Reviews For Veiled Revelations
Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/07/11 13:37
Chapter: Now It's Forever

ughh my heart hurts :'(

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/06/11 17:58
Chapter: A Quick Recovery

yay he is awake

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/06/11 17:23
Chapter: Sirius Marauding

dun dun dun

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/06/11 15:38
Chapter: A Place to Bond

Where the hell are the toilets? oh sirius lol

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/06/11 15:38
Chapter: A Place to Bond

Where the hell are the toilets? oh sirius lol

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/06/11 15:29
Chapter: Always

yes !!!! i was waiting for that

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/06/11 14:44
Chapter: Of Stags and Lions

awww !!!!! i am waiting for a kiss so they better do it soon

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/06/11 13:34
Chapter: A Little Something New

awww perfect chapter

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/05/11 20:24
Chapter: The Cloak Strikes Back

close one

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/05/11 19:40
Chapter: Snape's Offer

hmm th dada teacher seems like she might have issues that are comical

Reviewer: bibliophilebaby17
Date: 04/05/11 19:21
Chapter: Head Boy, Head Girl

that was sweet that he was nevous about beng headboy

Reviewer: snoggedsenseless
Date: 12/13/09 15:56
Chapter: Head Boy, Head Girl

cool,very good,gotta say.

Reviewer: ProudMary10
Date: 07/11/08 1:44
Chapter: Now It's Forever

I must say that the last few chapters where an emotional rollercoaster for me... I loved the fighting scenes and I loved all of the flashbacks. And at the end you made me want to stay at Hogwarts and have the story continue. Thank you so much for posting this story! And now... I am on to the sequel!

Reviewer: LoonyXBird
Date: 07/05/08 0:28
Chapter: Now It's Forever

This is sooo good! I love it so much. It's one of the best Marauder tales I've ever read and I've read oh any where between a million and 2 million! =D

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/30/08 17:49
Chapter: A Quick Recovery

Okay, so I was wrong about it being Bellatrix.. But at least I got the part about Meliflua being related to Sirius! In fact, I even got the cousin part right!

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/30/08 17:34
Chapter: Sirius Marauding

HA! BACK TO MY ORIGINAL THEORY OF MELIFLUA! HA! THIS MEANS I COULD STILL BE RIGHT! YES! (sorry, i'm kinda hyper right now if you couldn't tell)

Reviewer: lunarox14
Date: 05/30/08 16:38
Chapter: A Place to Bond

Oh. My God! Way to make me freakin' hyperventilate! I actually thought some of this was happening for a minute! Then I didn't and thought it was some kind of April Fools joke from Dumbledore but you made it seem so real! I've literally been sitting in this chair practically hyperventilating for the past five minutes! And oh my god, the spy is Bethany? I had thought through the entire story that if was Meliflua (or whatever her name is)! I actually thought that she was Bellatrix Lestrange in disguise and that's how she knew Sirius! Well, I still think that but can't find any more reasons why at the moment.

Reviewer: Vira
Date: 03/08/08 9:42
Chapter: Now It's Forever


Hi erikthephantom,

Amazing story! Soooo good!!

Reviewer: JeeviS
Date: 02/27/08 9:32
Chapter: Now It's Forever

actually its really a sad happy ending for james and lily... after that sirius... then finally for remus... but i didnt really feel sad when peter died... i mean if it wasnt for him james n lily would still be alive and harry would have his parents... but great story ... it was nice to read about the marauders!

Reviewer: ix3thehpseries
Date: 01/27/08 2:57
Chapter: Now It's Forever

I love this story. All of the characters are totally IC and I love how everything happened. There were so many twists and you handled them all totally well. I love how you have Lily and James get together, it was totally different from the whole 'she falls for him the day after they come back' thing. I also love Sirius and Remus. Sirius is so caring and Remus is just so...Remus. They're both totally IC. You characterized Peter amazingly as well. You didn't drop him or anything and I love how you got him to start being bad-ish. I loved how everything unfolded.

-Jorie

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