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Name: Cherry Bomb (Signed) · Date: 01/19/08 23:16 · For: Now It's Forever
Terrific is a word that comes to mind when I read this. One of the best tellings of the Marauders Era i have read.
I love your point of view and especially how you handled james/lily.
Awesome awesome awesome


Name: Charisma_tn (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 15:05 · For: Now It's Forever
Great story. It was wonderful. I felt like the characterizations were spot on, there was lots of action, and the romance part was subtle but still present. My only critique is I would love to see Lily be a great fighter. She rocks at charms, and I loved that you gave her her own fight scene. I'd love to see more! Great job.


Name: Charisma_tn (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 1:21 · For: A Place to Bond
Oh my God. That was the creepiest chapter. I was so confused, but intrigued. I kept thinking, "Time-turner? Is he going to go back and save everyone?" I never caught on it was a dream... there was maybe a hint at the very end. Wow. Powerful.


Name: Charisma_tn (Signed) · Date: 09/11/07 1:00 · For: Of Stags and Lions
I'm really enjoying this, and I guess I never thought about it, but I guess James' patronus wouldn't necessarily be a stag.


Name: JamesNLilyLover (Signed) · Date: 09/09/07 20:54 · For: Now It's Forever
That was an AMAZING story.


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 8:02 · For: A Place to Bond
i'm soo excited for the next chapter!


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/13/07 7:48 · For: Always
There are no words in any language to discribe how awesome this story is!


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 11:32 · For: Of Stags and Lions
i am in love with erikthephantom! you're the best author here on fanfiction!


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/12/07 11:11 · For: Freedom
awesome chapter!


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 18:17 · For: A Battle of Wills
Has Sirius ever been serious in his life? lol


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 17:56 · For: War Counsels
Excelent!


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 17:42 · For: The Cloak Strikes Back
wow! That is all that needs to be said.


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 16:28 · For: Snape's Offer
Oooh, a little mystery! How does Meliflua know Sirius? Can't wait for the next chapter!


Name: dobyfredtonksremus (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 15:59 · For: Head Boy, Head Girl
so far, this seems like a very well written story!


Name: theNEWgoldentrio (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 9:34 · For: A Bit of Shakespeare
you know that elizebeth the first was a virgin in name only in fact she was a notorious whore she slept with her step Dad -catherine parr's husband when she was 14

and a well known affair when she was new come to the trone was with her master of the horse Robert Dudley

Scarhead

Author's Response: Actually, I'm getting my masters degree in British History, albeit maritime, so I think it's pretty possible that I knew that, thanks. As it is, being that she is known as the "Virgin Queen" is a point of comedy for my characters. They don't pretend to be absolutely serious.


Name: theNEWgoldentrio (Signed) · Date: 08/10/07 9:34 · For: A Bit of Shakespeare
you know that elizebeth the first was a virgin in name only in fact she was a notorious whore she slept with her step Dad -catherine parr's husband when she was 14

and a well known affair when she was new come to the trone was with her master of the horse Robert Dudley

Scarhead


Name: Little Miss Muggle (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 21:02 · For: Lions for the Cup
Aw this was an amazing chapter.
I love quidditch.
I dunno if you did this on purpose or not, but James was a chaser, not a seeker.


Name: Little Miss Muggle (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 18:24 · For: Sirius Marauding
I love this chapter!! It is so good!


Name: Little Miss Muggle (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 18:24 · For: Sirius Marauding
I love this chapter!! It is so good!


Name: Little Miss Muggle (Signed) · Date: 07/26/07 18:23 · For: Sirius Marauding
I love this chapter!! It is so good!


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