long it took for me to complete it). As for Hermione\'s speedy exposition concerning the Horcruxes: 1. Draco already understood what they were because he\'d been reading through her notes and such for several hours, and he\'s a smart guy. 2. We get into that in much greater detail later on in the story, so I felt that it was unnecessary and cumbersome to include it at this point as well (plus there wasn\'t enough space to include it and Narcissa\'s section in its entirety. Sauda: sah-OO-dah, and I\'m glad you liked her. I\'m rather fond of her myself. Death Eater meeting: You know that I don\'t have any of the books and I have an eight dollar over-due charge on my library card, but I don\'t think it was too bad. It could have been a bit more intense, perhaps, but the focus was more information gathering (and Lucius killing...attempted). And yes, Draco is too hot to die, but I am most definitely not saying one way or the other. That would ruin the suspense. *grins evilly, cowers behind sofa and hopes you don\'t adopt my new nick-name*
Go eat your swiss roll (I confess, I haven\'t had one since I was like...ten?), and I imagine a jealous swiss roll is not a pretty sight. Thanks again for reviewing :) I\'m working most diligently on thirteen (what did you think of the section I sent you? I haven\'t spoken to you since Wednesday...) and I\'ll get it up as soon as I can. Have a good weekend, darling!
Oh my, look what the DOG dragged in! Anyways...my mouth is hanging open in appraisal and surprise at your ending. And it shall stay that way 'till you write something crappy. Which means that It'll stay like that for a VERY long time. I better get some braces! I LOVED the fight. LOVED IT LOVED IT LOVED IT. Wait...did I meantion that I loved it? Anyways, I did. Keep 'em coming, sister! The chapters, I mean. Your violence rocks too, though. Maybe you should write more violence...*hint,hint* Waiting with an ounce of patience for you next chapter, and/or story.
Author's Response: Thank you, darling! I always love getting reviews from you... they\'re so few and far between. But enthusiastic. I can\'t fault you there :D I\'m glad you liked the fight, and the violence; it\'s always easy for me to write it. You know the status on the next chapter, so keep your shirt on ;)
\r\n\r\n~AM *wink wink*
Hello, Ruby. Good job once again! [yeah yeah, I'm reviewing for the first time even though I've been reading forever & talking to you ] I can't wait for the next chapter to be posted! *emphasis on the 'posted' :P* She tumbled into the darkness of Draco's arms...awww. wait, no spoiler! scratch that. Sorry for the childish review but I am very Happy with a certain guy whose name I DIDN'T know *wink*
Author's Response: Eek! You finally reviewed! Who are you and what did you do with the real Wendy?!? Has she taken a holdiay? Be back in the morning?
Ruby: I don't like to type, it's called making sacrifices for deserving friends :P And yes, I am a bit dramatic today. I'm glad I made you laugh, but be careful, your side may start hurting and your throat gets hoarse and you will lose your voice. And then you would break your rib because of the pain in your side, get a virus from the air in your hoarse throat that will instantly leave you coughing because of your ribs poking hard at your lungs and since your voice is lost for laughing so much, then you will not be able to scream for help and die painfully in your own laughter.
P.S- I'm always dangerously nice to you. No comment.
Author's Response: So... that was a touch morbid, don\'t you think?