Reviewer: lovegoodfan
Date: 07/16/06 16:50
Chapter: Chapter 5 - On being 'Okay'
your doing a great job on this story!
Reviewer: lovegoodfan
Date: 07/16/06 16:46
Chapter: Chapter 4 - Feasting
nice touch to the story
Reviewer: lovegoodfan
Date: 07/16/06 16:38
Chapter: Chapter 3 - 'One'
i like the first step to ' thrice defying' in the prophecy
Reviewer: lovegoodfan
Date: 07/16/06 16:29
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Angel on a broomstick
really good plot twist
Reviewer: lovegoodfan
Date: 07/16/06 16:22
Chapter: Chapter 1 - The Letter
i can't say much since your just starting, but so far it looks good!
Reviewer: Iwishiwern Tamuggle
Date: 07/14/06 16:18
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
awe, i like it, update soon!
Reviewer: brighteyes
Date: 07/08/06 10:10
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: lilyevans91
Date: 07/06/06 14:00
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
this is really good! it's always got something going on and it's very well written and realistic. good job, i can't wait for the next chapter!
Reviewer: IluvDanRad4ever
Date: 06/30/06 17:27
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
UPDATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Reviewer: finniganroxmysox
Date: 06/29/06 10:24
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
I loved this chapter!!! PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!
Reviewer: wildmagic
Date: 06/28/06 22:05
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
i would have killed marlene by taht time
mick is totally right she is in love with james she is so confusing at the end she said no !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
that does not make sense unless shes just scared or pissed offf at him for what he did at the party
well wtvr write more soon
Reviewer: The_Dark_Lord
Date: 06/28/06 15:46
Chapter: Chapter 2 - Angel on a broomstick
Mr. & Mrs. Evans Dead NOOOOOO
To Bad Petunia Wasnt there
Good story
Reviewer: HermioneRules
Date: 06/24/06 13:26
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
This chapter was AMAZING! I HATE MARLENE!!! I would have punched her so hard! Update sooon pppllllleaseee!!!!!!
Reviewer: HermioneRules
Date: 06/24/06 13:00
Chapter: Chapter 13 ½ - An Unwelcome Query
Terrible short!!!!! Insanly short! But at the same time, insanly amazing.
Reviewer: HermioneRules
Date: 06/24/06 12:54
Chapter: Chapter 13 - Howlers and Howlings
Wow. This is amazing. The last chapter was the last one i had read of this story before i left and i love coming back to new chapters of a story that i actually understand the plot of. Especially since this one is sooo amazing.
Reviewer: HermioneRules
Date: 06/24/06 12:25
Chapter: Chapter 12 - Through the Fireplace
Oh do i love this story. I just recently came back to mugglenet because i now despise HPFF and i found this on my favorites list! And i remember how good it was!!! Yay!
Reviewer: heartsdesire456
Date: 06/23/06 23:58
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
that was kewl... i still think you need to work on the length. this one was long enough, but it wasn't action long. i can't explain it... you give us short to mid-length chapters that are action packed and then we get long ass chapters that dont have much. but this one was better than before so i'm decently happy. UPDATE SOON!
Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 06/20/06 15:35
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
i was wondering,...when my favorite qoute comes along..
"What can I say?" James shrugged his shoulders. "We are just obviously,"
"Completely,"
"Irrefutably,"
"Logically,"
"Undeniably,"
"Unfortunately,"
James laughed, "Meant to be."
Reviewer: ginnyp_harryp
Date: 06/17/06 21:49
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
ok now this was a very very sad chapter and you better update fast so Lily and James can get together!!
Reviewer: PottersFire
Date: 06/13/06 17:09
Chapter: Chapter 14 - Time to Waste
Awesome, awesome, awesome, awesome! That was SO good! Please next chapter sooon!
