Reviews For Veiled Revelations
Reviewer: JenWiz
Date: 12/21/04 14:31
Chapter: Now It's Forever

no!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! it's all over???????? i loved the story!!!!!!!!!! will u make another one soon? i promise i'll (try) be the first reviewer *flutters eyelashes* luved the story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: HA! oh well, between the spanish i've been hearing and the eyelashes being fluttered how can i resist?! we'll see when it comes out. i have to fix it chronologically now, and thats no fun.

Reviewer: aniki
Date: 12/21/04 0:32
Chapter: Now It's Forever

you're using my quote?!?! in your story?!?! I FEEL SO SPECIAL!!!! WHEEEEEE!! I THINK IT'S TIME FOR ANOTHER JIG, MY FRIEND! *jigs*

Author's Response: aniki! of course id use your quote! i mena, siriusly, you inspired half of the story anyways!!!

Reviewer: SombraBrillante
Date: 12/20/04 20:40
Chapter: Now It's Forever

Wow, this is excellent!! Please write more! I come here every single day checking for another chapter!!!

Author's Response: aww!! thank you!!! i hope you can find something else while im writing story #2 coz i'd hate for you to keep checking and be disappointed :( thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: harry potter is my life
Date: 12/20/04 19:26
Chapter: Now It's Forever

i swear you are as good as mrs jk herself!! i just keep re-reading it over and over again! its just too good! btw is anyone else SOOOO EXCITED about jk's hp&thbp being finished?!?!?! cant wait along with your sequel!! : D

Author's Response: YES I AM SO EXCITED!!! I ALMOST DIED WHEN I WALKED INTO A BOOKSTORE AND SAW A SIGN FOR IT!! (yes i of course preordered it on the spot!)

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 12/20/04 15:10
Chapter: A Place to Bond

what i love about this story is that it is a lily and james story, but its not completly romance. keep up the great work!

Author's Response: yay!! thank you! i hope you like the next one then, coz its got a fair bit of lily and james. yay! (but not too much, of course)

Reviewer: angelicdarkness
Date: 12/20/04 10:38
Chapter: Now It's Forever

*sob* I loved it so much! I really (x 1000000) loved it and I'm guessing everybody else did too lol. Please hurry up with the sequel, please!! I'm gonna cry even more when I read the next one because that's when they ... dare I say it ... die! *sob*

Author's Response: oh yes the next one is going to be tragic!!! i actually have the first chapter and prologue tentatively done, but im going to write more so i can post them all quicker, plus it took me 19 chapters of this one to come up with a title, therefore it may take me a while.

Reviewer: SilverShadow
Date: 12/19/04 16:39
Chapter: Now It's Forever

Did Sirius put you up to making another cliff hanger?

Author's Response: Sirius gasped. "Why I have no idea what you're talking about...." Remus sighed. "The innocent, pouty face just does not work on him."

Reviewer: spiderslikeme
Date: 12/19/04 16:31
Chapter: Now It's Forever

why does everybody have to look on the bad side!! i mean, remus actually made a sirius joke. "I did? Oh no!! Prongs was right. Dumbledore is going senile!!" gasped Remus!! I mean this is like my Year 7 graduation on thursday. AAAAGGGHH! pleaz tell me when the sequel (that word should not be allowed...) i mean part 2 is coming!

Author's Response: ohhhh wow thursday is soon! have fun! and seriously (sirius: *cough*) remus did make a sirius joke. it was the highlight of the entire chapter!! and yeah, the word "sequel" is beginning to get to me, but oh well. ;)

Reviewer: Kerian
Date: 12/19/04 14:35
Chapter: Now It's Forever

Awww! I almost cried reading the last chapter. I liked the way there were flash backs, but still enough present time story to keep it going. I almost felt like I was leaving Hogwarts with them! It was great writing and I look forward to reading that sequel of their later years!

Author's Response: thank you! i had a blast writing the flashbacks. they were so much fun, but writing the whole thing was bittersweet, coz it the first thing ive ever really finished!

Reviewer: igotbannedfroma2k
Date: 12/19/04 10:05
Chapter: Now It's Forever

I just can't help but rereading it over and over again. I can't explain why I like the ending. I just do. I like how it's all in the past until the end and then you bring us back to reality (sorta) and it then reminds you that they die like a year later (or however long it is...) it shocks you and I'm amazed that you write so good. My brother was watching me read it and kept seeing my reactions to everything in the story so he's gonna read it now (he's only 11, it's gonna be hard but he'll try his best...) okie. Keep up the good work and good luck on the sequel.

Author's Response: oh thank you! i've been tossing around the idea of letting my own brother read it (12) so now i have no excuse to not let him! i hope your brother enjoys it, and im so touched that you liked the ending. i havent read it all yet (i usually read them after i write them to get an idea of how to write the next chapters) so i must see. im so glad you liked everything :) stay tuned for part 2, but i unfortunately must think of a title before i post it up, and that will take a LONG time. my cousin and i toiled over "veiled revelations" and now i've got to do this next one. i hate titles...

Reviewer: horse_girl
Date: 12/19/04 9:06
Chapter: Now It's Forever

It's finished?! What do you mean, it's finished?! You better be writing a sequel otherwise I'll umm....throw rotten fruit. This is probably the best fanfic I've read. Loved it. What fanfics am I going to read now?! The last chapter ... "I just want to tell you that it has been an honor defying school rules." Lol, go Prongsy! That was great. And the ending...that was so sad, I was crying when I read it. And now it's over! :-( I'll be looking out for a sequel!

Author's Response: Sirius gasped. "ROTTEN FRUIT?!?! WHERE?!??!" thank you! i have to admit that i, too, loved the school rules line. iwas gonna think of something sentimental or whatever to write, but then i thought, "no, that's not like james at all. remember his quidditch speech?" (not repeated her as a result of dialogue ;) ) but i thought that was a bit of nice touch if i may be allowed to brag. but i am NOT proud. i just liked that line :)

Reviewer: Albus
Date: 12/19/04 6:19
Chapter: Now It's Forever

Omg, your story is sooo great, it's going to be hard reading about james and lily in the next harry potter books without thinking what happened in your story happened in JK's books. I cried at the end, your story was really well written, and the quote at the end really got me bawling, because lily and the mauderer's were all sad that they were leaving, but happy because of all the friends they had made and all the fun they had had, and then i know what will happen next, what with them all dying, and its so sad!!! You are a fantastic writer!

Author's Response: ahhh!!! thank you so much! this review almost put me in tears! oh that was so nice, and i feel a bit special to think i may have opened minds to the marauders past or what not. i dont know if that made sense, but THANK YOU!

Reviewer: Spiffy Draco
Date: 12/19/04 2:40
Chapter: Now It's Forever

God that was bloody amazing. I'll definitely look for your other works of art. I feel so emotional and empty right now. *sigh* That was bloody amazing, have I told you that?

Reviewer: Spiffy Draco
Date: 12/19/04 2:40
Chapter: Now It's Forever

God that was bloody amazing. I'll definitely look for your other works of art. I feel so emotional and empty right now. *sigh* That was bloody amazing, have I told you that?

Author's Response: ohhhhhhhhhh. :) :) :) that was nice! thank you!! :) :) :) i really dont think im deserving this all right now. e-mail JK and tell her what a fantastic writer she is for making up such wonderful characters!! (if only i COULD e-mail her.......)

Reviewer: harry luvs ginny
Date: 12/18/04 22:55
Chapter: Now It's Forever

What it's over? No it can't be over. Oh God. It's over. Oh God this is bad. I really realyl liked your fic A LOT and I want you to write lots more so that I can have good fics to read!

Author's Response: thank you!!! i promise i'll do my best, tho i dont know if id say my stuff was "good" so to speak. im thinking of writing the sequel (obviously) and maybe i'll do a couple of one shots afterwards, like sirius in azkaban (the whole fudge incident) and maybe when he escapes. i need more info on the wizarding world tho, coz it's tough. :(

Reviewer: Tap
Date: 12/18/04 22:39
Chapter: Now It's Forever


Author's Response: hopefully the sequel can compare ;)

Reviewer: aniki
Date: 12/18/04 22:17
Chapter: Now It's Forever

PS: that sentence at the top of your main page--"This story is completed"--blows my mind. *tear*

Author's Response: I KNOW!! i almost DIED when i looked at that!! i had to mark off the button on my controls, where it said "completed?" and then it said "no". and then i put "yes" and i was just like AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!! in total shock!

Reviewer: igotbannedfroma2k
Date: 12/18/04 21:50
Chapter: Now It's Forever

oh my effin god. That was amazing. Wow, I'm out of breath now. Especially the ending, with the quote from the future, bringing us back to reality, (sorta...) lo. Amazing. I'll look for you in the book store someday!

Author's Response: ahh thank you!! and im glad you thought that about the ending. that was my intention. :)

Reviewer: aniki
Date: 12/18/04 20:44
Chapter: Now It's Forever

sooo good. sooo wonderful. i am most proud, my love. *many pats on the back* i remember feeling the same thing when i graduated. but now i'm free and HAPPY! :) i can't wait for the next one! i am so happy your story made it this far!!

Author's Response: "now i', free and HAPPY!" i am USING that in the bloody sequel!!! you are hilarious, aniki! absolutely hilarious!!! ohhh i can just imagine sirius saying that!! Sirius: "saying what?" Me: "you'll see...."

Reviewer: PadfootLvsOn
Date: 12/18/04 20:05
Chapter: Now It's Forever

Oh my god that was absolutely amazing. I felt as if I were reading somethign JKR had written. wow I'm crying. I"m so sad to see this story come to an end and I would like a sequel more than anything! You've done a fantastic job and I can't congratulate you enough! Well done.

Author's Response: oh thank you! even saying "well done" is congratulations enough! im astounded at all of this! its absolutely wonderful! thank you for reading it!

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