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Fav characters: Ginny, Tonks, Sirius fred, george and snape when hes not being totaly evil (which isn't very often but he has his moments)
Fav book: Prisoner of Azkaban
Least Fav: Deathly Hallows cause it just well, wasn't as great
ooo luvin the story so far! My theory on Millie....Malfoy's daughter? guess i'll just have to read on to find out. btw is Millie pronounced mile-ee or mill-ee?
I love the way you balance their normal day of shopping with James and Lily learning new things about their son. It is really very well done so congrats to you!
hah! i totaly called her being a malfoy! so why was sirius named sirius james not james sirius? i would think james would be a little angry that his grandson only has his name as a middle name not his first name. oh well i can't wait to keep reading so that what i am going to do!
i deffinatly LOVED this first chapter. Ginny is so hard-core. its sad that she was tortured so many times but i can imagine her reacting in just the way you portrayed it. i was really sad when i realized that this story only had one chapter but then i noticed the link to the rest of it on your bio so i am pretty excited and about to go finish reading it. i do agree with what you said about teenagers shouldn't moderate other peoples stories but they do have a sort of point because we don't want to waste our time reading absolutly pointless stories. (though yours is really awesome not pointles at all) anyways i cant read the rest of it!
Escaping the clutches of her loving but stifling parents, Riana travels to London and from there to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. There, Riana is viewed as mysterious, cunning, sly, and—though her parentage is unknown—is chosen for Slytherin House.
The two halves of her life clash, as her anorexia battles with the disdain of fellow Slytherin students for Muggle-born witches and wizards. Follow Riana on her journey through the world of wizardry and her search to find a true home, the identity of her real parents, as well as her inner conflict with anorexia.
I love this story! It is really interesting seeing the aritocratic slytherin side of life rather then the warm and fuzzy gryfindor side. My far-fethched guess on who rhiana is the child of....voldemort and bellatrix? nah jk i mean i would beleive it if that was the case but i don't actually think it is. i honestly have no idea who the true parents are. I really hope you update soon i understand that you are busy but don't leave us hanging here! keep up the good work this story is amazing
Author's Response: Thank you for the review and compliments, Chloe. =) I\'m thrilled that you\'re enjoying the story so far.
I must confess that I, too, am glad to have a chance to look at the Slytherin angle of things. Gryffindor is so ... glass half-full to me, and while that\'s nice ... it\'s not very interesting.
*grins* Bella and Voldie is a good guess, and as they\'re my OTP, it could be a plausible one, but... I\'m not going to say yay or nay definitively yet. *winks*
I will do my best to update, but as you say, life is busy.
Thank you once again. All the best.
hmm Eragon de ja vu here i seem to recall a chapter called angela and the werecat in that book.... well i love the character of Fabian he is exactly what Rhiana needs. awesome work!
Author's Response: Wow, was there really? I admit, I did get the idea of a werecat from Eragon, but I had completely forgotten about Angela. Christopher Paolini\'s admirable for publishing a book at such a young age, but I neither enjoy his writing style nor love his subject matter that much. *shrugs* It does have good points, though.
Alvean, though, was just such a great name. I spend ... hours going through name databases to find the perfect name for my characters, but Alvean\'s was just ... fun. =P
I\'m so glad you like Fabian, though. He\'s one of my personal favourites. I\'d love to know him in RL.
omg i am like sobbing here this story made me cry so much but it was really beautiful. i was listening to "somewhere over the rainbow" while i was reading and when the song ended i just started it over again cause i couldn't read the story without it in the backround cause the song fits so perfectly. That song is so sad but so happy at the same time.
man i am like still crying your story was so wonderful i absolutley loved it (even if i am like bawling lol)
i'm so sorry for your friend denise give her little girl a hug for me ok?
Dermots a jerk but the chapter was good! Merry Christmas Evie and Kevin!
aww poor teddy. i am so happy to see this story updated again :) :) excited for more!
Author's Response: Good to hear!! There is a new chapter in the queue, but there\'s a bit of a blockage, at the moment. :(\r\n\r\n~Evie
yay an update! this story continues to be intersting, i felt like this chapter read alot like a diary entry. can't wait for more!! sorry that things have been going wrong latley for you i hope things improve :)
Author's Response: So do I!! Glad you like it! Thanks for R&R\'ing!! ~Evie
(btw this is the first time i've ever reviewed any fan fic so feel honored) I really really like this story and i can totally picture little teddy and older harry and everything. good job! i also love the nickname teddy bear its so cute. keep up the good work i want to read more for sure.
Author's Response: Well, for your first review, it\'s very good. ;) I am honoured that you should choose mine. :D I hope to see you reviewing more in the future. ~Evie
I sure don't want kevin to die!
I have super missed this story for the past month but i know you have been trying to get chapters validated it is not your fault...except for submiting a previous chapter that was a little silly but you are still awesome! I love teddy so much but what is up with Alfie? update ASAP
Author's Response: Yes, I am rather stupid sometimes, aren\'t I? I can get great exam results, but when it comes to common sense... well, lets just say that I managed to drop my mp3 player in a bucket of water recently. ~Evie
LOVE THIS STORY! I have been waiting for an update for like ever and today i finnaly got my wish :) it was an awesome early thanksgivign present so thank you!! (i know your from the UK but hey i'm american ) i know on JKR's site she says that Tonks was a hufflepuff but i have always found that so odd, i really picture her as more of a ravenclaw. but its good that you stayed true to what jkr says even if its a little strange. keep up the good work and happy thanksgiving!
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you! :D ~Evie
aww! I love severus and lily scenes (hence my username) they are adorable together, if only it sould last!
good job! your time line was right in the fact that it took place in the 5th yr. my only thing to change would be how quickly they learned how to be animagi but besides that its great
This story was really intersting and unique. I never even thought that harry might miss speaking parseltoungue but he probably would have, at least when he first found out. Props to you from capturing Harry's reaction perfectly. thanks for a good read and interesting story :)
Author's Response: Thank you for taking the time to read and review. I always considered parseltongue to be one of those things that , although he never really used it or felt comfortable with, he would miss when he no longer had it. I am very glad you thought I got Harry\'s reaction down perfectly, as that was the hardest bit of the thing to write.
I'm totally hooked! i love the character of scorpius and i really like albus too. Great characterization. please update ASAP
I'm loving this story! (but if i don't ever finish my English paper b/c i was prodcrastinating by reading this i completley blame you :) ) i can totaly picture lil scorpius and i love him. keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks and I hope that the English paper got finished! :)
This story keeps getting better and better. Neville is such an awesome teacher to scorpius. Poor lil scorpius though having to pay for the bad things his father did. I really like the way this stroy portrays the malfoys in a much more positive light then others. Awesome writing and happy holidays!