Reviews For Meant To Be
Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 20:48
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Howlers and Howlings

This fic just gets better and better. The depth of feeling in this chapter was immeasurable.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 19:43
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Through the Fireplace

I knew it! I knew she'd go to James. This chapter was wonderful, I actually felt comfortable reading it, as though i was there with the easy humour between James and Sirius and the all welcoming Mrs Potter and the beautiful things James said to Lily at the end there. It's so nice to see them communicating properly for once, I think it's perhaps because they weren't around a crowd. I guess at school Lily feels she has to act the same towards James as she always has and thats what got she and Marlene into such a pickle. If she'd got on with James from the begining of the year like she seemed to want, then there mightn't've been such a blow up. Anyway, excellent chapter, my favourite so far i think.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 19:23
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Christmas with the McKinnons

That was excellent, I thought the way you dealt with Lily's memories in her old home and the blackness taking her over was very real, grief does that. Anyway, I'm guessing she goes to James house. And I'm afraid I don't dislike Marlene as much as i thought, i mean she didn't know the full story did she? And perhaps she was only looking out for her brother, after all family comes first.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 19:06
Chapter: Chapter 10 - Wizard's Debt

Wow, what an ending, but I'm not sure that was the best thing for James to suggest. Oh well, quick painless and now they can forget it, or can they? I loved the sound of the dress robes, and Lily's memories. And the snow angels, it's sad, but once we get old we forget how magical it is being a kid.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 18:44
Chapter: Chapter 9 - Demons

I loved James teasing Lily over the ghosts, but i'm afraid she'll work out Remus is a werewolf. Also, I despise Petunia for that letter, how much worse can she get? I'm a little confused at Marlene's reaction to james comforting Lily, is she afraid he'll take advantage or something, or is it more to do with her brother? Perhaps if she knew the whole truth about 'that night', she'd be a little more forgiving. Oh, and great job with Sirius indignation at James' refusal to be involved in a prank, very IC.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 18:30
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Mick the Prick

I don't like Mick musch either, because he's getting in the way of james and Lily's friendship, if james lets his envy get the better of him he'll have gone one step forward and twenty steps back. Oh, and I don't blame him at all for leaving Snape tied up, he was going to walk away but Snape wouldn't let it go so he deserves everything he gets. I like Snape's character in canon, think he's quite a hero in the end, but that doesn't stop him being a git.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 18:10
Chapter: Chapter 7 -

Wow, I never thought Harry would be so much like his Father, James did divination and made up his homework too, oh wait, is that just common of most students? Anyway, I loved this chapter, and particularly Sirius asking out a girl who he'd two timed and been hexed by without knowing it. I loved the interaction between James and Lily, hope they keep becoming more friendly then she'll see he isn't as bad as she once thought. The ending was good, makes people wonder what happened on the way to divination.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 17:52
Chapter: Chapter 6 - Never to Return

It amazes me that Marlene didn't realise Lily would feel awful going back home. And what was Dumbledore thinking? Couldn't he have just sent someone else? I guess it's because some people aren't as affected by things, they handle things in diefferent ways, take my three brothers and I as an example, we all react completely differently, I cry, one gets angry, one is easy going and the other goes through phases of all three. I'm glad Lily took the parchment, it may come in handy again. And I think James is finally growing up and the others haven't quite caught on yet.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 17:41
Chapter: Chapter 5 - On being 'Okay'

Funny how when there aren't any drastic circumstances James and Lily donh't know how to communicate. Marlene seems a little overbearing, but thats always the case, quiet people pair up with loud people so as to balance one another out. It must be awful for Lily, I mean it's only been a few days and it mustn't feel real yet. Oh, and what do you mean you missed James' birthday, isn't it in March? Oh and i loved your disclaimer, very funny.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 17:28
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Feasting

I really enjoy transitionhal chapters myself, gives you time for all the events in the action packed chapters to sink in. And despite your hating composing sorting hat songs, this one came out rather well.

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 17:15
Chapter: Chapter 3 - 'One'

I love the holiday package idea, it really is true, necessity is the mother of invention. I bet loads of fic writers only come up with such ideas because they need a new way to travel or a spell for this or that, excellent! I love new magical gadgets, spells, creatures, anything really so hope there are more to come. Anyway, other than that this chapter was quite somber, and Dumbledore's last conversation gave me a rather ominous feeling, Could he be talking about a series of prophecies, or am i barking up the wrong tree? lets find out

Reviewer: Binka Fudge
Date: 05/29/08 16:56
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Angel on a broomstick

I'm extremely wound up from that chapter, my insides are writhing awfully. I loved the charmed parchment idea, such an original way to tell Lily she'd be working with James for the foreseable future. Came in very handy though didn't it? It's awful about Lily's parents, but she probably hadn't time to take it in. Just like the ministry to turn up late, you'd think they'd detect magic in an underage witch's house and send her a warning or something, quite useless aren't they>? No wonder Voldemort got as far as he did. It always amazes me why they never put a trace on the AK spell, it'd be easy to catch death eaters that way. Sorry, I'm rambling again, great fic.

Reviewer: bree_h
Date: 04/25/08 4:27
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Angel on a broomstick

the second chapter was even better thn the first. enough said.

Reviewer: bree_h
Date: 04/25/08 4:11
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Letter

I really like your story and ive only read the first chapter. im kinda picky about characterization, and yours is really good. i think the whole idea of the letter was clever, because it is true about the train thing.
Anyways, great job with your story basically :)

Reviewer: Trapezeartist
Date: 04/18/08 20:43
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste

I really liked this last fighting scene. Can't wait to read what's going to happen next!

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 03/21/08 16:28
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste

Please update!
This chapie was so wonderful!
LOVE the story so fare! And may i say again!
This story ROCKS like SOCKS!!!!!!!! :D :P

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 03/21/08 16:16
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Howlers and Howlings

oh i bet his dad is dead!

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 03/21/08 15:43
Chapter: Chapter 11 - Christmas with the McKinnons

oh i hate marlene!Lovely name!Terribel person!or witch!
anyway so much emotion put into this chapie!LOVE IT!

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 03/21/08 15:24
Chapter: Chapter 8 - Mick the Prick

ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!
He so cares that lily gose out wiv
mick the prick

Reviewer: aries1996
Date: 03/21/08 15:13
Chapter: Chapter 7 -

Dude why was she late?????
Also do you watch scrubs?

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