Reviewer: ginny96
Date: 07/05/12 14:42
Chapter: Mentor

write more please. this is really intresting.
oh, and dont change the first chapter. its fine like that... in fact u could write more chaps from james POV. u dont see many of those.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 04/03/06 21:08
Chapter: Mentor

Hey are you still getting rejected? Well i hope you can solve it soon. We'll be waiting

Author's Response: Yes. I'm trying. i'm really sorry for such a long wait. I've probably re-written this chapter a bajillion times (slight exaggeration). I keep not getting emails like it says on the home page- hopefully when it's fixed everything will be good again.

Reviewer: Fiffer Haliwell
Date: 03/17/06 11:07
Chapter: Mentor

Hey i love the story. I now your trying to up date so i'll just be patient. good luck. btw are you sure you'r not a publishe author in desguise? Keep writing. 10/10

Author's Response: Thanks for your support! I've been rejected (again) for chapter four...I've even completely rewritten it so I'm getting extremely frustrated.

Reviewer: Crazy About Dan
Date: 02/19/06 7:40
Chapter: Mentor

Wow that is good. One way to get more reviews, which I am sure you want, is to actually write a summary. If you don't people aren't going to get hooked to read it. Also, I heard that you are having trouble getting it acceptted. You might want to try a beta. I am one and if you go into forums, you should be able to find me. I have the same name for both and I think that it may help you get your next chapter through.

Author's Response: haha thanks! I'm really not very good at writing a summary.. and I attempted to get a beta but when I registered it said that it would send me an email to activate my account... never happened! I was having trouble getting it accepted so I pretty much gave up.. (I actually had a beta at the time!) and then I picked up again... 4th chapter's been sent in (again) and I'm waiting for accepted/rejected

Reviewer: Winky
Date: 03/05/05 22:24
Chapter: Mentor

Seriously, how can u write so good? Your like a modern Shakespeare.... LOL... Anyway, keep it up.. and like everyone else says... Update Soon!! This is a masterpiece!!

Author's Response: Wow...thanks! You've made my day!! I'm trying to update but my fourth chapter keeps getting rejected but I'm not getting any emails explaining why...soo I'll just keep trying!

Reviewer: muggle4ever
Date: 03/05/05 12:01
Chapter: Mentor

update please

Author's Response: I'm trying!

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 03/01/05 9:57
Chapter: Mentor

bravo! very nice plot twist so far. buona fortuna con i vostri capitoli seguenti! (

Author's Response: Thank you! I have no idea what that last part means though!

Reviewer: Euphrosyne
Date: 02/26/05 20:59
Chapter: Mentor

-claps- This is a wonderful Fan-Fiction, keep writing I can't wait to see what happens!

Reviewer: theloniadia
Date: 02/26/05 19:25
Chapter: Back to Hogwarts

I like it! me 2 it's almost the same thing: like I don't like it so much when u travel from character to character but .....AT LEAST U DO IT WELL!!!!!!!!! So continue writing the story is good! I'd like to see how it turns out! It' s so cool!

Reviewer: missblack
Date: 02/26/05 16:59
Chapter: Mentor

woot!woot!well done!i like the way this story is shaping up to be!

Reviewer: rgfawkes
Date: 02/17/05 20:18
Chapter: Mentor

awesome please update soon!

Author's Response: just finished the next chapter!

Reviewer: Binks
Date: 01/21/05 18:56
Chapter: A shocking letter

I really like the fact that Lily has a fiery temper (us redheads are said to have one after all) and I like the fact that you have two seperate portraits in the HEads dorm. I really hate when they share a dorm together and they never write that they have their own passwords. Honestly, you'd think they would have more privacy in a Heads dorm but yours is nicely done. I want to hear more about "Ryan" and how Sirius would react and about Lily at the end of your story. Keep it at third person if you could. Also, please if you have time check out my AU Remus fic Letters from Heaven.

Reviewer: marauders_forever
Date: 01/21/05 17:52
Chapter: A shocking letter

GREAT! Please,I am DYING to know what Sirius is going to say about Ryan.and if Lily and James will finally get together.

Reviewer: ColorsOfTheWind
Date: 01/20/05 10:20
Chapter: A shocking letter

this is good so far, and the italian portrait, Mr. Mario? Lol, mario means 'husband' in Italian!

Author's Response: HAHA I did not know that! I merely thought of the first Italian sounding first name I could think of...I was in a bit of a time I should be more careful, eh?

Reviewer: jamesnLily4eva
Date: 01/19/05 17:25
Chapter: A shocking letter

i loved your story it was really good and descriptive please update soon!

Author's Response: waiting to be approved

Reviewer: prongs4evans
Date: 01/13/05 1:04
Chapter: A shocking letter

I liked ur story. plz read mine its called A Prongs for Evans. please read and review

Author's Response: will do!

Reviewer: bertty
Date: 01/11/05 8:55
Chapter: Back to Hogwarts

the story line is good so far ...... but i tend to like stories better when they're in third person more than being in first person and changing all the time from character to character. but that's just me and the way i was taught to write ......... but hey thats just me .............. sorry about that, but just think of it as a bit of constructive critisim ............ anywayz - update soon .................. don't get put off by me ........................ berty

Author's Response: Thats ok--I like constructive critisism--it only makes you better in the long run! This is actually the first time I've ever written anything outside of school and in first person that wasn't me as a character, so this is new for me. Bear with me here!

You must login (register) to review.
Find out everything you need to know about the site right here.

We have stories and authors in this archive.


Choose Theme:
People of the Goddess by Meadowsweet 3rd-5th Years
A retelling of Severus Snape's time as Headmaster, an account of Wizarding Britain...
My Bloody Valentine by Kerichi 6th-7th Years
Weasley girl meets vampire boy. Romance with a bite.
Epithalamium by Squibstress Professors
Minerva McGonagall is a bright, talented witch with dreams of becoming the first...
Twilit Confessions by ahattab33 3rd-5th Years
After returning from Australia with the Grangers, Ron realises the moment to...
Soul Sister by hestiajones 1st-2nd Years
Ted and Andromeda have just eloped. So, they dance. A songfic featuring...
Time and Tide by minnabird 6th-7th Years
Filius has seen her all his life: the Woman. She has been drifting through time...
Footprints in the Sand by Equinox Chick 6th-7th Years
It was a summer like any other for Danny. He worked at his parents' Bed and...
Consolation by Gmariam 3rd-5th Years
For years, Remus Lupin found comfort in the arms of Rosmerta Richardson...until...
Dangerous Liaisons by eternalangel 6th-7th Years
It was a dangerous game she was playing; Dorcas Meadowes knew it, but the exhilaration...