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Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/07/11 13:37 · For: Now It's Forever
ughh my heart hurts :'(

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 17:58 · For: A Quick Recovery
yay he is awake

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 17:23 · For: Sirius Marauding
dun dun dun

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 15:38 · For: A Place to Bond
Where the hell are the toilets? oh sirius lol

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 15:38 · For: A Place to Bond
Where the hell are the toilets? oh sirius lol

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 15:29 · For: Always
yes !!!! i was waiting for that

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 14:44 · For: Of Stags and Lions
awww !!!!! i am waiting for a kiss so they better do it soon

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/06/11 13:34 · For: A Little Something New
awww perfect chapter

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 20:24 · For: The Cloak Strikes Back
close one

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 19:40 · For: Snape's Offer
hmm th dada teacher seems like she might have issues that are comical

Name: bibliophilebaby17 (Signed) · Date: 04/05/11 19:21 · For: Head Boy, Head Girl
that was sweet that he was nevous about beng headboy

Name: snoggedsenseless (Signed) · Date: 12/13/09 15:56 · For: Head Boy, Head Girl
cool,very good,gotta say.

Name: ProudMary10 (Signed) · Date: 07/11/08 1:44 · For: Now It's Forever
I must say that the last few chapters where an emotional rollercoaster for me... I loved the fighting scenes and I loved all of the flashbacks. And at the end you made me want to stay at Hogwarts and have the story continue. Thank you so much for posting this story! And now... I am on to the sequel!

Name: LoonyXBird (Signed) · Date: 07/05/08 0:28 · For: Now It's Forever
This is sooo good! I love it so much. It's one of the best Marauder tales I've ever read and I've read oh any where between a million and 2 million! =D

Name: lunarox14 (Signed) · Date: 05/30/08 17:49 · For: A Quick Recovery
Okay, so I was wrong about it being Bellatrix.. But at least I got the part about Meliflua being related to Sirius! In fact, I even got the cousin part right!

Name: lunarox14 (Signed) · Date: 05/30/08 17:34 · For: Sirius Marauding
HA! BACK TO MY ORIGINAL THEORY OF MELIFLUA! HA! THIS MEANS I COULD STILL BE RIGHT! YES! (sorry, i'm kinda hyper right now if you couldn't tell)

Name: lunarox14 (Signed) · Date: 05/30/08 16:38 · For: A Place to Bond
Oh. My God! Way to make me freakin' hyperventilate! I actually thought some of this was happening for a minute! Then I didn't and thought it was some kind of April Fools joke from Dumbledore but you made it seem so real! I've literally been sitting in this chair practically hyperventilating for the past five minutes! And oh my god, the spy is Bethany? I had thought through the entire story that if was Meliflua (or whatever her name is)! I actually thought that she was Bellatrix Lestrange in disguise and that's how she knew Sirius! Well, I still think that but can't find any more reasons why at the moment.

Name: Vira (Signed) · Date: 03/08/08 9:42 · For: Now It's Forever

Hi erikthephantom,

Amazing story! Soooo good!!

Name: JeeviS (Signed) · Date: 02/27/08 9:32 · For: Now It's Forever
actually its really a sad happy ending for james and lily... after that sirius... then finally for remus... but i didnt really feel sad when peter died... i mean if it wasnt for him james n lily would still be alive and harry would have his parents... but great story ... it was nice to read about the marauders!

Name: ix3thehpseries (Signed) · Date: 01/27/08 2:57 · For: Now It's Forever
I love this story. All of the characters are totally IC and I love how everything happened. There were so many twists and you handled them all totally well. I love how you have Lily and James get together, it was totally different from the whole 'she falls for him the day after they come back' thing. I also love Sirius and Remus. Sirius is so caring and Remus is just so...Remus. They're both totally IC. You characterized Peter amazingly as well. You didn't drop him or anything and I love how you got him to start being bad-ish. I loved how everything unfolded.


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