Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 02/24/05 15:17
Chapter: The Serpents' Den

So well written! A completely original idea! And I love stories where a charcter is sorted into Slytherin and we get to see how they w1ork! Well done! I cant wait to read more

Author's Response: Thanks! I like Slytherin stories too! (obviously) I wish JKR would show us more of the other houses. So much is just from Harry's viewpoint that a lot has to be left out. But of course the books would be about a thousand pages longer each!

Reviewer: nerd_from_down_under
Date: 02/18/05 23:08
Chapter: The Serpents' Den

got the chapter plz get the nxt 1 up soon ur story really takes a lot of twists bye!!!

Reviewer: Hermione2723
Date: 02/17/05 15:06
Chapter: The Serpents' Den

Nice chapter! I'm sure the next will be just as good!

Reviewer: VickNick
Date: 02/14/05 16:20
Chapter: The Canadian Sixth Year

HI this is hermioneclone12!!! Well, a few things are bothering me (sorry!) First of all, does the portrait Lily know how awful Snape is to his students other than tohse in Slytherins? If she does, and she doesn't see him even just a little bit differently, >:( grrr on her. lol. Second, if I was reincarnated from a portrait and knew that I had a kid, even if it was with someone I despised at the time, I'd still be just a bit more loving and everything toward him/her...idk...third, why is Lily acting so calmy about being put in Slytherin? Wouldn't she want to be put with peopole she knew fairly well, instead of all complete strangers? There's a couple of other things, but I forgot them now that I'm not reading...despite these things that are bothering me, great story...oh wait, what's gonna happen when Lily sees how badly Snape does treats his students? Will she talk to him? You're probably not going to tell me, but hey, it's worth a try...oh, wait again! (lol) Doesn't Lily feel even a little affection towards Harry, since he is her real (by real, I mean the real Lily, not one that was painted and brought to life from the painting) future self's son...it kinda bugs me, lol...sry! I'm being so rude right now...sry! I give you a ten!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. Sorry I've been so long responding, but I was working on the illustrated version. Anyway, I hope the rest of the story gradually answers some your questions. I tried to imagine what it would be like suddenly meeting a teenaged version of myself. When I was 16, I wasn't interested in having children, so how would the teenaged version feel about my daughter? I don't think she'd bond right away. That's why I try to build a gradual relationship between Harry and Lily. Besides, the story also raises the question ultimately about whether the being raised from the pictures is exactly the same as the original Lily Evans or not. Copies are never quite the same as originals. No, I'm not annoyed. A long review like that means that you're actually thinking about the story, which is good!1

Reviewer: HarrysAunt
Date: 02/14/05 8:46
Chapter: The Canadian Sixth Year

What a shocker!! Perhaps the hat had a reason for sorting Lily to Slytherin. She might be able to keep Malfoy from harassing the Gryffindors. Please update soon!

Reviewer: Carolinaluna13
Date: 02/13/05 17:34
Chapter: The Canadian Sixth Year

shocker. but why slytherin? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY? WHY?

Author's Response: The Hat had its reasons. I hope you'll see why in the course of the story. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Hermione2723
Date: 02/13/05 14:44
Chapter: The Canadian Sixth Year

Great chapter! Lily can't be in Slytherin! NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO NO

Reviewer: nicholsone
Date: 02/08/05 9:28
Chapter: The Reading Room

I really like it! You're a seriously good writer. More please!!

Author's Response: Thanks! That's a very kind thing to say. Yes, you shall have more. The story is complete and I will get it all posted.

Reviewer: tinabell
Date: 02/08/05 8:48
Chapter: The Headmaster's Office

Excellent Chapter - can't wait for Harry's reaction!

Author's Response: Hope you liked it! Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: nerd_from_down_under
Date: 02/08/05 3:06
Chapter: The Headmaster's Office

Eewwwwwww!!! Lily and Snape gross. In chapter 5 the Aboriginal bullroarer whats that do u mean digerydoo?anyway i luvs ya story can't wait 4 da nxt chapter!!!! flies!!!!!

Author's Response: No, a bullroarer is a weight on a cord that is whirled around and around and creates a really strange deep humming sound. Thanks for your review.

Reviewer: mala
Date: 02/06/05 20:59
Chapter: The Feather of Ma'at

That was absolutely fabulous. This may become one of my favorite fics of all time. It's intelligent, detailed, and in all other ways great. I got some serious shivers that last chapter--and I love that you didn't just make up a load of hooey, but actually made a realistic situation, and related it to the real world, rather than playing pretend. If this ever happened in canon, I would hope it happened like that.

Author's Response: Thank you for your reviews. Sorry I've been so long in responding to everyone, but I was trying to finish the illustrated version. I hope you continue to enjoy the rest of the story. I worked hard on it!

Reviewer: mala
Date: 02/06/05 20:41
Chapter: The Cunning Plan

Wow...you've got to be a really intelligent person to write something like that. I love the way that you made it really realistic sounding. I would have muddled the whole thing. Although I think the whole idea of Lily actually coming out of the portrait is rather complicated, your way of executing it is brilliant.

Reviewer: BenjiSim
Date: 02/05/05 14:01
Chapter: The Headmaster's Office

Ooh, I can't wait to see Harry's reaction!

Author's Response: Hope you liked it. Imagine meeting your own parents when they were teenagers! I'm not sure it would work out for everybody.

Reviewer: HarrysAunt
Date: 02/05/05 9:00
Chapter: The Headmaster's Office

This is getting better and better! Please update soon!

Reviewer: Hermione2723
Date: 02/05/05 7:32
Chapter: The Headmaster's Office

That was a great chapter! Lily is easily my favorite character, even though I may not fully agree on her liking SNape even as a friend. Oh well. Again excellent chapter! UPDATE SOON

Reviewer: Miss Marauder
Date: 02/02/05 17:12
Chapter: The Feather of Ma'at

Wait how do you have a copy of the book of the dead? I thought that there was only one and I'm not even sure it was found...I'm very confused because I'm very into that stuff and I'm just confused. Do you mind emailing me and telling me about it? miss_marauder@mugglenet.com

Reviewer: Miss Marauder
Date: 02/02/05 16:49
Chapter: The Girl Who Died

Dear God, you have a talent for writting. A perfect 10 I say. Only the fact that bothers me is that of course we don't know much about Lily so I can't say she's OOC and I don't this she is, its just that, grr, this makes me mad, the way we know nothing about Lily. Hmm, I think you put a great voice into Lily and Hermione is great too. Can't really think of much to say, so I suppose I'll read the other chapters.

Reviewer: HarrysAunt
Date: 02/01/05 12:30
Chapter: The Cunning Plan

I can't wait to see what else you write! This story is really great. I'm sure Hermione will come up with a way to have Harry help out.

Reviewer: HarrysAunt
Date: 02/01/05 11:30
Chapter: The Relevant Issue

This is sooo good! I like the references to Jane Austen (in the book "Muggles and Magic", she was JKR's favorite author), Tolkien, Lovecraft, etc. Please continue!

Reviewer: Hermione2723
Date: 01/31/05 17:44
Chapter: The Feather of Ma'at

THat was great! I was wondering what would happen! But now I need more UPDATE SOON

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