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Name: Little Miss Muggle (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 18:23 · For: Sirius Marauding
I love this chapter!! It is so good!


Name: Little Miss Muggle (Signed) · Date: 07/25/07 23:47 · For: Freedom
this is a good fic..i like it... sometimes it seems like they are a little OOC... we don't know what james was like i suppose, but especially sirius. and the incantation for changing animals to goblets is "Vera Verto"


Name: mrsJP4ever (Signed) · Date: 07/19/07 20:00 · For: Head Boy, Head Girl
I love it!!! love the dream!!! it is so great. this is my seconde time reading this story, it is the one that got me hooked on Lily and James...now im obsessed.


Name: georgiegirl333 (Signed) · Date: 06/26/07 22:20 · For: Now It's Forever
I LOVED IT!! it was absolutely amazing!! i wouldn't do anything else until i finished your story!! I loved it so much! Your writing is almost identical to JKR!! it was filled with action packed moments with the love of james and lily!! i loved it!! i encourage you to keep writing and hopefully i will read some of your other stuff....but ya i loved both of them!! great work!


Name: Noel Weasley (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 19:04 · For: Obscurité

Sirius threw his book onto the floor and stretched out on the couch. “Azkaban could never contain me, Moony,” he laughed. “I’m invincible!”

I like this quote, or thing you put in. Do i sense foreshadowing?

"NO! Lily and I haven’t done our questions since...” James jumped up and ran over to the girls’ dormitories. Remus opened his mouth to tell him that he couldn’t get into them, but Sirius quickly covered his mouth.

“Wait,” Sirius said evilly. “I want to hear him fall…”

Sure enough, a loud rolling sound followed Sirius’s statement, and this was followed by a loud curse. I like this part too. VERY FUNNY!
i would do that to Jamesy's too. What Sirius did, not the stairs.


Name: Noel Weasley (Signed) · Date: 04/22/07 17:18 · For: A Place to Bond
WHEW! That was A close one! i was wondering why our dear Remmy here was saying things that would happen from a horror movie and that then, it would happen. but hey! You could be a great horror movie director/writer!


Name: Shaya (Signed) · Date: 03/15/07 22:15 · For: Freedom
I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Don't which chapter my favorite their all good


Name: black pirate (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 16:51 · For: A Quick Recovery
This is my favorite chapter. I love your story. It's just so real.


Name: black pirate (Signed) · Date: 03/10/07 16:50 · For: A Quick Recovery
This is my favorite chapter. I love your story. It's just so real.


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 5:58 · For: The Marionnettiste Revealed
YES! They are OK!!!!


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 5:53 · For: Intruders on Sacred Ground
oh no!!! i hope moony and the others are ok!


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 5:48 · For: A Bit of Shakespeare
OH NO!!! EVIL BETHANY! even though she's under the Imperius, i still DISLiKE EHR!!!


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 5:41 · For: Obscurité
LOL!!! POOR JAMES!


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 5:36 · For: Duel of the Mates
o wow. i would not like to be lily or peter in the james/beth situation.


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 5:31 · For: Nastily Exhausting Wizarding Tests
ARGH! Bethany is SOOO ANNOYING!


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/19/07 5:25 · For: Remus's Offer
solving the problem w/ Snape?! wadda wadda??!! i'm confused..maybe...it was when snape became a double agent. i really hope he is good! :)


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/18/07 9:23 · For: A Quick Recovery
WOW! talk about a Quick recovery or what?! no wonder the chapter title is that! :P


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/18/07 9:13 · For: Sirius Marauding
yess...WHO?! i can't wait to find out...i really hope it's not pettigrew. argh that horrible traitor..


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/18/07 9:13 · For: Sirius Marauding
yess...WHO?! i can't wait to find out...i really hope it's not pettigrew. argh that horrible traitor..


Name: Pirate Fanatic (Signed) · Date: 01/18/07 8:53 · For: A Fond Farewell
THAT EVIL BETHANY!! ARGHHHHHH!!!!!


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