Penname: allieb [Contact]
Real name: Allison
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I'm a 28 year old stay at home mother of two, ages 1 and 2. I love to write, and I love Harry Potter. Good combination.
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Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
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12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: allieb Signed
Date: 04/26/05 Title: None

I like it. The content is good, and that for me is everything. You do a great job of description. You might want to be careful about the story flow, at times it seems jumpy. Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review allieb, I appreciate it very much. If you feel so motivated, could you provide me with a specific example of the flow issue? It would be useful to me so I know exactly what you mean as opposed to just in general. Thank you so much for the feedback.

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