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Just Right by Sandy Phoenix

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 19 Reviews
Summary: Why is Ginny in the library, alone, on a lovely evening? Why is she agreeing to spend her last Hogsmeade weekend with a pregnant cat? Why is she eating enough chocolate to take care of dementors for miles around? Why did her feet just disappear? Never mind. Whatever, the reason, it is just right.
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just Right

Love the style of writing! Good work.



Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Just Right

Love the style of writing! Good work.



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Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 15: In Her Father's Arms

Good story. I appreciate how Dumbledore's passwords seem to be Weasley products. Well written.



Heaven Sent by tragic_death14

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 28 Reviews
Summary: It's Ron and Hermione's wedding day and both are falling apart. One-Shot
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Day

Aww poor Ron and Hermione. It kinda makes you wonder if either of them will ever get over their insecurities. :) Good story.



Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Day

Aww poor Ron and Hermione. It kinda makes you wonder if either of them will ever get over their insecurities. :) Good story.



Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/16/07 Title: Chapter 1: Wedding Day

Aww poor Ron and Hermione. It kinda makes you wonder if either of them will ever get over their insecurities. :) Good story.



A Match Made by Law by LariLee

Rated: Professors • 50 Reviews
Summary: A slightly twisted, but highly realistic, possibly humorous, and very late, look at the Marriage Law Challenge. Mentions character deaths (but not HG or SS) and has some possible squickiness in passing that results in an "R" Rating. No house-elves were harmed in the writing of this ficlet, who I cannot say the same of Cornelius Fudge, Minister of Magic.
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Match Made by Law

Three cheers for the plot bunny!



What a waste by Glassesfreak206

Rated:19 Reviews
Summary: ONE SHOT - Harry comes home drunk one night. Why was he drinking in the first place? Warning: Harry might be OCC.
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: What a waste

Ohh so sad. I'm not a H/Hr shipper, and you managed to make me want to see them get together, so I have to say well done.



I see you by Glassesfreak206

Rated:22 Reviews
Summary: ONE SHOT - "You're beautiful, Hermione. Why can't you see that? Everyone else can."
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: I see you

I'm not a H/Hr shipper, but I enjoyed your story. :) Well done.



First Name Basis by Vanityfair

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 110 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: Miss Granger and Prof. Snape make the awkward transition to Hermione and Severus...or is that 'Mione and Sevie? Throw in a game of MASH and you have a humorous look at the nature of first names.
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Miss Granger

Good work. It is a very well written story, and I could definitely see that happening, (if not with Hermione, then at least with me.)

I did notice one small error, (I tend to be a grammar nazi, my apologies,) although it seems the story's been up for quite a while, so you might not feel the need to change it, but I thought I'd at least let you know.
"She didnít eat too much; too nervous about what was to follow. "

A semicolon should only separate independent clauses-the 2nd clause here is subordinate. Add a "she was" to the beginning of the 2nd clause, or remove the semicolon, if, as I said, you even want to fix it.

Other than that, good story. Thanks for making me giggle.



The Day Emmeline Vance Died by LariLee

Rated: Professors • 17 Reviews
Summary: Emmeline Vance was murdered. But the most important question was never asked -- why? There's more to this story that was told in the pages of Harry Potter and the Half-Blood Prince.
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Day Emmeline Vance Died

Brilliant story. And, okay, I may be a little dense, (to be honest, I am rather doped up on cold medicine,) but I just re-read the exchange between Dumbledore and Malfoy at the end of HBP and couldn't find what you were referencing. Help! Or I may not be able to sleep! (Okay...the NyQuil will probably make me sleep, but still...)



Epilogues, Part I: Shadows by Grimmrook

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 179 Reviews
Summary: The war is over, and Voldemort is dead, but the aftermath isn't what Harry had intended it to be. Amid feelings he himself cannot explain, he flees to Muggle London. Can he overcome his inner demons and lead something other than the shadow of a life his existence has become?

Actually the third story in the Epilogues story arc. If you have yet to do so, please read Right Here and One Good Day prior to reading this. Upon completion of this story, you can move on to Epilogues Part II.
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 08/03/07 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: Home

I don't usually review fanfics, just because I don't feel like I have anything useful to add, but I felt compelled to review this one. I laughed, I cried, I cried... It's excellent. Fantastic. I can't wait to read the rest of the Epilogue arc. Thanks for filling the HP void since DH came out. :)

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing, I greatly appreciate it. I\'m glad you enjoyed it, and I\'m incredibly honored and pleased you were able to feel an emotional connection with the story; something I always aim for when I sit down to write. As for filling the void since DH came out... heh... I\'ve been writing this arc for a year now, so it was more like filling the void before, and now after. But in truth, and I think this is what makes the difference, this is not me trying to fill any void. This is just me trying to tell good and interesting stories. That\'s what really drives me in writing these stories. Telling good stories. Thank you so much.



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Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2

Any chance you're a fan of Firefly?

Good story...not something I'd normally read but when I saw the name I had to. :) Good work.

Author's Response: LOL. Yes, a fan of Firefly and I also write some Raynefic. If interested, more of my writing can be found at inarrasnape.livejournal.com - some Potter, some Firefly, some whatever strikes my fancy.



Christmas Eve with the Snapes by Hermione_Rocks

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 9 Reviews
Summary: Eileen Snape decorates the Christmas tree, and Tobias Snape looks on.


Substance abuse is minor, but just in case...


This was originally written for the Winter Challenge prompt number five, Oh Christmas Tree, and it won first place!
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Christmas Eve with the Snapes

Poor Severus, he hasn't got a chance.

Love Tobias' Christmas carols, though!

Author's Response: Yes, Sevy does have it hard. Thanks for reviewing, and I\'m glad you liked Tobias\' own take on the carols. ;)



A First Kiss by Harry_Ginny_Love

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 66 Reviews
Summary: First Kiss fanfics usually dissapoint me. They portray Ron as a cocky little Romeo and Hermione as a I-just-got-back-from-holiday-and-now-I-am-so-hot! girl. So I wrote an alternative. The way I think a Ron/Hermione first kiss fanfic should be written.



*One-shot*



Please read and review...all reviews will be responded to!!!!
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Good work. I, too, am annoyed by the fics that have Hr & R all instantly grope-y and confident and secure in there attraction to each other. Loved it when Ron tripped on the rug, and then how his reaction was to be mortified (like JKR would have made him) instead of all suave about it. And I thought it was great how they bumped noses-very realistic for awkward first kisses between two very awkward (but adorable) characters!

Author's Response: Thanks!! Wow, it has been a long time since I have answered reviews!! Sorry bout that! But thank you for the review!! I try to keep them in character as much as possible!



If the Shoe Fits by Ginny_W

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 43 Reviews
Summary: Sometimes life is its own fairy tale.
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue: So This is Love

Okay, so I'm not a huge fan of non-canon ships, and usually only read Hermione/Snape when I need a good laugh (as it really is a ridiculous concept, when you think about it in canon,) however, this story was excellent! It was completely plausible as to how they would ever end up together, and has endeared me a bit towards HG/SS. Bravo!



Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 8: Epilogue: So This is Love

Okay, so I'm not a huge fan of non-canon ships, and usually only read Hermione/Snape when I need a good laugh (as it really is a ridiculous concept, when you think about it in canon,) however, this story was excellent! It was completely plausible as to how they would ever end up together, and has endeared me a bit towards HG/SS. Bravo!



The End by x_GinnyPotter_x

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 38 Reviews
Summary: The end of Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows - from Ginny's POV

Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/26/07 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Good work. Even though I knew how the story ends (obviously) I still had goosebumps at times, worrying with Ginny about Harry's fate. The mark of excellent writing: empathizing with characters. :)



The Effect of Gamma Rays on Two Terrifically Trapped Gryffindors. by Fenixaze

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 87 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: From the "Stuck where for the weekend?" Challenge on Portkey.org ... Our two favorite Gryffies are cleaning up after a hard day of Herbology when click! the door shuts behind them. And locks. What do they do until someone finds them?
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 11/15/07 Title: Chapter 4: Part Four: Monsoon Season

Adorable! And I'm not even a H/Hr shipper. Good work.

Author's Response: Thank You for your review!



A Dream Come True by SunDevil05

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 49 Reviews
Summary: One of Harry's biggest dreams is coming true. A Post DH one shot.
Reviewer: annaraine Signed
Date: 01/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Dream Come True

Aww. Warm fuzzies. Love it!