Right... I really don't know what to say here. I have a bit of an obsession with the Harry Potter series. No, that is an understatement. I practically live and breathe Harry Potter. It is becoming a major issue. My friends now even know that I have the hots for a fictional character. I need HP rehab. A twelve step program...something!
This story is pretty good. Be careful of gramatical errors and redundancies though. I like the idea of a Lucius/Narcissa fic.
Excellent! Glad to read one where Fred is still alive. Please write more. Even if you think you are done.
Right... I'm guessing IT is sex. But I know I'm definately way wrong, because in the intro you said it would be a suprise. I like the whole 'put yourself in this situation' thing. It rocks. Except for the broccoli.
Right... stilll feels like its going to be sex. But still...all that involvement from friends/enemies. Very creepy. Yet so realistic sounding.
Oh my gosh. I was waiting for it to be something insane like that! Excellent writing! I swear! That was so freaking entertaining!
Hmm...Angelina sounds a little mushy. So does Fred. Try a little less OCC. Good other than that though.
Hmm... This is really quite good. I hope you are busy writing more.
However, Ginny isn't really that small. Or squeaky, I believe.
Summary: *ONE-SHOT* After carefully observing (ahem) a row between Ron and Hermione, Fred and George concoct an evil plan...and a pie. A sniff of Harry/Ginny and, of course, the odor of pie.
Hmm...funny overall, but Mrs. Weasly's behavior was just too far OC for my liking.
Summary: Now that Lavender has divorced Ron, he has turned up on the doorstep of his best friend and his sister. Ron watches them and realizes that he wants love also, and longs for the arms of the girl that he left years before. Will he ever see her again? Will she accept him?
This dialogue sounds extremely American. Good story though.
Summary: Malfoy finds a piece of parchment that belongs to Hermione and wants to talk with her. After this incident, Hermione starts acting weird. Harry and Ron want to know what's going on..
This was a cute story! I did notice a few grammatical errors though...
Summary: Pigwidgeon is very sad. It seems that Ron hates him. Can Hedwig help? PigwidgeonxHedwig; only fic of its kind!
Oh my goodness. This was so funny! Yet so heartwarming. More. Soon. Please!
Author's Response: Thanks! Owls are always heartwarming. Hedwig is to die for. *blows kisses at all snowy owls*
Summary: Seven years after the Second Wizard War, a mother tells her daughter the story of the man she loves, who disappeared after the war ended to save his and his lover’s life. The Wizarding World has settled down again, peace returning to them after the defeat of Lord Voldemort. Written in first person, present tense, from the point of view of a seven year old girl.
OH MY FREAKIN' GOSH! That story was so totally amazing! I used to think I hated fan-fics but your fic converted me! You have such great talent, and I really am dying to know what comes next! Please write more!
Summary: Tom believes he can seductively coax secrets from Dumbledore's most trusted student...
Hmm.. I always thought of MInerva a lot older than Tom...but I guess not. Good story with believable details.
Summary: Draco wanted to get away. He needed to get away from all the things that reminded him everyday of the mistakes he had made and the one he had lost. He found the perfect spot too, a small town in Wyoming, USA, a place called Nowhere. A perfect name as far as he was concerned. Magic, fate has a way of finding you no matter where you go though.
Oh my goodness! This story is so engrossing, I've been reading it for like three hours straight! You are such a talented writer! Please, Please, write the next chapter! I need to know what happens!
Author's Response: Three hours straight...hmm, thanks so much, since I do consider that a compliment. The next nine chapters are written and waiting. Have a great day!
Summary: One-shot, HBP missing moment Lavender seems like the girl that has everything. She's pretty and attracts boys like a magnet, but deep inside, she has the same insecurites, just like all other girls. Deep inside, she wants to find the boy that will sweep her off her feet. Just when she thought she found the one, it all turned out to be a hoax. Look into the world of Lavender's heartbreak as she reflects on her relationship with Ron.
Right. It didn't make me hate her or feel sorry for her. It makes her seem like any normal, concieted, airhead, but not someone worthy of love or loathing.
Summary: A short story set in the Marauder era. The boys prank Lily and she is not the least bit amused. A glimpse into a day at Hogwarts, Marauder style.
Oh my gosh! This fic is freakin' hilarious! I love, love, love it! You did a great job on Sirius, James, and Lupin, they were just as I pictured them to be.
Summary: Ginny wakes up on a day like many others... only to find three unexpected visitors on her drive. The heros have finally returned... Voldermort is defeated... and Ginny and Harry must now try and recover what they lost some where along the way.
My first fan fic please R&R ! !
Yeah, that was really good. Another chapter/sequel would be nice too. You are a really good writer. May I offer one tiny piece of advice? Maybe have Harry say 'Merlin" a bit less often. Hope I don't sound rude.
Summary: Neville Lonbottom struggles to finish his homework, but that is difficult. And it does not become any easier when Ron and Hermione arrive, bickering...
Aww. That fic was hilarious and touching at the same time! Amazing job!
Summary: A one-shot about a future Christmas between Harry and Ginny. Pure fluff.
Oh, how cute. This was very heartwarming.
Summary: Katie Bell finally musters enough courage to ask a certain Quidditch Captain a question. The result? Definitely not what she expected!
Katie's POV. KB/OW fluff. Sigh...
Huh? I don't get the ending. Did Oliver snog her or not? Good story, I love anything with Oliver in it, but confusing at the end.