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Fav characters: Ginny, Tonks, Sirius fred, george and snape when hes not being totaly evil (which isn't very often but he has his moments)
Fav book: Prisoner of Azkaban
Least Fav: Deathly Hallows cause it just well, wasn't as great
awwwww omg that was a spectacular story. I absolutly LOVE sev and lily stories (hence my username) this was so well done.. i love the idea of her patronus being a doe because of snape not because of james. this story was excellently well written and made me happy but sad too because they can never be together. but who sent the package???
The plot was pretty interesting, the only thing that i noticed that sort of bugged me was a few spelling mistakes. for example citizen, not citisin. otherwise it seems good :)
Author's Response: Oh, I forgot all about that! Ach, thank-you. I\'ll have to edit it. I swear, this chapter is the worse one anyways. It does get better.
I completely and entirley loved it 100% this story just made me feel happy reading it :) i really liked it and you got lily's personality down perfect. My favorite part of this story was the title, it is such a great title like wow i really really really just love that title, it is so fittign to the story and so like awesome lol wow i sound ditzy anyways good job it was a superb story
Author's Response: Hey, sorry, wow this is a late response. Thank you very much for reviewing! I'm glad that you liked it :D And you know, I loved this title too. I spend a great deal of time coming up with titles, its so fun! Thanks again.
this was a really good one-shot, props to you. i like how u ended it alot.
awwww! that was so sad...*sniffsniff*.... i really hope that she did do something along those lines for teddy to tell him that hes loved even though shes gone. i don't know if you plan on continuing this story or not but i think you should, like from teddy's perspective or something. i loved it, it was awesome so good job!