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Place: US
Age: 16
Fav characters: Ginny, Tonks, Sirius fred, george and snape when hes not being totaly evil (which isn't very often but he has his moments)
Fav book: Prisoner of Azkaban
Least Fav: Deathly Hallows cause it just well, wasn't as great

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A Fresh Start by Hypatia

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Scorpius Malfoy was brought up in the knowledge that he came from an old pure-blood family. Hogwarts is going to teach him a great deal more. Will he be able to rise above his family’s tainted past, or will history repeat itself?

First place in the 2007 Autumn Challenge’s New Beginnings prompt.

Nominated for Best History/Mystery in the 2008 QSQs!

Canon compliant with all seven books, however, not compliant with all interviews given by JKR.
Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 11/24/07 Title: Chapter 5: Ruffled Feathers

awww! thats so happy that Draco is still proud of Scorpius. its so hard to find any decent Scorpius stroies and now that i have found one i'm counting on you to keep up the good work and update soon please!

Author's Response: Thank you and I\'ll try! :)

Chocolate Button Eyes by Insecurity

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Chris White is a primary school teacher who is bitterly disappointed with the educational system. When ten-year-old Estela joins his class midway through the year, he is faced with his toughest challenge yet. At first he cannot believe what is happening before his very eyes. Then, as he gradually grows to accept the unexplainable, he forms a close friendship with a child who has nobody else in the world to turn to.

A thousand thank yous go to Kumy for her amazingly thorough Beta job! *hugs*

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 11/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

I found this story very intersting. Poor little estela bouncing from foster home to foster home and not knowing what to think of these strange new powers happening to her. I hope that you can find the time to write more chapters! I'm also hoping that Mr. White will adopt her but i guess i will just have to wait and see what happens because its your story!

A Little More Time by Pallas

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Was it possible to save two lives in the past without altering history? Was it possible to give his parents a future twenty years after they had supposedly died? Teddy Lupin thought so...
Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/08/07 Title: Chapter 9: Damage

oo suspense! the scene in the kitchen was really happy but now im all worried about penny. don't leave me wondering for long please!!!! great chapter.

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 6: Protection

i really really really love this story! keep writing because i want to know how tonks and remus will react to living in the future. keep up the good work and don't let me down :)

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/21/07 Title: Chapter 11: Consequences

ooo i like the idea of harry and everyone knowing about remus and tonks so that they can like catch up with whats happened with everyone and have semi-normal lives. alas i fear hard times are ahead for our characters...life is never fair or easy as sad as that fact may be. oh well one can always hope right?

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 01/29/08 Title: Chapter 16: Restraint

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Man i love and hate cliffies! i am dying for the next chapter please update asap i can't handle the wait!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 02/04/08 Title: Chapter 17: Ghosts

oh no! poor andromada and poor tonks! i love how fast you update it makes me super happy :) you rock my sox Pallas

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 13: Rhythms

oh no poor remus! just curius did you actually check some lunar chart to see what the moon would be doing on july 3rd 2018 of did you just put it to chance? either way great chapter. i hope remus gets better soon

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 01/21/08 Title: Chapter 15: The Heart of the Matter

oh no poor teddy! How are they going to get out of this mess? I am super pumped to see harry's reaction to seeing tonks and remus again lol that will be amusing. i love this story i can't wait for more please update ASAP!!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/15/07 Title: Chapter 10: Through the Looking Glass

omg that chapter was intense. your writing is excellent and i am dying to find out whats going to happen next!! please let penny be ok and teddy not get into trouble

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/15/07 Title: Chapter 10: Through the Looking Glass

omg that chapter was intense. your writing is excellent and i am dying to find out whats going to happen next!! please let penny be ok and teddy not get into trouble. keep it coming!

Samhain Night by Celestial Melody

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When children are born blind, their other senses take over. But nothing can heal the void that many of them feel when they realize that they will never be like their peers.

It is the same for Layne McCraery, who, because of her parents' extreme pride, is kept away from children her own age. But when a wander in the woods presents Layne with new, accepting friends, her entire world changes in a way that she never dreamed of.

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/06/07 Title: Chapter 1: Samhain Night

that was a beautiful story
good job it was really touching

Author's Response: Thank you very much, Chloe. I enjoyed writing it. =)


The Very Best Gift of All by Pondering

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It's Lily's birthday and Severus feels that no matter what he gives her, it will never be special enough. The problem? Lily agrees with him.

Written by Pondering of Ravenclaw for November's One-Shot Challenge: Young Love.
Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: The Very Best Gift of All

awwww! that is so cute! I feel like they are a little bit too young to be having crushes but its not a big deal, the story is still super duper adorable

Potter's Pentagon: The Truth (Book Two) by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: This is book two in the "Potter's Pentagon" trilogy. Read "Potter's Pentagon: The Five" first, myesss? Cool.

WARNING: This story contains French people, an internal monologue about a blue orange, adolescent facial hair, good old-fashioned snogging, superstitious truck drivers, a portrait who calls everyone "Mavis," a zoo break-in, some very strange clothes, romantic conflict galore, and Ron Weasley's caffeine addiction. And worst of all, Professor Zabini!

Hogwarts is hosting the Triwizard Tournament, and when one of the members of Potter's Pentagon is selected to represent the school, much excitement ensues. Simultaneously, elections are being held for Minister of Magic, and things are getting busy at the Ministry.

Not to mention the fact that Jordan's made a new Muggle friend without informing her of the itty-bitty fact that he's magical, Haley has found an enchanted diary of dubious origin, Ted's met a werewolf from Beauxbatons, and Emma... well, Emma's not having a good year.

And what exactly is Ivy up to, anyway?

Everyone has secrets. But in the end, the truth will have to come out.

Starring Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character Nominees Ivy Potter, Emma Weasley, Haley Potter, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards!
Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 02/19/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

Sooo as i have no life i am reviewing again on this chapter :) i don't remember which reviewer said it first but the idea that Lee is lily evans is so cool that if thats not who it actually is i totally think u should change your story to make Lee lily lol. oh and i have also come up with a solution to the queue being closed problem. even though Mugglenet is a 10000 times better then fanfiction.net i think you should upload the rest of the story onto there because that sight has no wait time for things to be accepted and i, and probably all the rest of your hard-core fans, am dying to find out what else happens :) :) :) so good plan right?

Author's Response: That\'s okay ,I have no life, either! Now, I would love to upload it to FF.net, but firstly, I absolutely hate the way you have to renew your account every few days, and secondly, I\'d have to have some people find out the ending before others. Downright undemocratic. I mean, I eat lunch with Nevilles_Girl at my school, and even she has not gotten the chance to read ahead!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 02/01/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: In Which Tyrone Does NOT Enjoy Brief Insanity

finnaly! i feel like we all waited for AGES for this chapter to get vaildated. loved it as usual i can't wait for chapter 9 which is already in the queue

Author's Response: Thank you! We actually waited... I think sixteen days. But it seemed like so much longer!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/25/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: In Which Various French People Anger Various English People

poor ivy!!! but that still doesn't explain all the studying before she realized that she liked ted...."faster than you could say ‘sphygmomanometer.’" shmergo, that is the most random word i think i have ever read in any story LOL i actually had that as a vocab word in medical science last year and we were supposed to be able to spell it....well lets just say that didn't happen. I hope you have been having a very merry christmas, i think i am about to explode from the massive amount of food that i just ate. anyways i'm off to go play with my presents :) love your story keep up the good work and don't let globle warming get you down! (that was rather random wasn't it? oh well!)

Author's Response: She\'s been studying for... SUMTHIN\'. I think she realized she liked Ted when she was in fourth year... she just didn\'t say it. But I know what you mean.

I got tickets to LES MIS for Christmas, so I\'m off to go laugh in everyone\'s faces! Ta-ta!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/18/07 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: In Which Emma Enjoys Mild Insanity

awseome stuff! i like the idea of having to chase something through the forbidden forest as a task, very original. also love the HOOLOOVOO bird it made me laugh. you rock my socks Shmergo!!

Author's Response: Thanks! I do love that Forbidden Forest, and I figured it made more sense to use the school\'s natural obstacles than building an obstacle course. Glad to be rocking socks-- I should just do that as a career!

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 02/18/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: In Which We Finally Learn Exactly What's Up

dun dun dun!
loved it as usual i totally called Ivy becoming an animagus though! i can't remember if i ever actually said it in one of my reviews but i totally thought it long before i read this chapter no joke i really did i'm not just saying it. anyways i loved your idea for the third task, why would those two people (sorry i forgot their names) want to make the champions tie? i'm really hoping for some Jordon Georgi action when they get back from hogwarts. i hope the queue is fixed super super quick cause i can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I\'m a tad disappointed that so many people guessed about Ivy. I like to put twists into my stories, but they\'re less fun when everyone guesses them!

You will see why Skitesby and Schiffington rigged the competition later, but I think it won\'t be till like chapter thirteen, which is the final chapter.

You get to see Giorgi next chapter, and she\'s also in chapters eleven and twelve! So that should be something to look forward to.

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In Which The Champions Stood; The Rest Saw Their Better

OMG i love this story! i read through the entire first book yesterday (i blame you for me not finishing my hw) and then i started reading this one without relizing it wasn't finished so i must now tortuously wait for you to update. btw i love the character of Georgi shes so likable. keep writing!!

Author's Response: Hahaha, I blame you for writing these reviews that I\'m responding to instead of doing my homework! I\'m sorry about the tortuous wait... it\'s equally tortuous for me, though, if that\'s any consolation! I like Giorgi, too. ^_^

Reviewer: Sev and Lily Signed
Date: 12/04/07 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: In Which The Champions Stood; The Rest Saw Their Better

hey question! (forgive me if this is a stupid question but i'm relativly new at the MNFF stuff i only joined bc i was in desperate need of something to keep me going after DH) why does it take like YEARS for chapters to get validated?? what are they even checking for? i'm a very impatient person :/ question 2, how in depth do you have the rest of this book planned and the next one, is it like a vague idea or more concrete? Merlin's thong i love your story!!!! :):):)

Author's Response: Hello! It takes a long time for chapters to get validated because the mods are EBIL! No, I jest. Anyway, they have to see if the chapter is good enough to be accepted. I hear they only accept like one third of all submissions.

I\'ve had like thirty rejections before for everything from grammar mistakes to non-canon compliance (for example, saying Ginny has blue eyes) to having a story that\'s just too silly.

I wrote this entire story about a year or two ago, so it\'s all finished, and I\'m working on typing up the third one, which I\'ve also written.

I planned them out incredibly in-depth beforehand; each chapter\'s outline was at least a page long. I planned out all three and wrote the last chapter of the third book before I even started the first one.

I usually don\'t plan my stories-- like Dark Lord\'s Blog just came to me. I have a vague outline of \"Love A Duck.\" But I feel like these stories need to be planned EVEN THOUGH I DESPERATELY HATE IT.