Reviews For Veiled Revelations
Reviewer: Little Miss Muggle
Date: 07/26/07 18:23
Chapter: Sirius Marauding

I love this chapter!! It is so good!

Reviewer: Little Miss Muggle
Date: 07/25/07 23:47
Chapter: Freedom

this is a good fic..i like it... sometimes it seems like they are a little OOC... we don't know what james was like i suppose, but especially sirius. and the incantation for changing animals to goblets is "Vera Verto"

Reviewer: mrsJP4ever
Date: 07/19/07 20:00
Chapter: Head Boy, Head Girl

I love it!!! love the dream!!! it is so great. this is my seconde time reading this story, it is the one that got me hooked on Lily and James...now im obsessed.

Reviewer: georgiegirl333
Date: 06/26/07 22:20
Chapter: Now It's Forever

I LOVED IT!! it was absolutely amazing!! i wouldn't do anything else until i finished your story!! I loved it so much! Your writing is almost identical to JKR!! it was filled with action packed moments with the love of james and lily!! i loved it!! i encourage you to keep writing and hopefully i will read some of your other stuff....but ya i loved both of them!! great work!

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 04/22/07 19:04
Chapter: Obscurité


Sirius threw his book onto the floor and stretched out on the couch. “Azkaban could never contain me, Moony,” he laughed. “I’m invincible!”

I like this quote, or thing you put in. Do i sense foreshadowing?

"NO! Lily and I haven’t done our questions since...” James jumped up and ran over to the girls’ dormitories. Remus opened his mouth to tell him that he couldn’t get into them, but Sirius quickly covered his mouth.

“Wait,” Sirius said evilly. “I want to hear him fall…”

Sure enough, a loud rolling sound followed Sirius’s statement, and this was followed by a loud curse. I like this part too. VERY FUNNY!
i would do that to Jamesy's too. What Sirius did, not the stairs.

Reviewer: Noel Weasley
Date: 04/22/07 17:18
Chapter: A Place to Bond

WHEW! That was A close one! i was wondering why our dear Remmy here was saying things that would happen from a horror movie and that then, it would happen. but hey! You could be a great horror movie director/writer!

Reviewer: Shaya
Date: 03/15/07 22:15
Chapter: Freedom

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I Don't which chapter my favorite their all good

Reviewer: black pirate
Date: 03/10/07 16:51
Chapter: A Quick Recovery

This is my favorite chapter. I love your story. It's just so real.

Reviewer: black pirate
Date: 03/10/07 16:50
Chapter: A Quick Recovery

This is my favorite chapter. I love your story. It's just so real.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/19/07 5:58
Chapter: The Marionnettiste Revealed

YES! They are OK!!!!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/19/07 5:53
Chapter: Intruders on Sacred Ground

oh no!!! i hope moony and the others are ok!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/19/07 5:48
Chapter: A Bit of Shakespeare

OH NO!!! EVIL BETHANY! even though she's under the Imperius, i still DISLiKE EHR!!!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/19/07 5:41
Chapter: Obscurité

LOL!!! POOR JAMES!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/19/07 5:36
Chapter: Duel of the Mates

o wow. i would not like to be lily or peter in the james/beth situation.

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/19/07 5:31
Chapter: Nastily Exhausting Wizarding Tests

ARGH! Bethany is SOOO ANNOYING!

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/19/07 5:25
Chapter: Remus's Offer

solving the problem w/ Snape?! wadda wadda??!! i'm confused..maybe...it was when snape became a double agent. i really hope he is good! :)

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/18/07 9:23
Chapter: A Quick Recovery

WOW! talk about a Quick recovery or what?! no wonder the chapter title is that! :P

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/18/07 9:13
Chapter: Sirius Marauding

yess...WHO?! i can't wait to find out...i really hope it's not pettigrew. argh that horrible traitor..

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/18/07 9:13
Chapter: Sirius Marauding

yess...WHO?! i can't wait to find out...i really hope it's not pettigrew. argh that horrible traitor..

Reviewer: Pirate Fanatic
Date: 01/18/07 8:53
Chapter: A Fond Farewell

THAT EVIL BETHANY!! ARGHHHHHH!!!!!

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