Reviews For Veiled Revelations
Reviewer: Cherry Bomb
Date: 01/19/08 23:16
Chapter: Now It's Forever

Terrific is a word that comes to mind when I read this. One of the best tellings of the Marauders Era i have read.
I love your point of view and especially how you handled james/lily.
Awesome awesome awesome

Reviewer: Charisma_tn
Date: 09/11/07 15:05
Chapter: Now It's Forever

Great story. It was wonderful. I felt like the characterizations were spot on, there was lots of action, and the romance part was subtle but still present. My only critique is I would love to see Lily be a great fighter. She rocks at charms, and I loved that you gave her her own fight scene. I'd love to see more! Great job.

Reviewer: Charisma_tn
Date: 09/11/07 1:21
Chapter: A Place to Bond

Oh my God. That was the creepiest chapter. I was so confused, but intrigued. I kept thinking, "Time-turner? Is he going to go back and save everyone?" I never caught on it was a dream... there was maybe a hint at the very end. Wow. Powerful.

Reviewer: Charisma_tn
Date: 09/11/07 1:00
Chapter: Of Stags and Lions

I'm really enjoying this, and I guess I never thought about it, but I guess James' patronus wouldn't necessarily be a stag.

Reviewer: JamesNLilyLover
Date: 09/09/07 20:54
Chapter: Now It's Forever

That was an AMAZING story.

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/13/07 8:02
Chapter: A Place to Bond

i'm soo excited for the next chapter!

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/13/07 7:48
Chapter: Always

There are no words in any language to discribe how awesome this story is!

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/12/07 11:32
Chapter: Of Stags and Lions

i am in love with erikthephantom! you're the best author here on fanfiction!

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/12/07 11:11
Chapter: Freedom

awesome chapter!

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/10/07 18:17
Chapter: A Battle of Wills

Has Sirius ever been serious in his life? lol

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/10/07 17:56
Chapter: War Counsels

Excelent!

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/10/07 17:42
Chapter: The Cloak Strikes Back

wow! That is all that needs to be said.

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/10/07 16:28
Chapter: Snape's Offer

Oooh, a little mystery! How does Meliflua know Sirius? Can't wait for the next chapter!

Reviewer: dobyfredtonksremus
Date: 08/10/07 15:59
Chapter: Head Boy, Head Girl

so far, this seems like a very well written story!

Reviewer: theNEWgoldentrio
Date: 08/10/07 9:34
Chapter: A Bit of Shakespeare

you know that elizebeth the first was a virgin in name only in fact she was a notorious whore she slept with her step Dad -catherine parr's husband when she was 14

and a well known affair when she was new come to the trone was with her master of the horse Robert Dudley

Scarhead

Author's Response: Actually, I'm getting my masters degree in British History, albeit maritime, so I think it's pretty possible that I knew that, thanks. As it is, being that she is known as the "Virgin Queen" is a point of comedy for my characters. They don't pretend to be absolutely serious.

Reviewer: theNEWgoldentrio
Date: 08/10/07 9:34
Chapter: A Bit of Shakespeare

you know that elizebeth the first was a virgin in name only in fact she was a notorious whore she slept with her step Dad -catherine parr's husband when she was 14

and a well known affair when she was new come to the trone was with her master of the horse Robert Dudley

Scarhead

Reviewer: Little Miss Muggle
Date: 07/26/07 21:02
Chapter: Lions for the Cup

Aw this was an amazing chapter.
I love quidditch.
I dunno if you did this on purpose or not, but James was a chaser, not a seeker.

Reviewer: Little Miss Muggle
Date: 07/26/07 18:24
Chapter: Sirius Marauding

I love this chapter!! It is so good!

Reviewer: Little Miss Muggle
Date: 07/26/07 18:24
Chapter: Sirius Marauding

I love this chapter!! It is so good!

Reviewer: Little Miss Muggle
Date: 07/26/07 18:23
Chapter: Sirius Marauding

I love this chapter!! It is so good!

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